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by Maradar
Mon Nov 04, 2013 3:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 298519

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 23 up 11/3]

Awesome chapter! I was having a really shitty day and this really made me feel better. You have a talent to make me forget everything except what I'm reading and it's like I'm there. Really good job with making sure everyone stays in character as well.
by Maradar
Sun Sep 29, 2013 7:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 13099

Re: Once More [Update: 9/26]

Excellent as always :). Very good character progression, I'm looking mightily forward to the next installment.
by Maradar
Sat Sep 21, 2013 8:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 96473

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

Wow, thanks so much! I can't apologize enough for the lack of updates recently, but I commute 3 hours daily and I'm gearing up for a cross-country move in the next month, so writing time is scarce these days. I'll definitely finish this though, however much time it'll take. This is definitely worth...
by Maradar
Sat Sep 21, 2013 8:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Hisao's Gift (a short story)
Replies: 29
Views: 10146

Re: Rin: Hisao's Gift (a short story)

Wow really well done! The writing is really quite exquisite, although I don't know whether to thank you are resent you for making me feel this way now...
by Maradar
Sat Sep 21, 2013 8:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 298519

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 15 up 9/18

dewelar wrote:and the quality may have suffered.
I noticed zero quality drop. I'm enjoying this read thoroughly :D
by Maradar
Sun Sep 08, 2013 3:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 298519

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 13 up 9/8]

Good job :) I enjoy how you have multiple perspectives and the characters do seem very KS-esque. Very well written. I look forward to the next installment.
by Maradar
Sat Aug 31, 2013 10:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 366382

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 8/31]

Really well written. I enjoy the way that the H-scene was more about love and exploration then about fucking. I also liked how it wasn't perfect, nobody's perfect their first time, so well done with the realism. I'm thoroughly enjoying this route :), keep up the good work Thanatos02!
by Maradar
Sat Aug 31, 2013 5:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 13099

Re: Once More [Update: 8/29]

I really enjoy the backstory, and us being able to see him develop as a character :). Really good job, I like it. Rin seems spot-on in my opinion.
by Maradar
Wed Aug 28, 2013 1:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 49690

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!

I don't know whether to be happy because it's a good finish, or sad because it's over.. Anyways well written :)
by Maradar
Tue Aug 27, 2013 1:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 366382

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 7/28]

Gah I'm so excited about more words! Love this Fic!
by Maradar
Sat Aug 24, 2013 5:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 49690

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 8/21

So now from Hoitash's inane ramblings, we've all discovered that he's actually Kenji, right?

Great writing btw.
by Maradar
Sat Aug 24, 2013 12:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 96473

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

Well played :) I like your writing style. I keep getting caught up into this story. Keep up the good work :)
by Maradar
Sat Aug 17, 2013 2:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 111
Views: 34437

Re: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)

This is really a fantastic work of fiction! I'm really impressed with your writing style and the way your story "flows?" I'm sorry I can't adequately describe how well written this is in my opinion. One of the best pieces of writing I've read, counting published works as well. Really well well done....
by Maradar
Fri Aug 16, 2013 12:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!
Replies: 95
Views: 21262

Re: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!

Superbly well done! This brought me such sadness and happiness... I don't know what to do, should I congratulate you on being a fantastic other or curse you for making me feel these feels... Thank you for this piece of writing.