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by Blasphemy
Wed Jan 01, 2014 10:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 303847

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 30 up 12/31]

Yeah that's what I kinda meant. I should've worded that better.
by Blasphemy
Wed Jan 01, 2014 9:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 303847

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 30 up 12/31]

Happy new year! - And it's already starting with a great new chapter :) I think you did a real good job depicting how a similar scene from the VN would play out in this story. First of all I like how Hisao was still attracted and actually went along for some time, instead of immediately being a, now...
by Blasphemy
Fri Dec 27, 2013 6:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 29th, 2019)
Replies: 204
Views: 54478

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route

Overall quite good so far I'd say. Loved how carefree Miki was during those rather uncomfortable situations for Hisao. Some criticism: Hisao seems a tad too dense at times; taking some of Miki's funny remarks too seriously, for example. I could maybe contribute this to him being especially fluttered...
by Blasphemy
Fri Dec 27, 2013 6:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yuletide Yamaku - The Yamaku Reader Story (Updated Dec 19)
Replies: 46
Views: 12628

Re: Yule Tide Yamaku - The Yamaku Reader Story

I mean if Helbereth is basing this Hanako of her "Lilly route"-version then it doesn't seem too unlikely. That said, I think the huge progress that Hanako (seemingly) goes through in Lilly's route does kinda stand in stark contrast to what we get to see in Hanako's own route. That route, being hers,...
by Blasphemy
Sun Dec 22, 2013 7:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 303847

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 29 up 12/21]

^ Yup, that part also immediately reminded me of "comfort me". Thanks to KS and some of the fanfics I can't help but wonder what the character is meaning to say with phrases like this. Especially when preceded by "His mouth is close to my ear, and I can feel his breath." Gotta say though, even Hisao...
by Blasphemy
Sat Dec 21, 2013 12:53 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The wrong reaction to a grave mistake.
Replies: 155
Views: 17863

Re: The wrong reaction to a grave mistake.

Well if he figured it out early on, there wouldn't be as much impact at the end now would there. Actually there's a very good chance he figured out the connection between Emi's legs and her father's death earlier than everyone thinks. Hisao doesn't seem to surprised when Emi takes him to a graveyar...
by Blasphemy
Sat Dec 21, 2013 12:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira-pseudo route [12/21]
Replies: 26
Views: 4437

Re: Akira-pseudo route [12/21]

After reading the quite interesting and long discussion Limits of Fanfiction - What is appropriate? as well as having read e.g. the sticky Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU) thread in the past I can't help but laugh out when someone wants to do his own take of a fanfic route he considers f...
by Blasphemy
Thu Dec 19, 2013 8:33 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The wrong reaction to a grave mistake.
Replies: 155
Views: 17863

Re: The wrong reaction to a grave mistake.

Yeah that seems severely OOC for the occasion. Especially since Lilly doesn't really 'need' Hanako that much, otherwise her decision for staying in Japan instead of going to Scotland would've probably come rather early. I can't remember many outbursts from Lilly in fanfics anyways, but one were Lill...
by Blasphemy
Thu Dec 19, 2013 4:21 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The wrong reaction to a grave mistake.
Replies: 155
Views: 17863

Re: The wrong reaction to a grave mistake.

I couldn't see Lilly snapping at this. That rather occurs when it involves something concerning herself, especially her own weaknesses and faults. She'd probably take a very neutral stance in this affair, even if she's disappointed in Hisao. I'd imagine she would do her best to reconcile the two and...
by Blasphemy
Sat Dec 14, 2013 11:03 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The wrong reaction to a grave mistake.
Replies: 155
Views: 17863

Re: The wrong reaction to a grave mistake.

I do think that three friendships would be destroyed (it depends on Lilly's capacity for forgiveness, and I think Lilly would also blame herself), but Hanako would grow from it, and even if she wouldn't be happy, she'd be able to function at the very least . I think Hisao would eventually grow from...
by Blasphemy
Fri Dec 13, 2013 5:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 303847

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 28 up 12/12]

Took me way too long to figure out which KS character bhtooefr meant in regards to Yoshi's girl :roll:

I'm still looking forward the next chapter, that should be fun.
by Blasphemy
Fri Dec 13, 2013 5:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 201008

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 11/20/2013}

Hence your ability to actually get your writing done! So maybe it should stay that way... That KS subreddit is in a bit of a sad state right now with 7 threads from the same guy and that barely anyone wants to read anyways at the top, but then again reddit may not be the best discussion platform for...
by Blasphemy
Sat Dec 07, 2013 3:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 303847

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 27 up 12/4]

My pleasure. I can't really help it anyways, am too interested in this story ;p
by Blasphemy
Sat Dec 07, 2013 11:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 303847

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 27 up 12/4]

Huh, had to do a double take reading about Hanako's dark past. It's just kinda weird to suddenly read about that, even if you did do research on that stuff and it seems totally plausible (almost independent from the nation I'd say, this stuff can happen everywhere unfortunately). This partial phrase...
by Blasphemy
Mon Dec 02, 2013 11:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)
Replies: 144
Views: 53279

Re: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 1st Dec)

If I had to critique anything it'd be that even with the point being how much she (and Emi) changed, Hanako still feels quite out of character in the very last part. Though I guess this is because I judge her based on the character in KS, ofc. Heh I share that exact thought. I just cannot really im...