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by TheGoatman
Sat Oct 26, 2013 5:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13
Replies: 51
Views: 12117

Re: A Molly route. Update 26/10/13

Something like "As the great hundred tun mountain of steel barreled towards me in an unstoppable rush of destruction, I knew escape was not possible. A strange calm fell over me as I gently laid down on the road, feeling the cool asphalt caressing my cheek as if saying a final goodbye. I looked up t...
by TheGoatman
Thu Oct 24, 2013 12:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
Replies: 107
Views: 22689

Re: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread

The better one shots I've read tend to be in the range of 1000-2000 words, usually if they get any longer they start coming in parts. These don't seem to be one shots to me, but quotes or extremely short summaries that would be used as the basis of a larger plot.
by TheGoatman
Wed Oct 23, 2013 5:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
Replies: 107
Views: 22689

Re: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread

I feel like I may have failed KS with this question - but who is Miyagi?
by TheGoatman
Wed Oct 23, 2013 4:55 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Blooper Reel
Replies: 1318
Views: 319670

Re: Blooper Reel

http://img2.imageshack.us/img2/1222/ss541.jpg This is most likely the worst necro of all time, but I can't stop laughing at this, WHY?!?!?!? So I'm not the only one who looked through a 3-4 year old post and wanted to necro it just to reply to that, good, this is good. I so want to get a job as a t...
by TheGoatman
Wed Oct 23, 2013 3:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13
Replies: 51
Views: 12117

Re: A Molly route.

Well, I love the concept as it's certainly original, but if you don't mind me saying, I think you should slow down(alot) and possibly take a walk the opposite direction. What scene is this, where is this, how do they know each other, how did they get there, why do they have that cliche "I like you a...
by TheGoatman
Tue Oct 22, 2013 1:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Zombies - Updated 17/12/13
Replies: 80
Views: 13996

Re: Zombies - Updated 20/10/13

Would make a bit more sense this way(imo) the virus already lives in them and is functional, but it can't overpower the human consciousness, however when they die and that "spark" that runs the body is no longer in control, the zombie virus can take over functions. Obviously it's not exactly possibl...
by TheGoatman
Mon Oct 21, 2013 5:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Golden Rainbow
Replies: 12
Views: 4329

Re: The Golden Rainbow

I'm not entirely sure what to make of this thread, the story was fairly decent in my opinion, although I would warn you not to take a goats opinion to heart. I can't help but notice that the comment section seems to be rather... frisky. Short and sad/feels fanfics aren't really my thing but I do lov...
by TheGoatman
Sun Oct 20, 2013 10:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Summer By The Sea [A sorta-sequel to Weekend at Hisao's]
Replies: 69
Views: 21912

Re: Summer By The Sea [A sorta-sequel to Weekend at Hisao's]

I was beginning to think this was abandoned, nice to see an update Themo, so hard to find good Shizune fanfic.
by TheGoatman
Sat Oct 19, 2013 12:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Like Fire and Powder: A Suzu epilogue (Complete)
Replies: 55
Views: 14757

Re: Like Fire and Powder: A Suzu epilogue (Complete)

Yeah, seems I should've done even more exposition than I did, to get the characters to the points I showed. I guess the idea is that I was trying to develop too many characters, but only focusing on one character. And, the scene of Hisao specifically hitting Suzu for the reasons he did, while drunk...
by TheGoatman
Fri Oct 18, 2013 2:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Like Fire and Powder: A Suzu epilogue (Complete)
Replies: 55
Views: 14757

Re: Like Fire and Powder: A Suzu epilogue (Complete)

Out of curiosity, how do you think I got Kenji wrong in 6? Hisao being OOC I can completely understand, though (and, unfortunately, it means I failed to do this right). Keep in mind that there's two time skips in there, and I wanted to try to develop Kenji's character. Chapter 6 part 1 is a few mon...
by TheGoatman
Fri Oct 18, 2013 2:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Like Fire and Powder: A Suzu epilogue (Complete)
Replies: 55
Views: 14757

Re: Like Fire and Powder: A Suzu epilogue (Complete)

Drunk or not, Hisao seems so OOC in this that I have a hard time reading it without a biased view from that point alone. Decent writing but I'm not sure I like the way the story ended, it was going fine up until chapter 5 but 6 seemed out of character, both for Hisao, Kenji, and even you, it seemed ...
by TheGoatman
Sat Oct 12, 2013 9:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Like Fire and Powder: A Suzu epilogue (Complete)
Replies: 55
Views: 14757

Re: A Suzu good-end epilogue (Ch. 3, 2013-10-11)

My headcanon sees Suzu as 100% straight and Miki as bi(Note: My only real interaction with Suzu/Miki is from the Pseudo route by Scissorlips, why did we all start speaking in spoiler mode btw?
by TheGoatman
Sat Oct 12, 2013 11:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Like Fire and Powder: A Suzu epilogue (Complete)
Replies: 55
Views: 14757

Re: A Suzu good-end epilogue (Ch. 3, 2013-10-11)

[secretly hopes that Hisao dies] Seriously though, that was a real dick move *nod* I have a strong dislike towards those who strike women over petty relationship crap(and this wasn't even a "you cheated on me" kind of thing) Death to Hisao Although I predict a near-death experience somehow linking ...
by TheGoatman
Wed Oct 09, 2013 10:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Like Fire and Powder: A Suzu epilogue (Complete)
Replies: 55
Views: 14757

Re: A Suzu good-end epilogue (Ch. 2, 2013-10-08)

Hmm, you seem to be intending to limit this to 4 chapters, but from the current pacing and chapter length I'm curious as to how you will fit the rest of the epilogue into 2 chapters without rushing things, you may want to consider more than 4 to wrap things up nicely. I'm a poor writer by anyones st...
by TheGoatman
Tue Oct 08, 2013 10:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 71644

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

I like this, will keep tabs on it!