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Liminaut wrote:No, I am not worthy to write Rin.

Somehow I can imagine Rin calmly walking through the zombies and being miraculously untouched. While writing her state of mind and dialogue may prove challenging, I'm sure you can do it if you tried.

It is very.. difficult to write crossover fanfics, it's a challenge that I have attempted many times but it never ended well, in addition to my already bad habit of never finishing a story, trying to make characters from one universe fit in another is rather difficult, and from the looks of your sto...

I can see a zombie outbreak lasting up to several months, at my guess a fresh zombie has a realistic lifespan of 1-2 weeks max but likely a few days, however if each zombie bit one person that would stretch it alot, but since the body would inevitably deteriorate from simple wear and tear, I can't s...

So, you don't like fanfiction, you insult your own work, you insult the works of others, and you say you might not ever come back or reply to comments. Why should anyone even bother reading your story? There's not very many new stories on the KSF right now that are of a size beyond that of a one-sh...

I have to say 27000 words is fairly low to be a greatest fan fiction, as I haven't placed anything in my top 5 that was less than at least 100k, I look forward to the full story being uploaded before I make my judgement, I have high expectations and don't think these 2 chapters are the full story, ...

I have to say 27000 words is fairly low to be a greatest fan fiction, as I haven't placed anything in my top 5 that was less than at least 100k, I look forward to the full story being uploaded before I make my judgement, I have high expectations and don't think these 2 chapters are the full story, a...

I have legitimately been sitting here for about 2 mins staring at OP's avatar and laughing, good story although I have no idea what's going, I should play X-Com someday, maybe it will make more sense then.

If I recall correctly, only two pseudo-routes finished: Suzu and Rika. A third (Saki) finished with help. Aiko (OC), Akira, and Misha are more likely to finish than not, I think. The forum is littered with the corpses of other abandoned routes. Suzu and Aiko's routes do take the unusual step of bei...

sg1cat wrote: ["Sicchan, Hicchan… I should get going,"] she finally says, after a stretch of silence.

Siichan appears to be missing an h, great chapter as I've come to expect(no pressure) from you.

I thought in shizune's route Lilly doesn't leave. Hisao runs into Lilly after the point in the timeline she should have left. Failure on the devs part iirc, plenty of ways to explain it canonically, the main one I can think of is that Lilly doesn't want to leave Hanako alone, which is what the devs...

I gotta say I'm loving the pacing here, too many people try to blow through "now" to get to "later" "the day passed quickly" is something I'm seeing far too often. You have a lovely story here and I'm enjoying every line of it. i have to agree with you, the pacing is g...

I gotta say I'm loving the pacing here, too many people try to blow through "now" to get to "later" "the day passed quickly" is something I'm seeing far too often. You have a lovely story here and I'm enjoying every line of it.

A friend told me I should suggest this be about/include butt love. Of course this is merely an opinion, feel free to chuckle at it and ignore it~. :3c Oh god it's Banda, *ahem* Hello there Banda, oh writer of smut, I am pleased to meet you, I am Goatman and I come in peace. OT: Be warned author - w...

Honestly it seemed pretty well written and in-character for Hanako, that is until the last few lines. I can see Hanako doubling the bet to stand up for herself but hustling people over pool so she can "be in control" Something I wouldn't put past a typical girl, but Hanako, not so much. is...

“I'm looking forward to As from all of you.” Mutou calls out as the bell rings and everyone else makes a break for the door. Erm, what? “Been staying up late?” I ask, which causes Lilly to giggle as she realizes what's going on. Hanako freezes for a moment before nodding. “A few days ago, Y-Yuuko g...