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You changed your character's name, but missed it there.

Diachi tilts his head before asking, “What’s up Akira? Did you forget something?” You forgot something. ;) Also, try to be consistent in how you order names. I don't personally have a preference, but pick one and use it. Remember that everyone in your story is thinking in Japanese, so they're all t...

I actually had half a mind to write something where Hanako was a KS writer (maybe even writing her own route), but decided that I'm not in the right position to do that.

I may have also tried to make it so Hanako was the artist of the infamous chocolate comic, but decided against that. Way too OOC.

I really don't think fanfic has to have the same moral as the game to be appropriate, or even good. Fanfic just has to incorporate elements of the original work - the characters or setting. And, it has to do that in a believable way. Otherwise, IMO, it's fair game. Now, including the morals may well...

Mind you, I've actually been in that headspace, of not wanting to leave a romantic interest even though it was unhealthy. I at least had the option of quitting my job to get out of the situation once it became clear that this wasn't going anywhere good. And I had friends online. Although, I nearly s...

And after a second read...

Does it make me a bad person to hope that neither Hanako and Emi get with Hisao, just so that they end up exploring that possible friendship?

And Lilly coming back really is going to throw a wrench into everything in this story.

Heh. I wondered if she was going to invite him with her on the trip.

“You’re transition to the weekly injections?” I guessed.

And another of your favorites.

Or is that you're?

More fluff than a cotton candy factory.

Interesting role reversal between Hanako and Emi there, near the end.

That was said to be an error, though. Although removing that scene would require some significant changes.

As it is now, the best interpretation is, Lilly decided to come back. Maybe Hanako had a setback or something. Maybe Lilly's family turned out to be horrible.

Hell, I think a Hanako x Hisao x Akira threesome would be healthier Whoa. Kinda weird from Akira's point of view. Can you imagine being 25 (well out of college) and involved with two 18-year-olds (high school seniors)? I didn't say it would happen during the events of the VN... And even if it did, ...

Bluetooth keyboard. You can get quite good ones nowadays. Or use the Camera Connection Kit with a USB keyboard. I've seen some hilarious examples of IBM terminal keyboards (122 keys, 9.3 pounds) converted to USB and then interfaced to iPads and iPhones that way. (I usually do my writing either on an...

blond Blonde. One of the few gendered words in the English language. infact in fact then Naomi chimes in,"Yep! I'm coming!" Needs a space. Also, as far as things being fast, there's always TheHivemind's comment (probably trolling) that all the girls except Rin wanted to ride Hisao on the first day.

The more I think about that threesome, the less healthy I think it is. However, I think doing it off of Hanako's good end, and it being Hanako's idea is the way that has the biggest chance for success (as a relationship, not a story). And even then it's tough. For it to be a successful relationship,...