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by dewelar
Sat Dec 21, 2013 4:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565896

Developments, Chapter 29 (Notes at end)

I wake up this morning thankful for a quiet night. Yesterday's meeting with Hisao was at least hopeful, which may be why the nightmares remained at bay. I'm really looking forward to today, because, if all goes well, we'll be spending the entire day together. Then again, I always feel better about t...
by dewelar
Sat Dec 21, 2013 12:10 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: How many students do you think have a crush on Mutou?
Replies: 58
Views: 16612

Re: How many students do you think have a crush on Mutou?

Ah, the classic poll blunder rears its ugly head. If I think it's exactly 10, which option do I pick? :?
by dewelar
Tue Dec 17, 2013 1:11 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Playing through KS together
Replies: 21
Views: 8914

Re: Playing through KS together

I hope you find someone as well. I did something similar with a friend of mine, and posted about it here a while back. Since then, we've gone on to read a couple more VNs as well (I'm currently in the middle of reading Kira Kira to her). It really gives you a different perspective.
by dewelar
Sat Dec 14, 2013 9:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565896

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 28 up 12/12]

Even allowing for Emi giving a 1.21 Emiwatt grin (1 Emiwatt == 1 GW) Great Scott! Loved this post, man :D . Also, upon thinking about it, I want to go back a couple pages... I like it, I just think it's interesting. And it makes me think more closely about the very contrary way I handle him in my o...
by dewelar
Fri Dec 13, 2013 11:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332247

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 11/20/2013}

bhtooefr wrote:I came from the FanficRecs page myself.
I came here from TV Tropes generally, and decided which fanfics to start reading from that page. I also admit that I check now and then to see if Developments pops up.
by dewelar
Fri Dec 13, 2013 11:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565896

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 28 up 12/12]

Actually I was talking about something as simple as "***"... Ah, gotcha. Yeah, I can see that. Then again, the story doesn't really seem to be slowing down to a conclusion yet, so maybe there are more developments ahead. You know, as much as I like this story, make sure you don't drag Hisao's decis...
by dewelar
Thu Dec 12, 2013 6:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565896

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 28 up 12/12]

This chapter made me realize how much of a mentor figure Nurse becomes in this fic. I mean, he's always important in canon, but in a lot of paths he kind of fades out, and even in Emi's route he doesn't really get too personal with Hisao. But in this fic he's like Hisao's Qui-Gon. You know...when I...
by dewelar
Thu Dec 12, 2013 5:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565896

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 28 up 12/12]

Only minor nitpick is the time-skip. That one could use some visual pointing out. You're talking about the one from the end of the conversation with Yoshi to the next morning, I presume. Yeah, I couldn't come up with something to fill in that was satisfying to me, so I thought it was reasonable to ...
by dewelar
Thu Dec 12, 2013 4:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565896

Developments, Chapter 28

"I'll see you...tomorrow," Hanako calls out to me as I discard my trash from lunch. "Okay...see you tomorrow," I say with a smile, and walk out of the tea room. I continue out of the main building towards my dorm room, all the while wondering to myself what I'm doing, because none of this happened t...
by dewelar
Tue Dec 10, 2013 3:23 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Limits of Fanfiction - What is appropriate?
Replies: 140
Views: 48658

Re: Limits of Fanfiction - What is appropriate?

Leaty makes a lot of good points in this post, but I want to single (double?) a couple of them out that I consider particularly insightful so they don't get lost in the wall of text: No matter how inspired you are by a work of fiction, when you get the impulse to write a fanfiction, the very first q...
by dewelar
Mon Dec 09, 2013 2:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iron Oxide (Abandoned)
Replies: 16
Views: 6377

Re: Iron Oxide (Ch. 2, 2013-12-08)

I will be keeping an eye on this one, but so far it lives up to its title in another way. The chemical notation for iron oxide is FeO (with or without subscripts), which is also the Spanish word for ugly. This story's going to have its share of ugliness before it's done, I'll wager :| (not meant as ...
by dewelar
Sat Dec 07, 2013 12:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565896

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 27 up 12/4]

Again, removing the italicized spelling may already do enough there. *nods* Fixed this. I sat here trying to think about why I'd done that to begin with, and couldn't come up with a reason, so went ahead and removed it. Since I don't say it enough, I really do appreciate the depth at which you read...
by dewelar
Fri Dec 06, 2013 1:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565896

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 27 up 12/4]

Having read a little bit about that subject myself, I could totally imagine the stealing thing, though I still find the rape-thing a little bit of a stretch among 13-16 year olds...especially since Hanako was considered hidious. Farfetched for it to have happened to her? Yeah, I'll go along with th...
by dewelar
Thu Dec 05, 2013 11:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)
Replies: 144
Views: 175492

Re: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 1st Dec)

Also, bonus points: You had two of the heroines kiss, and it devolved neither into a omg-squeeee-fan love story nor a yuri scene. That might be a first! As much as I wanted to believe I could write it sexually, I couldn't bring myself to do it. It didn't fit in the narrative and would have been pre...
by dewelar
Thu Dec 05, 2013 12:52 pm
Forum: Support
Topic: Forum Question on Time
Replies: 2
Views: 1841

Re: Forum Question on Time

So in the States, we are no longer in DST and the forum time (at least on my end) still displays the time as such. Is it going to stay in DST all year round for simplicity's sake, or is it going to be changed for US users any time soon? (Not an issue if it won't, I'm just curious.) You can turn DST...