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Backing up to a few days ago, I just realized that Miyagi cannot be the English teacher for the 3rd-years after all, because she's canonically female (per "Promise of Time") and the English teacher is canonically male (per "Little Wing"). Sorry about that .

This was a fun story, I agree. There's one problem, and it's one I only noticed when I was going through Lilly's route last night (and one I think I've perpetuated a couple times myself). Yes, Miyagi is female (per "Promise of Time"), but that means she can't be the English teacher, because (per "Li...

I created an account just to comment on this. I love this story, which in itself is a shock, since I tend to hate any story from Lilly's bad end, as she's my favorite. The pacing so far has been excellent- very few slow parts, but nothing so fast you almost lose track of what's going on, either. Th...

*nods* Yeah, I don't think I'd have wanted to read that - whether it had worked or not . I have no real taste for super-grimdark stuff, and the other way...just wouldn't make a good story.

Also, until about halfway through, I thought you might have been going for Hanako having killed Lilly out of jealousy ;) . I opened with Hanako POV, even! :lol: This isn't Katawa Yandere! True, but I could totally see a scenario where Hanako snaps at Lilly like she does at Hisao in her bad ending, ...

I won't deny that there's problems with the murder method. I wouldn't be surprised if he was stalking Lilly, and came up with the plan over time, though. I don't think I said anything that would conflict with that, and canon even implies that he was stalking Lilly - he's blind as a bat and was able...

Wow. That was dark. Well-written, no doubt - best thing I've read from you so far, no question. I...do have serious doubts that Kenji could do that, though. I certainly believe that he thinks he could kill somebody, and he possibly could if he got enough liquid courage into him. However, he really d...

Her father is a great character, too. Being half-French myself, he's reminiscent of a few of my own male relatives, in both good and bad ways. Yeah, my heritage is mostly French via Canada, and I've found some of my family has some strange ideas about relationships. *nods* My father's family is als...

Rotating PoV...where have I seen that before ;) ? Seriously, I'd be interested to see another person's take on the concept w/r/t KS. I never thought I invented the idea or anything, after all (I was actually partially inspired by Sisterhood, and have never read anything of Martin's - not my style - ...

It needed work, sure, but was still an interesting story. My thoughts exactly. This had a lot of promise, and I understand the desire to get everything out that you want to get out all at once. I also understand that some people take criticism very personally, and think that because someone critici...

Both Emi and Hanako are the type to move fast when an opportunity presents itself (in more ways than one). However, one of them has more endurance than the other. I'm actually not sure who it is, either - normally I'd say Emi, but Hanako did put up with a month of Lilly dating Hisao, while she was ...

Great work, as always. Yoko might now be my favorite character in this story. Her father is a great character, too. Being half-French myself, he's reminiscent of a few of my own male relatives, in both good and bad ways. Found one booboo in Part 4 that jarred me a bit: There's a compliment hidden in...

ACT 4 PATH 2 - Scene 2: "Freedom's just another word for nothing left to lose" I meant to comment on this before, but...dude, loving some of these quotes you're digging out. This one...by the great Kris Kristofferson...as interpreted by the great Janis Joplin...I need to go listen to this song now ...

2: Mirage: Thank you, yeah see I thought would take a slightly more "real" approach to Miki. In my opinion at least, everyone seem's to use her as a prop, a funny person. Yet honestly wouldn't she be allot more bitter? Allot more of a dark person. I get this opinion mostly because she still has her...

Okay, I've probably answered something like this before, but the more I think about it the more my answer changes, and will change. Here's my answer as of this moment in time... First, I have to assume that, rather than just entering Yamaku (which, being nearly as blind as Kenji, I suppose I could :...