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I'm actually giving myself the challenge of avoiding any H for this. Mainly because I know I'll butcher any H that I try. Also, something to think about re: that ship... Akira came to Hanako's birthday party, and not her own sister's. Yes, she might've been too busy, but this is fanfic, so I can bre...

I actually had a way for it to not seem quite that skeevy, if I started it during the VN. (Namely, Hanako being so skittish around Hisao partially because she's not sure if she's attracted to him or Akira... and when he goes for Lilly, the decision's made for her, and Hanako becomes the predator (in...

I was mainly exploring whether the attraction could be there, with that, and used that scene in the VN because it had some suspicious elements that could be taken very differently from how they were originally intended, even if it didn't give me the opportunity to address the issues with such a rela...

Really, I wanted to explore the possibility of Hanako x Akira. Nobody's tried it AFAIK. (This actually started out as Hanako x Akira being concurrent with Lilly's route, but too many things didn't line up for them actually being together.)

Here goes nothing. Consider this another experiment. It's Akira POV of Pajamas and Suits, with a twist (don't worry, no self-inserting as a canon VN character like my last twist), so if you don't like fics that exactly follow actual VN dialogue and events, well, that's what this is, so... I've gott...

Part 2: "Can I borrowed a towel?" I can hear him hanging his clothes over the radiator. borrow Part 6: My thoughts of the phone call with Akria Akira Right now I need to get a hold of my chaperon chaperone And what's with this already had a ticket shanagins ? shenanigans Anyway, this is interesting....

And, this story can't even use the excuse of Shizune having seen the pill bottles, because that scene only happened after you've ruled out Lilly's route in Act 1.

Oh god I never even noticed that. I only ever got the chance to read partway into Hitchhiker's Guide To The Galaxy and I always read it as perfect. I'll go back and fix that if I can remember what chapter it appears in. 3-4, right? Found an instance of it in Act 3 part 2-2: There’s no way I could f...

This is gonna end well. I can just see it.

Master of Romance indeed.

See, I interpreted that as her mom being incapable of embarrassing her.

As in, cemetery scene.

It did say rate, not rank, so I went with 4.

I'd suggest going for something in between these one-paragraph things, whatever they are, and a full route, at least until you're more comfortable writing something longer. Otherwise, you're likely to get frustrated and either rush things, or give up. And, nobody's ever actually completed a Miki rou...

I math real good.

6x3, not 6x2. So, yeah.

I'm not really sure why this even was an issue. I would be very surprised if a school the size of Yamaku had only one English teacher... Actually, how big IS Yamaku? Let's assume 4 classrooms per year... a capacity of 12 students per class means a capacity of 144 students. I was in a special school...

Personally, I treat it as, three "tiers" of canon, with variations between them. The first tier is the "true canon" tier. What is explicitly stated in the VN or on the website character sheets is absolute canon. The only thing that can contradict it is itself. (And contradict itself it does, in a co...