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by TheGoatman
Sun Sep 15, 2013 11:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Living (Rin Route)
Replies: 96
Views: 21610

Re: Living: Rin's Route, Part 5 - A moment of fruit eating.

Was the -can- meant to be -can't- or just sarcasm? Missing a -her- between let and become. Great chapter Lloyd! Neither. I think I failed to convey a pause between his conclusion that Rin is a capable human being, and his decision to help her. Ah, alright then. Very good story Lloyd, love the OC x ...
by TheGoatman
Sun Sep 15, 2013 6:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 180962

Re: The great fan fiction archive

Road to Tokyo is finished, status in the archive says it's still ongoing.
by TheGoatman
Sun Sep 15, 2013 5:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Living (Rin Route)
Replies: 96
Views: 21610

Re: Living: Rin's Route, Part 5 - A moment of fruit eating.

Whatever. I turn to leave. I can’t just leave her here, can I? If there’s one thing I’ve learnt about Rin, it’s that she can take of herself. Oh, God damn it. Shit, how am I meant to get her inside? This just keeps getting better and better. I should have left her on the roof, and let become a Rins...
by TheGoatman
Fri Sep 06, 2013 2:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Living (Rin Route)
Replies: 96
Views: 21610

Re: Living: Rin's Route, Part 4 - ...and beautiful feet.

Rin maneuvers to an upright position, looking across to the food on the table. Hang on, how’s she going to eat? Don’t tell me I have to feed her too. God damn it Emi. Missing an enter here, not required but it looks nicer to OCD people Too my amazement, in one practiced movement, Rin moves her bare...
by TheGoatman
Thu Sep 05, 2013 11:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 60244

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!

Oddly enough, the only other unusual proposal that I can remember also involved Hanako. Hisao proposed to her wearing nothing but a towel. Here you go The 4 part Hanako Epilogue by MEHKANIK, I like to consider it a 3 part sequel and an epilogue though. Warning: Do not read part 4 if you don't want ...
by TheGoatman
Mon Sep 02, 2013 2:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 180962

Re: The great fan fiction archive

Mirage_GSM wrote:Sadly a Mary Sue-warning would amount to a valuaion, which is not allowed...
If you simply discount all OC fics out of hand, you'll miss a few very good ones.
Pardon my ignorance, but what is a mary sue fic?
by TheGoatman
Mon Sep 02, 2013 12:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family
Replies: 38
Views: 19123

Re: Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family

Reading this directly after the Akira Pseudo route was not the brightest of ideas.
by TheGoatman
Fri Aug 30, 2013 10:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Zombies - Updated 17/12/13
Replies: 80
Views: 14024

Re: Zombies

>Using Word >Why not just use SatanicProcessorWhoEatsKittens.lcf More seriously, the formatting of Word and Google docs is... not very compatible with the forums' BBcode formatting. You're in for a lot of headaches if you expect to port things straight. What kind of format is compatible, and how ca...
by TheGoatman
Fri Aug 30, 2013 9:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Goatman Tales: Goatie goes to ( ? )
Replies: 4
Views: 1394

Re: Goatman Tales! Poor mail handling!

Any reason you didn't read Lilly's and Hanako's routes? I'd say they're pretty good reading material. It's kinda difficult to point things out that seem to clash with the way the VN handles them. Other than the fact Hanako's birthday is on the 10th and Akira's probably 30 years too young to be a CF...
by TheGoatman
Thu Aug 29, 2013 11:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Goatman Tales: Goatie goes to ( ? )
Replies: 4
Views: 1394

Goatman Tales: Goatie goes to ( ? )

Removed. Will repost when story is completely finished.
by TheGoatman
Wed Aug 28, 2013 4:38 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4966
Views: 975370

Re: Ask!

I had planned on posting the fan fic in the fan fiction thread, seems like the best place to get views and feedback for a Katawa Shoujo fan fiction. If I want to post it on these forums, should I change it so that it follows the release route instead?
by TheGoatman
Wed Aug 28, 2013 4:09 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4966
Views: 975370

Re: Ask!

I'm attempting to write a fan fiction(Hanako - Epilogue of sorts), but it follows the good ending of the Hanako route from Alpha. If we can't talk about Alpha does that mean I can't go after the Alpha ending for my fan fiction?