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by bhtooefr
Wed Nov 20, 2013 6:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 915
Views: 597562

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 11/20]

Now I'm wondering how Mr. Satou will interact with Lilly. And, Hanako could have an interesting part to play, too, because she's not going to take Lilly being dragged away well, and this is all happening in person, not over the phone, and in Japan, not Scotland. And she knows about it this time. “He...
by bhtooefr
Tue Nov 19, 2013 6:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special

A sixteen year old (read: high school age) girl that needs friends, needs to catch up with her education, and her primary ailments are physical (with a heavy side of PTSD)? And she even reminds Kenji of Hanako? And the Hakamichi family is already involved? Why do I think she's not going to the psych...
by bhtooefr
Sun Nov 17, 2013 8:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Taxi ride to nowhere
Replies: 34
Views: 13154

Re: Taxi ride to nowhere

I like this.

I mean, it's depressing, but it's a realistic take on how both Hanako and Hisao would act.

And it hurts, because I've been in Hanako's shoes.
by bhtooefr
Sun Nov 17, 2013 7:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iron Oxide (Abandoned)
Replies: 16
Views: 6377

Re: Iron Oxide (Ch. 1, 2013-11-17)

Eh, that's just my thing, it seems. I never link my notes in the chapter navigation, so there is that. Edit: Changed one word in Chapter 1, from "house" to "home". Hanako thinks of it as home, but it's not a house, it's an apartment. Which is a detail I planned on changing, and forgot to actually ed...
by bhtooefr
Sun Nov 17, 2013 6:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iron Oxide (Abandoned)
Replies: 16
Views: 6377

Re: Iron Oxide (Ch. 1, 2013-11-17)

All I'll say in that regard is... while sometimes destruction can be bad, it can also allow rebuilding something stronger in its place.

Oh, and I don't see any reason to involve character death or physical abuse in this one. Hell, I don't like my own ending in Like Fire and Powder.
by bhtooefr
Sun Nov 17, 2013 5:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iron Oxide (Abandoned)
Replies: 16
Views: 6377

Re: Iron Oxide (Ch. 1, 2013-11-17)

Some notes: Chapter release schedule is going to be excruciatingly slow. I want to get this right. I won't promise a schedule, but I'm going incredibly fast if I do more than one chapter a week. The title is a reference to three different characters (in just two words, I know). Two of them are alrea...
by bhtooefr
Sun Nov 17, 2013 5:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iron Oxide (Abandoned)
Replies: 16
Views: 6377

Chapter 1 - Catalyst (v1.01)

The door to our home slams shut, and silence falls. Is this how our relationship is going to go for the rest of our lives? Some tiny issue blows up into a big argument, one of us says things that we don't really mean, then the other storms out. This time, I said some horrible things to Hisao, and he...
by bhtooefr
Sun Nov 17, 2013 5:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iron Oxide (Abandoned)
Replies: 16
Views: 6377

Iron Oxide (Abandoned)

Oxides of iron are extremely useful substances. They are used to store information. They are used as pigments. They are used for polishing. One of them is even medically useful. However, oxidation of iron can also be destructive. NekoDude gets an editing credit for this, for what it's worth. He's h...
by bhtooefr
Sun Nov 17, 2013 11:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!
Replies: 95
Views: 36013

Re: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!

That's a little dark, why would this put you off? You could psychologically analyze this was her way of coping with loss, but It didn't seem to impair her day-to-day and she had her whole family supporting her. What exactly put you off? And she was in a delusional state, and barely functional (it o...
by bhtooefr
Sat Nov 16, 2013 9:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!
Replies: 95
Views: 36013

Re: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!

Since someone necroed this... I'll go ahead and post here. It was a while ago that I first read this stuff, though. That Guy, I fucking hate you. In a good way. I think. Your Emi epilogue made me hate Emi (let's just say I have a specific anxiety that her actions triggered, I've talked about it in H...
by bhtooefr
Sat Nov 16, 2013 4:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565855

Re: Developments, Chapter 25 (Notes at end)

Isn't that rather normal, though? You know, I noticed that, and decided not to comment on it, because Lilly does use figures of speech like that, and openly tells people to continue using them if they use them and then realize that she can't do that. And, the Eminako series forms part of my headcan...
by bhtooefr
Sat Nov 16, 2013 5:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565855

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 25 up 11/15]

And actually, that's where I could see the Hanako route being ruled out - if Lilly follows through with the plan to go back to Yamaku, getting with Hanako will probably be perceived as white knighting no matter what. I'll stop speculating, though, my thoughts have been half-baked every time I post, ...
by bhtooefr
Fri Nov 15, 2013 9:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565855

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 25 up 11/15]

Hrm, I'm not sure why I said it'd be OOC. I wrote up my reasoning, but then didn't post it to avoid speculating too much. He could do it, but it does feel a bit dick moveish, like twisting the knife in both Lilly and Hanako, knowing full well what's happened with both of them. But, really, that migh...
by bhtooefr
Fri Nov 15, 2013 5:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565855

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 25 up 11/15]

http://www.reactiongifs.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/10/daaaamn.gif I mean, seriously, damn . I'm actually not sure where to begin commenting, other than to call you a magnificent bastard, dewelar. And Akira is a stone cold badass. Talk about an armor-piercing question there. I think I'll avoid spec...
by bhtooefr
Thu Nov 14, 2013 11:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
Replies: 107
Views: 35637

Re: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread

That setup could actually work... but reverses the relationship dynamic from what I want it to be.

And I need Hisao alive for a few scenes. Possibly the entire story depending on how it flows.