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by dewelar
Sun Nov 10, 2013 9:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565882

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 24 up 11/10]

I liked this chapter, as with the rest, but why did Shizune totally blow off the fact that Hisao told them about his arrhythmia and collapsed just the day before? They didn't seem very concerned at all that he could very well have died the other day. Just my observation. *nods* An excellent observa...
by dewelar
Sun Nov 10, 2013 4:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565882

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 24 up 11/10]

Good chapter, as always. He laughs. "You could say that. Anyway, I talked to Setou a few times about it. Kamisaka studied in Scotland, so she thought I might have some insight into the culture over there, but I probably learned more from her than the other way around." Should that be Satou? Fixed, ...
by dewelar
Sun Nov 10, 2013 4:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565882

Developments, Chapter 24 (Notes at end)

It's been nearly a full day since I woke up in the nurse's office yesterday afternoon. The first thing he told me was that Emi had gone home. When I asked when she'd be back, he shrugged and said he wasn't sure, but that since the ban on her running would be lifted Monday morning – now tomorrow morn...
by dewelar
Sun Nov 10, 2013 2:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Summer By The Sea [A sorta-sequel to Weekend at Hisao's]
Replies: 69
Views: 30416

Re: Summer By The Sea [A sorta-sequel to Weekend at Hisao's]

He means that's where they're going to visit Shizune's mother: the cemetery. That's what I was presuming as well.
by dewelar
Sat Nov 09, 2013 3:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565882

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 23 up 11/3]

The one problem I've had is, I don't recall Emi being the type to back off of something she wanted, even to save someone else's emotions- it's kind of mean to say about my second favorite, but she did seem somewhat selfish. Hmmm...if you're talking about the most recent chapter, that wasn't the imp...
by dewelar
Sat Nov 09, 2013 11:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)
Replies: 57
Views: 16775

Re: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)

Mirage_GSM wrote:I'm not really sure why this even was an issue. I would be very surprised if a school the size of Yamaku had only one English teacher...
Right, but is it big enough for more than one per grade level?
by dewelar
Sat Nov 09, 2013 10:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
Replies: 123
Views: 28784

Re: OC "Neko" - Route [cancelled]

Backing up to a few days ago, I just realized that Miyagi cannot be the English teacher for the 3rd-years after all, because she's canonically female (per "Promise of Time") and the English teacher is canonically male (per "Little Wing"). Sorry about that :( . It was a sub. That's my story and I'm ...
by dewelar
Sat Nov 09, 2013 10:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)
Replies: 57
Views: 16775

Re: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)

I went ahead and asked about this discrepancy over Miyagi and the male English teacher in the "Ask!" thread. This was the response: The gender reference in "Little Wing" is was wrong. :( Fixed for future releases. :) So, Miyagi is the English teacher for all third year classes. Thanks for getting t...
by dewelar
Sat Nov 09, 2013 12:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)
Replies: 57
Views: 16775

Re: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)

Leaty wrote:
dewelar wrote:Eh, considering they appeared in [REDACTED], probably not.
That fic doesn't exist to me.
Accommodated!

Actually...they may be appearing in Developments as well. That's all I'll say outside of PM.
by dewelar
Sat Nov 09, 2013 12:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)
Replies: 57
Views: 16775

Re: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)

I have a niggling suspicion that I am the only one who remembers the names of ultra-minor background characters like Shin, Takumi, and Mai. Eh, considering they appeared in Weekend at Hisao's , probably not. Okay...so what else besides the VN itself is canon that I don't know about? This image , th...
by dewelar
Sat Nov 09, 2013 12:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)
Replies: 57
Views: 16775

Re: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)

This thing seems to suggest that Miyagi is an English teacher. So maybe there is more than one. ...And shit. You're right. http://i.imgur.com/x0qWDmd.gif This strongly suggests that Miyagi doesn't teach Hisao's class, which would mean there would be no good reason for Iwanako to know her in MTB , e...
by dewelar
Fri Nov 08, 2013 11:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)
Replies: 57
Views: 16775

Re: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)

Who, Helbereth? Well, and ProfAllister. Oddball has already admitted to missing that detail, and I have a lot of respect for that. if somebody pointed out an error in Mean Time to Breakdown, I would do everything in my power to immediately correct the discrepancy. Now, see, this I can get behind fu...
by dewelar
Fri Nov 08, 2013 11:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)
Replies: 57
Views: 16775

Re: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)

So? In fanfiction you can do worse than changing gender of one person (not to mention possibility of two English teachers). A lot worse... No. If a writer of fanfiction cannot be bothered to get the details straight, and stay loyal to the source material, then their writing is simply not worth read...
by dewelar
Fri Nov 08, 2013 10:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
Replies: 123
Views: 28784

Re: OC "Neko" - Route [cancelled]

Backing up to a few days ago, I just realized that Miyagi cannot be the English teacher for the 3rd-years after all, because she's canonically female (per "Promise of Time") and the English teacher is canonically male (per "Little Wing"). Sorry about that :( . I don't remember them mentioning the t...
by dewelar
Fri Nov 08, 2013 10:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)
Replies: 57
Views: 16775

Re: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)

Yes, Miyagi is female (per "Promise of Time"), but that means she can't be the English teacher, because (per "Little Wing") the English teacher is male - although I suppose that's why the suspension was written into the story, the timing seems...off. I don't think it was ever specified what subject...