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by bhtooefr
Mon Feb 24, 2014 3:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 162169

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Anniversary Oneshot Added 2/24]

It's also basically stating that she's a (functional) alcoholic by that point, to the point of drinking multiple bottles of wine right before a performance.

I'm wondering if her drinking habit becomes a main conflict point between her and Hisao...
by bhtooefr
Mon Feb 24, 2014 1:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 162169

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Anniversary Oneshot Added 2/24]

Wait, is that actually meant to be a canon epilogue to this route, or is it meant to be off of Rin's route?

Because if it's an epilogue, that's pretty damn sad... :cry:
by bhtooefr
Mon Feb 24, 2014 9:01 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which ending(s) do you consider the worst?
Replies: 175
Views: 43357

Re: Which ending(s) do you consider the worst?

No, worst ending is when someone finishes one route's good ending, and then doesn't even go back and play the bad ending because they don't want to see their waifu hurt. It's even worse if they do it with Hanako's route.
by bhtooefr
Sun Feb 23, 2014 8:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Best Case Scenario
Replies: 10
Views: 4227

Re: Best Case Scenario

I don't know why I'm remembering this right now, but when we were told I was epileptic, Manatsu mentioned something about her cousin, Inoue, or something like that, was epileptic, and went to someplace called Yamaku, a school for disabled people, or something. I see what you did there. After starin...
by bhtooefr
Sun Feb 23, 2014 3:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332251

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2/23/2014}

On a side note, I briefly mentioned somewhere on these boards that I read Ménage à 3 , and the way Iwanako described Lilly immediately brought to mind Zii's image of Didi. Now there's a connection I never would have made on my own... Wait, if Iwanako is Zii, who does that make Hanako? Yuki or Sonya...
by bhtooefr
Sun Feb 23, 2014 11:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573193

Re: Yamaku Book Club

Then again, I'm of the opinion that the best ending of Rikabro's Rika route was the neutral ending, and they do break up there . (The bad ending was legitimately bad, but the good ending wasn't good IMO .) There's a few other angles one could take things, for Miki... who says it has to be a Miki x H...
by bhtooefr
Sun Feb 23, 2014 10:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: ...It Costs An Arm And A Leg!
Replies: 41
Views: 10995

Re: ...It Costs An Arm And A Leg!

In this case, though, it's written in third person (but biased towards Hisao's POV, not Maru's), so...
by bhtooefr
Sun Feb 23, 2014 10:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: ...It Costs An Arm And A Leg!
Replies: 41
Views: 10995

Re: ...It Costs An Arm And A Leg!

Armchair Legend wrote:The newcomer's bluish-green eyes met the young man's blue eyes.
Since when did Hisao have blue eyes?
by bhtooefr
Sun Feb 23, 2014 10:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332251

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2/23/2014}

Something did feel vaguely off about that chapter, but I can't put my finger on what it was, to be honest. Actually, I think I'm noticing that Hanako seems to be a little too at-ease with Iwanako - this feels like Act 3 Hanako, not Act 1 Hanako. Yes, I'm expecting someone more at ease with her than ...
by bhtooefr
Sat Feb 22, 2014 8:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 02/21/14 ~ C.44 - Sojourn

Being capitalized, it almost makes me think it's referring to a specific model of car, the Lincoln Town Car: https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/7/74/Lincoln_Town_Car_--_01-28-2010.jpg/640px-Lincoln_Town_Car_--_01-28-2010.jpg Common for luxury taxi service and (due to their body on ...
by bhtooefr
Fri Feb 21, 2014 5:17 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which ending(s) do you consider the worst?
Replies: 175
Views: 43357

Re: Which ending(s) do you consider the worst?

Besides, there's an implication that he's dating (or maybe just having casual sex with) Meiko.
by bhtooefr
Thu Feb 20, 2014 10:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)
Replies: 46
Views: 15924

Re: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)

The fourth ending that I thought of is actually a better ending than that, overall, although not for Hanako.

And it's worse in a narrative sense.
by bhtooefr
Thu Feb 20, 2014 9:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)
Replies: 46
Views: 15924

Re: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)

I've actually already got four predictions of how this is going to end.

All of them end with Hanako dead, and three of them end with Lilly being her last victim (they're variations on how Hanako dies).

I'm hoping it's not the fourth, because that would be a cheap way to end the story.
by bhtooefr
Thu Feb 20, 2014 8:08 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which ending(s) do you consider the worst?
Replies: 175
Views: 43357

Re: Which ending(s) do you consider the worst?

Not only that, but this is regarding a fiction where authors have explicitly said that word of author is not to be trusted.
by bhtooefr
Thu Feb 20, 2014 7:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)
Replies: 46
Views: 15924

Re: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)

Suzu, not Suzi.

And that is impressively fast, Hanako going from being a witness to an accidental death, to being a cold-blooded murderer.