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by TheGoatman
Tue Nov 19, 2013 4:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 13661

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special

Hoitash wrote:
Soon-hee stared at me as if I might vanish if she blinked, “You came back.”
Is that a reference I missed or a typo?
by TheGoatman
Sun Nov 17, 2013 9:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!
Replies: 95
Views: 25595

Re: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!

Oh its this again, yeah the Hanako part 1-3 was amazing but the part 4 epilogue was a bit of a buzz kill. It's very difficult, nigh impossible actually, for anyone to kill off likeable characters in the end of a story and still have me find it enjoyable. I have to say the way he did it was interesti...
by TheGoatman
Sun Nov 17, 2013 6:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Taxi ride to nowhere
Replies: 34
Views: 9045

Re: Taxi ride to nowhere

Honestly this is kind of what I thought would happen to Hanako if you ran into her bad end, that or an eventual suicide, without Hisao/Lilly there for her, who knows if she ever would have gotten better, or just gone downhill and gotten worse.
by TheGoatman
Thu Nov 14, 2013 2:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
Replies: 107
Views: 22689

Re: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread

Really, I wanted to explore the possibility of Hanako x Akira. Nobody's tried it AFAIK. (This actually started out as Hanako x Akira being concurrent with Lilly's route, but too many things didn't line up for them actually being together.) Other than my own incomplete attempt at an Akira x Hanako, ...
by TheGoatman
Wed Nov 13, 2013 2:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 117106

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 11/11]

Oh glorious wall of text, teach me your secrets... Thank you for the much awaited update!
by TheGoatman
Thu Nov 07, 2013 1:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Pseudodrabbles
Replies: 28
Views: 4636

Re: Fuck you, Hisao Nakai.

Just my personal suggestion - the name alone gave me a dim view on this eh... story, before I even started. I get the feeling this was written hastily under some bias(feels inspired in game for instance). Overall suggestion - Change thread title, it's a major turn off, tone down the blatant anger in...
by TheGoatman
Wed Nov 06, 2013 10:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
Replies: 123
Views: 17119

Re: OC "Neko" - Route [cancelled]

NekoDude wrote:
What kind of twisted, rat-bastard psychotic
Just my opinion - psychotic rat-bastard sounds better, rat-bastard psychotic just doesn't sound right.
by TheGoatman
Wed Nov 06, 2013 8:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
Replies: 123
Views: 17119

Re: OC "Neko" - Route [cancelled]

So, it's not cancelled per say, it's being rewritten from scratch? Cancelled implies it's over and done with but you just said you're redoing it. To be honest all of my attempts at writing have looked so bad(to me anyways) that I didn't have the heart to waste space on the forums with them. I attemp...
by TheGoatman
Sun Nov 03, 2013 5:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 54621

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1

I read this story a while ago, pretty nice one in my opinion, the music was a great touch, but I didn't feel like making an account to comment on it so I left it as it was. While I do think the "emo/suicide Hanako" character is a bit overused and expected, it's nice (imo) to see someone write about ...
by TheGoatman
Tue Oct 29, 2013 7:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret ending: A good Kenji route
Replies: 10
Views: 11161

Re: Secret ending: A good Kenji route

Thank you OP, while I have to call BS on this really being in game, I needed the laugh that this brought.
by TheGoatman
Tue Oct 29, 2013 7:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
Replies: 107
Views: 22689

Re: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread

I interpreted it as Hanako wouldn't become that much better socially if you don't befriend her (in other words, if you don't go down Lilly's or Hanako's route), so Lilly stays in Japan because she feels she can't leave Hanako alone to be with her family. That wasn't my theory . It was outright stat...
by TheGoatman
Mon Oct 28, 2013 4:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
Replies: 107
Views: 22689

Re: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread

He could have heard it from Lilly, or simply figured it out through gossip/asking around/common sense,
by TheGoatman
Sun Oct 27, 2013 10:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
Replies: 107
Views: 22689

Re: Stacks, part 2

bhtooefr wrote:A year has passed, and I'm still working at Yamaku. They're finally upgrading all of their old computers. Guess whose job it is to image all of them?


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Erm. what?
by TheGoatman
Sun Oct 27, 2013 9:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: DRILLER
Replies: 4
Views: 1378

Re: DRILLER

Driller, I see what you did there, and oddly enough I can see Misha doing this.
by TheGoatman
Sat Oct 26, 2013 6:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13
Replies: 51
Views: 12117

Re: A Molly route. Update 26/10/13

An excerpt from something I abandoned a while back, this is how I handled a character's death scene from the first person perspective: Coughing and gasping as blood filled my lungs, my oxygen deprived mind tried to delay the inevitable, sending me twitching involuntarily as I listened to the heavys...