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by Blasphemy
Wed Feb 26, 2014 6:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 163089

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

@ PKMN Trainer Red Heh I was in a very similar situation as yours. I think Sisterhood was my first fanfiction read ever... well if I discount the rather short "A runner's afternoon" and it completely blew me away. Now here's the good part: but I doubt I will ever run into another piece of fan work a...
by Blasphemy
Mon Feb 24, 2014 5:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 300543

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 34 up 2/

This story continues to be an excellent read for me. At this point however I sort of want to remove myself from the entire discussion, in particular speculation, to enjoy the story a bit more purely. Since you've gotten so many avid readers by now there's just too, too much speculation and people st...
by Blasphemy
Thu Feb 13, 2014 8:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 300543

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Interlude 3, 2/1

The whole school paper thing is a bit alien to me anyways. I don't know, smaller 'what's happening at school' issues here and there are normal. But, at least here in Germany, I'd be rather surprised if a well regarded school had a school newspaper where you find articles about rather private relatio...
by Blasphemy
Mon Feb 10, 2014 8:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
Replies: 29
Views: 8942

Re: Overdrive (Lilly)

Hmm gotta say this story lacks the proper amount of character depth that's so alluring about KS in the first place. Emi in particular just seemed like your typical unlikable girlfriend character that obviously doesn't care as much about her boyfriend as one would hope and appeared very one-dimension...
by Blasphemy
Fri Jan 31, 2014 7:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)
Replies: 46
Views: 8398

Re: Bad Hanako

@ Munchenhausen I'm not certain of course but this seems more like a one-shot? So except for the last quarter it all seems reasonably in-character. I think one could argue about Hanako being a bit more forthcoming but it's not too stretched and partially okay because it's part of the premise I suppo...
by Blasphemy
Tue Jan 14, 2014 6:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Terrible Secret of Yamaku (Trogdor shorts, upd. 2014/01/28)
Replies: 20
Views: 3607

Re: Firewall. [A Hanako prequel.]

Hmm this is one of those very short stories that I'm not quite sure what to think about... if there even is much to consider in the first place. Hanako does something that goes against her character and behavior and can hardly be called a prequel because doing all that would most likely mean that Ha...
by Blasphemy
Sun Jan 12, 2014 10:20 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which ending(s) do you consider the worst?
Replies: 175
Views: 21639

Re: Which ending(s) do you consider the worst?

Yeah, it's amazing how she treats them both so horribly that you could only list one justifiable example against only one of them. Well, it's just one example, but it's quite a major one and she keeps it up for weeks - basically throughout their whole relationship. Yeah that aspect actually kinda s...
by Blasphemy
Sat Jan 11, 2014 3:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 300543

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 31 up 1/10]

In any case, something does feel off about the characterization of the Satou parents, but I can't put my finger on it. I'd think that they'd be a little more direct about things, but then, Lilly is anything but direct about a lot of things herself... Hm, you mean in this story? Because that seemed ...
by Blasphemy
Sat Jan 11, 2014 2:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 300543

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 31 up 1/10]

Good job again. Was wondering if we'd get an Emi chapters this time around or maybe even Hanako already... Then, surprise, it's Lilly!
by Blasphemy
Wed Jan 08, 2014 8:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Confront the Past? - Post-Hanako Good Ending
Replies: 22
Views: 6557

Re: Can You Confront the Past? - Post-Hanako Good Ending

Woah, third person, past tense narration feels super weird now when most other fanfics, and the VN itself of course, are first person narrator and in present tense. Though 'Closure' had a very good third-person narration... Anyways, so far pretty good. Again, this kind of narration just feels a bit ...
by Blasphemy
Wed Jan 08, 2014 9:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 29th, 2019)
Replies: 204
Views: 53826

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Jan 8th)

Yeh pretty solid chapter. Miki's lacking grades and overall struggle to keep up with most of the subjects will probably be a major conflict as we go along.
by Blasphemy
Mon Jan 06, 2014 10:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: I Won't Be Back Tonight
Replies: 19
Views: 5595

Re: I Won't Be Back Tonight

^ That was actually something else I considered pointing out. Writing sex scenes is extremely hard and on top of it I don't know how Hotkey intended those scenes to come over but... while the "penis spasms inside of her" bit just read badly that whole parfait 'business'... well that was almost vomit...
by Blasphemy
Fri Jan 03, 2014 10:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: I Won't Be Back Tonight
Replies: 19
Views: 5595

Re: I Won't Be Back Tonight

Was actually quite curious at the beginning. This taking place roughly 15 years ahead of KS and Hanako meeting Hisao/Misha through her child? Count me in. Also quite liked the idea of naming the child Misha and all. Introducing the story via Hanako's POV and then just abruptly ending the second chap...
by Blasphemy
Wed Jan 01, 2014 1:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 300543

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 30 up 12/31]

Granted we don't know her character very well yet. I mean, I went through the Lilly route recently and while I can recall her short part of it after you mentioning that I simply can't remember her characterization, if there was much of it to begin with. For how short her appearance was, there's eno...
by Blasphemy
Wed Jan 01, 2014 12:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 300543

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 30 up 12/31]

Ah interesting! Really wasn't sure how to interpret her, although her 'tone' didn't seem hostile I just considered her wanting part of this 'sexgod' Hisao a bit more out there. Granted we don't know her character very well yet. I mean, I went through the Lilly route recently and while I can recall h...