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Might be worth a look- a free short little romp with a bit of a twist in the story. At least, that's what the reviews are suggesting. I read this a few weeks ago and it was pretty good. I'm not sure how long it took, but I'd guess something around 8-10 hours spread over 3 days. The characters were ...

Lots of good thoughts Thanks for the feedback. It's possible that I may have gone overboard with Lilly's thoughts in the first third of the chapter. It's been several days since the last Lilly POV chapter, and I wanted to establish her progression through those days, but perhaps there was too much ...

cake307 wrote:You're not a magnificent bastard, you're just evil.

I can accept that, too .

I have zero ideas as to how this is going to pan out, and I really don't want to wait for you to finish writing to read it all. Also I think that perhaps some more description or other such things when it comes to Lilly would be beneficial, but I really don't know. Keep up the great work! :D Thanks...

Personally, I'm still rooting for Emi - not just because she's my favourite girl, but also because there are a lot fewer stories featuring her than either Hanako or Lilly and a few other reasons I won't mention here, because I don't want to start an argument. ;-) *laughs* Just out of curiosity: Do ...

I'm actually not sure where to begin commenting, other than to call you a magnificent bastard, dewelar. First time I've ever been called that. Hmmm...I think I like it :D . I think I'll avoid speculating on where this is going to go, other than to say that it looks like an Emi ending has been ruled...

It's Sunday morning, and the house is surprisingly quiet. It's the last day before I start school again, and I am admittedly not particularly looking forward to it. Still, I do have this one day, and I am certainly going to do my best to enjoy it. Once I've made myself properly presentable, I make m...

I have to say, given the influx of darker stories lately, it's good to have a quality bit of fluffiness like this to break it up .

One error I noticed:

taking in the site of so many books

Should be "sight".

Heh...yeah, I didn't say there wasn't a way to do it. I can think of a few, and setting it a few years into the future is one of the better ones. Given not just the age difference, but the life experience difference, I would have trouble seeing Akira coming off as anything but predatory if it occurr...

Really, I wanted to explore the possibility of Hanako x Akira. Nobody's tried it AFAIK. *nods* The reason for that is that there's an inherent creepiness factor to that particular pairing on a few levels. In order to make a good story out of it, you either have to work to overcome it, or you have t...

Finally got all caught up on this! I have to say, it's a goat piece of writing, and not at all what I expected. I was hesitant to read it because I had thought it was going to be a depressing epilogue of a depressing ending, but I'm glad to see that this isn't the case. I have some predictions as t...

Enjoyed this chapter, as always.

Mournful3ch0 wrote:Hanako's birthday is in the next installment?

Since Trivun seems to be going scene-by-scene, the next installment would be the reflection of "Truancy", with her birthday the one following.

AntonSlavik020 wrote:

dewelar wrote: Don't forget, in Lilly's route, Hideaki knows that Hisao has a heart condition.

I thought he just guessed. Like Rin did, but correctly.

Yes, but once he guessed, Hisao let on that the guess was correct, which would be quite enough for Hideaki .

Hmmm...since it's canon, I suppose it's not really a spoiler after all, so...

Don't forget, in Lilly's route, Hideaki knows that Hisao has a heart condition.

Shizune and Misha seemed to be really well done, considering Shizune's anger at visiting. I'm excited to see if Yoshi becomes a major part of the story. Also Lilly. Hooo boy man all I could do was smile and laugh at the cliff hanger. Well done as always. Also again, I've been seriously down recentl...