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by dewelar
Fri Nov 22, 2013 7:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565890

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 26 up 11/21]

Remember that not having an answer for her doesn't go over well, too, though. ... I always try to be sparing in my quotes, but it seems this time I was too parsimonious*: Have you figured out what you're gonna say to her yet?" "I think so," Hisao says as he sits down, "but I don't think it's going ...
by dewelar
Fri Nov 22, 2013 12:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565890

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 26 up 11/21]

Thanks again to all for the kind words. This chapter actually wound up going in a completely different direction than even I expected, but it was one of those "story writing itself" moments. Glad it seems to have worked. A question, though- we've seen Misha and Shizune again, but since then they've ...
by dewelar
Thu Nov 21, 2013 9:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565890

Re: Developments, Chapter 26

Minion of Chaos wrote:
dewelar wrote:"Sorry, sorry! I just got the phone at the beginning of the year, and I haven't around to it."
"haven't gotten around to it"?
Fixed, thanks!
by dewelar
Thu Nov 21, 2013 8:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565890

Developments, Chapter 26

Monday morning. It's about time you showed up. It's been a looooong time since I've been this happy for it to be Monday, but I can't help it. My leg isn't hurting, which means I can run again. It took spending most of the past two days doing nothing but lying in bed, eating, and listening to my mom...
by dewelar
Thu Nov 21, 2013 12:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565890

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 25 up 11/15]

Thanks for the kind words...have I mentioned lately how much I appreciate the support people on this board show each other? If not...then I guess I just did :D .
by dewelar
Wed Nov 20, 2013 9:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332240

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 11/20/2013}

AntonSlavik020 wrote:Hisao' s name doesn't really blend well with any of the girl's names.
I don't know...you just have to be willing to go against convention:

Emisao
Hanasao
Lisao
Rinisao
Shizusao

Eh?
by dewelar
Wed Nov 20, 2013 3:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565890

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 25 up 11/15]

In a way, I'm glad I didn't, because a couple of the heavy hitters published chapters within the last 12 hours or so, and I would have felt like one of those little independent movie studios whose new release drops the same weekend as Hunger Games and Iron Man... :D. Judging by the traction this st...
by dewelar
Wed Nov 20, 2013 12:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565890

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 25 up 11/15]

A quick progress update: I thought I was done with this chapter last night, but when I read it aloud I realized it still needed a fair amount of work, at least another day or two. In a way, I'm glad I didn't, because a couple of the heavy hitters published chapters within the last 12 hours or so, an...
by dewelar
Tue Nov 19, 2013 5:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 75235

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update 19/11/2013]

Good to see you back and writing, Numb! I liked the character interaction in this chapter. It felt a bit...placeholder-y, but since it's the beginning of an act, starting off slow is a given, so that's not so much a complaint as an observation :) . Also, the exchange about the notes was a bit confus...
by dewelar
Tue Nov 19, 2013 3:41 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: If Hanako's scars looked like this...
Replies: 301
Views: 74869

Re: If Hanako's scars looked like this...

To be honest I don't doubt that Hanako has zero muscle damage, the girl runs quicker than the speed at which she puts out. Before I get burned at the stake for that little remark... Check the story timelines, pretty sure she drops her skirt before the other girls. Hmmm, something I'd have to check....
by dewelar
Tue Nov 19, 2013 2:51 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which character did you get most attached to and why
Replies: 736
Views: 165213

Re: Which character did you get most attached to and why

pandaphil wrote:Couldn't have said it better myself.
Indeed :) . I hope I'm not overdosing on positive energy, because I'm sitting here reading about Emi and listening to Jess Penner...
by dewelar
Tue Nov 19, 2013 1:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special

Hoitash wrote:I promise this is going in a good direction.
Indeed, I get that feeling already. I think I'm more excited to see this story than anything else I've seen appear on the board in my short tenure here.

No pressure or anything...
by dewelar
Sun Nov 17, 2013 1:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 149678

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 12/11/2013)

Great to see this story updated again. This is one of my favorite ongoing stories on the site. With that said, good chapter. I'm really looking forward to their second time in the city. though that's probably a few chapters away(it's been a while since I've played the route). Thank you! Although I'...
by dewelar
Sat Nov 16, 2013 3:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565890

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 25 up 11/15]

I'd be really disappointed if you chose that path, though. All the conflict with Emi and Hanako you've built up so far would just fizzle and be for nothing^^° I feel this resolution would only be acceptable if Emi/Hanako either end up lovers or ideally very close friends. After that line of one-sho...
by dewelar
Sat Nov 16, 2013 1:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565890

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 25 up 11/15]

I think I should stop reading this until it's finished, because I forget things easily. I don't even know what Lilly is talking about that she dropped the phone or something. And I'm currently reading another fanfic here, and this one is completed already, so... She's describing something that happ...