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by TheGoatman
Wed Dec 18, 2013 7:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Zombpocalypse
Replies: 26
Views: 6320

Re: Katawa Zombpocalypse

Liminaut wrote:No, I am not worthy to write Rin.
Somehow I can imagine Rin calmly walking through the zombies and being miraculously untouched. While writing her state of mind and dialogue may prove challenging, I'm sure you can do it if you tried.
by TheGoatman
Wed Dec 18, 2013 5:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Emi in Wonderland
Replies: 50
Views: 16261

Re: Emi in Wonderland

It is very.. difficult to write crossover fanfics, it's a challenge that I have attempted many times but it never ended well, in addition to my already bad habit of never finishing a story, trying to make characters from one universe fit in another is rather difficult, and from the looks of your sto...
by TheGoatman
Wed Dec 18, 2013 5:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Zhoujo (A zombie fic. yes i know the title is dumb)
Replies: 15
Views: 4809

Re: Katawa Zhoujo (A zombie fic. yes i know the title is dum

I can see a zombie outbreak lasting up to several months, at my guess a fresh zombie has a realistic lifespan of 1-2 weeks max but likely a few days, however if each zombie bit one person that would stretch it alot, but since the body would inevitably deteriorate from simple wear and tear, I can't s...
by TheGoatman
Sun Dec 15, 2013 6:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Emi in Wonderland
Replies: 50
Views: 16261

Re: Emi in Wonderland

So, you don't like fanfiction, you insult your own work, you insult the works of others, and you say you might not ever come back or reply to comments. Why should anyone even bother reading your story? There's not very many new stories on the KSF right now that are of a size beyond that of a one-sh...
by TheGoatman
Sun Dec 15, 2013 6:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Emi in Wonderland
Replies: 50
Views: 16261

Re: Emi in Wonderland

I have to say 27000 words is fairly low to be a greatest fan fiction, as I haven't placed anything in my top 5 that was less than at least 100k, I look forward to the full story being uploaded before I make my judgement, I have high expectations and don't think these 2 chapters are the full story, ...
by TheGoatman
Sun Dec 15, 2013 4:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Emi in Wonderland
Replies: 50
Views: 16261

Re: Emi in Wonderland

I have to say 27000 words is fairly low to be a greatest fan fiction, as I haven't placed anything in my top 5 that was less than at least 100k, I look forward to the full story being uploaded before I make my judgement, I have high expectations and don't think these 2 chapters are the full story, a...
by TheGoatman
Fri Dec 13, 2013 5:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: K-Com: Enemy Unheard
Replies: 16
Views: 3814

Re: K-Com: Enemy Unheard

I have legitimately been sitting here for about 2 mins staring at OP's avatar and laughing, good story although I have no idea what's going, I should play X-Com someday, maybe it will make more sense then.
by TheGoatman
Tue Dec 10, 2013 10:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/10)
Replies: 1103
Views: 392981

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route

If I recall correctly, only two pseudo-routes finished: Suzu and Rika. A third (Saki) finished with help. Aiko (OC), Akira, and Misha are more likely to finish than not, I think. The forum is littered with the corpses of other abandoned routes. Suzu and Aiko's routes do take the unusual step of bei...
by TheGoatman
Mon Dec 09, 2013 9:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 71809

Re: Chapter 11

sg1cat wrote: ["Sicchan, Hicchan… I should get going,"] she finally says, after a stretch of silence.
Siichan appears to be missing an h, great chapter as I've come to expect(no pressure) from you.
by TheGoatman
Thu Dec 05, 2013 2:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 71809

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

I thought in shizune's route Lilly doesn't leave. Hisao runs into Lilly after the point in the timeline she should have left. Failure on the devs part iirc, plenty of ways to explain it canonically, the main one I can think of is that Lilly doesn't want to leave Hanako alone, which is what the devs...
by TheGoatman
Thu Dec 05, 2013 12:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 71809

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

I gotta say I'm loving the pacing here, too many people try to blow through "now" to get to "later" "the day passed quickly" is something I'm seeing far too often. You have a lovely story here and I'm enjoying every line of it. i have to agree with you, the pacing is great but i can't really fault ...
by TheGoatman
Wed Dec 04, 2013 3:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 71809

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

I gotta say I'm loving the pacing here, too many people try to blow through "now" to get to "later" "the day passed quickly" is something I'm seeing far too often. You have a lovely story here and I'm enjoying every line of it.
by TheGoatman
Fri Nov 29, 2013 9:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/10)
Replies: 1103
Views: 392981

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route

A friend told me I should suggest this be about/include butt love. Of course this is merely an opinion, feel free to chuckle at it and ignore it~. :3c Oh god it's Banda, *ahem* Hello there Banda, oh writer of smut, I am pleased to meet you, I am Goatman and I come in peace. OT: Be warned author - w...
by TheGoatman
Mon Nov 25, 2013 2:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Corner Pocket - A Hanako Short
Replies: 10
Views: 3837

Re: Corner Pocket - A Hanako Short

Honestly it seemed pretty well written and in-character for Hanako, that is until the last few lines. I can see Hanako doubling the bet to stand up for herself but hustling people over pool so she can "be in control" Something I wouldn't put past a typical girl, but Hanako, not so much. is something...
by TheGoatman
Wed Nov 20, 2013 4:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 451014

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 10/10]

“I'm looking forward to As from all of you.” Mutou calls out as the bell rings and everyone else makes a break for the door. Erm, what? “Been staying up late?” I ask, which causes Lilly to giggle as she realizes what's going on. Hanako freezes for a moment before nodding. “A few days ago, Y-Yuuko g...