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The following post was written in response to Stiles Long's writing contest. Each participant was given a list of KS character pairings and a list of locations. One of each was chosen for this fic. There were a limited set of options available to participants in the contest and it may be that this ...

If there's a difference that makes it OOC, it's probably that here it happens so fast (on literally their first day of knowing each other), as opposed to the sex scenes in-game obviously coming after he and the girls have been talking for a while. That strikes me as a really huge difference. But Hi...

I'll just respond to that response by saying that I hadn't considered that angle at all, and I certainly should have. Having now considered it, I'd be inclined to agree with your observation that it could be considered a trait of Hisao's.

So I'm going to preface my thoughts on this story with a few qualifiers: 1) I really love what you've done with this story. A huge portion of that is thanks to the technical ability of your writing. There are some prominent examples I could rattle off, but the consistency in quality makes that moot....

Entropy PT2 After lunch, the five of us trudged back to class and resumed our seats. Suzu resumed her napping, or fake napping or whatever she’s doing, and Lezard resumed his book. Even Shizune looks distracted. Thankfully, this afternoon’s classes are both science subjects, Chemistry and Physics t...

Act 2: Constants and Variables Entropy PT1 Is that the light at the far end of the tunnel, or just the train? After the excitement of the festival closing ceremony, and a bit of idle chatter that only served to highlight how tired everyone was, our ragtag group retired into our dorm rooms for the n...

Certainly a bit of a fluff and certainly giggle worthy. I thoroughly enjoyed that little romp. It's a nice change of pace from some of the intense stuff we tend to enjoy on this forum. Misha was very... Misha. And Emi's little prank at the end felt very Emi. Good job as usual Lap. Nice to have a bit...

I’m not sure what purpose this serves or who this is for. The title seems like bait, and considering your attitude in the discord server, that seems to be accurate. As for the writing, it’s quite clear what you’re doing. The language is over the top and doesn’t make much sense. The style can work, b...

You know I love your writing Lap, so I won’t gush about that aspect of the fic. I found this incredibly fun, one line in particular send me cascading with laughter and I’m sure you know which. Your Miki is outrageous, but very recognisable. Yuuko is... interesting, but as I’ve seen oddball once say,...

A lovely update and well worth the wait. It's nice to see Hisao and Shizune more willing to adopt a sensitive, albeit long-term, approach to resolving the conflict with Hisao's mother. Mai's parents seem like a fantastic addition, and Mai herself is equally a strong character. Good job Lap!

Blueshift PT3 After a few days of relative boredom, the festival has finally arrived, and I can’t help but be relieved. It’s even prettier than I thought it would be; lights stretch out in canopies between stalls and dance like ballerinas in the gentle breeze. It’s not dark enough for them to be on...

Blueshift PT2 The festival preparation has picked up new speed in the last two days, and it’s getting increasingly hard to find any space to finish my work in the common room. I’ll admit, I’m a bit envious of the first years, and their excitement is proving contagious. Last year I had student counc...

Act 1 Blueshift PT1 “I wasn’t, not that it matters!” Taro protests, trying to remain composed despite his embarrassment. The seriousness of his attempt, and Suzu’s playfully crossed arms, force me to suppress a laugh. In all honesty, I don’t think Taro even paid any attention to the girl we’re accu...

We really have come a long way since this started huh? I’m staring to think you might be incapable of sticking to the original plan Lap :lol: Anyway, whilst I’m in exam season I haven’t been able to have particularly deep readings, but I can at least comment and say how refreshing it is to see Hisao...

I really like where this is heading. Although, I'd have to agree with Oddball's concerns that Misaki's politeness bordered on the robotic. In fact, I actually found myself concerned that Hisao was echoing that formality. Whilst for the most part, Hisao and Misaki's conversations resembled a conversa...