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- Sat Nov 02, 2013 11:35 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1559
- Views: 565869
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 22 up 10/31]
can't believe Hanako was quicker than Emi... but bro you're already in chapter 23 and shit just started.. completation date will probably be june/2015. First of all, thanks for reading. I hope you've enjoyed the story thus far. As for timing...I really have no time frame for writing this story, but...
- Sat Nov 02, 2013 11:23 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
- Replies: 123
- Views: 28784
Re: OC "Neko" - Route
In the Japanese school system, teachers have an assigned classroom, and the students move between periods. Miyagi would be the English teacher for all the 3rd-years. KS and Wikipedia go directly against that... Yeah, as I edited above, was not awake yet when I posted that :oops: . The other half is...
- Sat Nov 02, 2013 10:56 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
- Replies: 123
- Views: 28784
Re: OC "Neko" - Route
Never mind. Was not awake yet. My apologies, because I know better than that.
- Sat Nov 02, 2013 10:46 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Like Fire and Powder: A Suzu epilogue (Complete)
- Replies: 55
- Views: 21107
Re: Like Fire and Powder: A Suzu epilogue (Complete)
If you really wanted Hisao to be the aggressor, though, you really have to show something drastic having happened in the intervening three years. Otherwise, it just feels off. Something DID happen, at least it seems so to me. That something is called "alcoholism", even if Hisao doesn't spend his ti...
- Fri Nov 01, 2013 7:56 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Hype
- Replies: 72
- Views: 18961
Re: Hype
I am one of these new people who have only recently discovered KS. :P Just a shame by the time I have arrived the amount of people here has started to decline. :( Could be worse I guess, I could have stumbled across something years old like I normally do, lol! Offtopic: Is there actually a thread t...
- Fri Nov 01, 2013 3:38 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
- Replies: 237
- Views: 100073
Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout
I was actually more bothered by what Misha claims Shizune said to her when Hisao introduced himself than by the PDAs, though :) . Thanks for reading! I was worried a bit about that being OOC, but my reasoning was this - we'd never been privy to any of the conversations Shizune and Misha had when Hi...
- Fri Nov 01, 2013 12:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
- Replies: 237
- Views: 100073
Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout
You're right. Shizune IS showing him more affection than in the last few months combined. Makes her seem a bit ooc here... *nods* I tend to give a fair amount of leeway character-wise to stories that are humor-heavy, and this is still a fun read, but yeah, this chapter took it a little too far OTT....
- Fri Nov 01, 2013 10:42 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1559
- Views: 565869
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 22 up 10/31]
It's also very much unlike Lilly to say things she hasn't thought through beforehand. Yes, she is in an agitated state right then, but for her to say something like that to Hanako by accident is... ...in large part intended to show just how off-balance Lilly is about the situation, akin to losing h...
- Thu Oct 31, 2013 6:29 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1559
- Views: 565869
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 22 up 10/31]
I'm not sure why you would think that. Lilly herself encouraged her to pursue Hisao... But she damn near broke down while doing it. And, I didn't say that Hanako knew she was twisting the knife, just that she was. I also didn't blame her for it, given the circumstances. *nods* That would be part of...
- Thu Oct 31, 2013 6:07 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1559
- Views: 565869
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 22 up 10/31]
Lilly laughs softly. "If you're saying that the way to Hisao's heart is to throw caution to the wind, perhaps Ibarazaki is his type after all." But that was a low blow. As much as I dislike Lilly, I don't think this would be her style. I will explain this one. Remember that at this point, the conve...
- Thu Oct 31, 2013 3:28 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1559
- Views: 565869
Developments, Chapter 22
I'm with Hisao, as I somehow remember being so many times before. We're standing in the middle of a forest, with nothing around us but the trees and the sounds of nature. Sunlight streams in through the canopy above, its beams dancing in the air and forming intricate patterns on the forest floor. T...
- Thu Oct 31, 2013 12:56 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hisao and Kenji-Concrete Jungle Conclusion Update
- Replies: 55
- Views: 20371
Re: Hisao and Kenji-Concrete Jungle Conclusion Update
we both know Shizune will just kill Hisao and I both You know what me mean? Congrats on finishing another one! So "me and Hisao", I take it? Or perhaps just Hisao and I... I really need a grammar book. And thanks :) "Hisao and me" or "me and Hisao" would work equally well. The best way to remember ...
- Thu Oct 31, 2013 12:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hisao and Kenji-Concrete Jungle Conclusion Update
- Replies: 55
- Views: 20371
Re: Hisao and Kenji-Concrete Jungle Conclusion Update
Once again, an enjoyable read. Although I skimmed the fight scenes (they're generally not my thing), I think you did a great job on the interactions between Kenji and Jigoro throughout these last few posts. In general, I think this is the best portrayal of Jigoro I've seen to date. Looking forward t...
- Wed Oct 30, 2013 8:33 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Which ending is most likely for you?
- Replies: 59
- Views: 15669
Re: Which ending is most likely for you?
Well, for all we know, he does. It just ends before we find outXanatos wrote:...Nope.Mirage_GSM wrote:Sure it does.Lilly's bad ending doesn't have anything to do with the airport...
Even in the bad end Hisao runs after Lilly to the airport and has his heart attack, doesn't he?
- Tue Oct 29, 2013 3:29 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
- Replies: 107
- Views: 35643
Re: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
I think that just set the timeline for Bloighdich, if Lilly coming back to Yamaku is what's actually canon. Lilly being at Yamaku near the end of Shizune's route is canon. Lilly leaving Yamaku for Scotland during Shizune's route isn't canon, but is Word Of God , and doesn't clash with canon. That's...