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by HayStack44
Tue Sep 10, 2013 10:35 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The wrong reaction to a grave mistake.
Replies: 155
Views: 24781

The wrong reaction to a grave mistake.

Somethings been bugging me since the first time I watched Emi's route. Did they use the wrong Emi sprite for her reaction to Hisao's 'take it to your grave' zinger? This is, as we know, what we get: http://i.imgur.com/KlmlxZI.jpg And lets be honest it looks like she's smiling or being cheeky. Severa...
by HayStack44
Sat Aug 31, 2013 9:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction (Chapter 2 - 29/8/13)
Replies: 16
Views: 6866

Re: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction (Chapter 2 - 29/8/1

Heh, found out yesterday that there's another KS2 story on fanfic.net - "a new luv" - and it appears someone pulling a 'My Immortal'.

I kinda feel like a singer-songwriter might feel when they found out Rebecca Black got a buttload of youtube views XD
by HayStack44
Wed Aug 28, 2013 10:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction (Chapter 2 - 29/8/13)
Replies: 16
Views: 6866

Re: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction

Chapter 2 in it's entirety now up on fanfiction.net, link in the first post Chapter 2- Assembly (Part 2) Mr. Nakai and Mutou sit either side of a pensioner with a hacking cough in one of the hospital waiting areas, one not wanting to make conversation, the other not daring. They had been there for ...
by HayStack44
Wed Aug 28, 2013 7:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction (Chapter 2 - 29/8/13)
Replies: 16
Views: 6866

Re: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction

The perils at trying to proof-read at 3am :) Thanks.
by HayStack44
Tue Aug 27, 2013 6:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction (Chapter 2 - 29/8/13)
Replies: 16
Views: 6866

Re: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction

OK, so Chapter 2 just hit 7000 words and I'm not quite finished yet so here's the finished first half of it. There's another 3 scenes after this. Enjoy :) Chapter 2- Assembly (Part 1) As soon as the lunchtime bells pealed across the ornate buildings and sprawling grounds of Yamaku Academy’s campus, ...
by HayStack44
Sun Aug 25, 2013 7:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction (Chapter 2 - 29/8/13)
Replies: 16
Views: 6866

Re: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction

I'm not sure if you intended the prologue to happen during the festival. If so, it's unlikely that everyone was already asleep at the time. Also, the dorms don't have double rooms. Prologue is in the wee hours of the morning. For varying reasons, Hanako has gone into Lilly's room, Emi has gone into...
by HayStack44
Sat Aug 24, 2013 10:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction (Chapter 2 - 29/8/13)
Replies: 16
Views: 6866

Re: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction

Chapter 1 - Orientation 7.30am "….yes Sir, I'm very sorry…we would have informed you sooner but the incident was in early hours of the morning and we didn't want to disturb the Board of Directors until there was something to t…yes, we are monitoring the situation. Currently? As we understand it Sub...
by HayStack44
Sat Aug 24, 2013 10:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction (Chapter 2 - 29/8/13)
Replies: 16
Views: 6866

Re: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction

OK, I'm nearly done with chapter 2 (a scene and a half to do - 5000 words and rising :) )so here are the first 2 parts posted directly here as requested: Katawa Shoujo 2 - Rise of Kenji Prologue A bedroom. In a building. At night. …! [What?] …!..................! …….~! [You forgot to sign. That mean...
by HayStack44
Sun Aug 18, 2013 7:24 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Your first ending?
Replies: 674
Views: 72971

Re: Your first ending?

First ending I saw? Hanako good. D'awwww. First ending I played? PretzelWhiskeySplat. Earlier today in fact. But that was out of necessity for the fanfic. I felt bad for scaring Hanako, siding against Lilly and being mean to Misha (I did the 'sure was having fun fun fun' bad end route). Her face whe...
by HayStack44
Sun Aug 18, 2013 5:02 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Who's the Naughtiest Girl?
Replies: 200
Views: 36541

Re: Who's the Naughtiest Girl?

Naughtiest? While there is nothing more wonderful for a chap than stepping out with a gal who is all refined in public and saucy as you like behind closed doors, it's still Shizune. She edges it at the line from Lilly because there's always the possibility she might be a Switch. That is to say (for ...
by HayStack44
Sat Aug 17, 2013 7:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction (Chapter 2 - 29/8/13)
Replies: 16
Views: 6866

Re: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction

Noted, will c&p the first 2 sections once Chapter 2 is done :)

20/8/13 edit: 1000 or so words of chapter 2 done :)

21/8/13 edit: the path of chapter 2 is pretty much set out, just got to type it in full, expect it in the next couple of days :)

23/8/13: 3500 words GET. nearly done :D
by HayStack44
Thu Aug 15, 2013 10:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction (Chapter 2 - 29/8/13)
Replies: 16
Views: 6866

Re: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction

Heh. Funnily enough I went to the 'Tips for fanfic writers' sticky thread right after posting, took one look at the first post and thought "Ah crap". :lol: It's been some while since I wrote dialogue so I'm out of practice plus early hours of the morning, I'll give some of it an overhaul. Thanks :)
by HayStack44
Thu Aug 15, 2013 10:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction (Chapter 2 - 29/8/13)
Replies: 16
Views: 6866

KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction (Chapter 2 - 29/8/13)

Hello there. By way of introduction: I'm in the UK, I'm....let's just say I'm probably a little outside the target demographic for KS. I discovered KS in June of this year via Millbee's LPs of it and in turn discovered him via watching LPs of that game with the blocks and the building and the legion...