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by bhtooefr
Thu Jul 10, 2014 6:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 7/10)

When Hisato had settled down, they hopped off, and we didn’t get off until we were deep within a more modern section of the city, with skyscrapers and shops mixing with vender’s carts and wagons. Vendor is the usual form of that word, although vender isn't wrong per se. Also, I'd go for vendors', n...
by bhtooefr
Thu Jul 10, 2014 3:20 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Birthday!
Replies: 927
Views: 227563

Re: Birthday!

During Act 1?

Act 1 was released in 2009, for what it's worth.
by bhtooefr
Thu Jul 10, 2014 7:01 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Birthday!
Replies: 927
Views: 227563

Re: Birthday!

You actually can rent a car before 25, it just costs.

A lot.
by bhtooefr
Thu Jul 10, 2014 6:26 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Birthday!
Replies: 927
Views: 227563

Re: Birthday!

If that was in reply to my post, I realized I was a year early for my post, and deleted it.
by bhtooefr
Wed Jul 09, 2014 5:12 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favourite artworks - reprise.
Replies: 4044
Views: 968195

Re: Favourite artworks - reprise.

Really, that would work so well as a SMW ROMhack.

(Not sure how the sprites are encoded in SMW, though, and the Boo sprites would be tricky with the long hair...
by bhtooefr
Mon Jul 07, 2014 7:26 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favourite artworks - reprise.
Replies: 4044
Views: 968195

Re: Favourite artworks - reprise.

What the actual fuck @ the earlier image.
by bhtooefr
Mon Jul 07, 2014 12:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565903

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 45 up 7/

Being understanding and wanting what's best for Hisao over their own desires, and being able to cope with that, doesn't mean that the one that doesn't win (assuming either wins... and why flesh out Noriko the extent that she's been fleshed out?) won't have their heart broken.
by bhtooefr
Sun Jul 06, 2014 10:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573190

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Mendācium)

...idea... While a different story, it would be far more reasonable, and in character. Thinking on it some more, I think it would be possible to do a cheating Hanako story and keep everyone basically in character. I would require three elements that Mendacium does not however. First, it would need ...
by bhtooefr
Sun Jul 06, 2014 5:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565903

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 45 up 7/

The overlap really did get to be a bit much in this chapter, to be honest, especially considering that Hanako and Emi jointly realizing that they shared the same anxieties - the main reason to overlap that like that - was already revealed in the previous chapter.
by bhtooefr
Sat Jul 05, 2014 11:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565903

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 45 up 7/

Oh shit. :shock:

I... could easily see Lilly using permanent solutions at this point, too. (And I've written Lilly attempting such a solution after finding herself in a very similar situation, but in Scotland, after Misstep.)
by bhtooefr
Sat Jul 05, 2014 3:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573190

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Mendācium)

And, on this one, discussion started before the official start of the meeting, so...
by bhtooefr
Sat Jul 05, 2014 2:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573190

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Mendācium)

Found the story: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9429267/1/American-Displacement-Disorder I recall seeing it before and decided it wasn't worth my time, when I saw the synopsis. And the poster is an American that writes Call of Duty fanfic. Yeah, he knows what Adolf means. Edit: Oh god, there's twenty ...
by bhtooefr
Sat Jul 05, 2014 12:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573190

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Mendācium)

In conclusion, we have an ambitious effort which ended up somewhere in the ballpark of "mediocre" and "kinda bad," but, because of who and what it dealt with, has ballooned into a reputation more deserving of a fic where Hanako falls in love with an author self-insert who also happens to be the rei...
by bhtooefr
Thu Jul 03, 2014 6:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573190

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Mendācium)

Oh god I forgot about that whole stunt he had Hanako pull, re: hating everyone for being katawas, and being associated with them. Ugh. You'd think she'd be the last person to have that mindset.
by bhtooefr
Thu Jul 03, 2014 6:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573190

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Mendācium)

Are we discussing it early? Looks like we're discussing it early. One question is whether you think Hanako can be a sinner, not just whether Hisao can be a saint. I actually believe that the core premise - the idea of Hanako cheating on Hisao, and them dealing with the aftermath - is possible (and I...