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Maybe instead of a time limit on discussion, we could say that once 24 hours passes without any relevant posts (as determined by Sea), discussion has concluded and we can start the next cycle.

I've gone ahead and put links to both of Crimson's pieces in their respective interludes. Thanks again for your effort, Crimson, and I will gladly do the same when the third is complete. Chapter 35 is about two-thirds written, so my recent pace of two weeks per chapter is on course, which should mea...

What I would like to think is that if Hanako's behavior feels unusual in this scene, it's because she finds herself in a scenario completely unlike anything in the visual novel, not because I screwed up and made her too personable. And, again, remember that we're looking at Hanako from the perspect...

Assuming you're doing multiple endings -- in the spirit of a pseudo-route -- your anniversary one shot has all the feel(s) of a bad-end epilogue. Or at least I hope it is the bad-end epilogue, heavens help us if it's the good-end one. Bad ending...yeah, sometimes I forget this is a pseudo-route, wi...

Wait, is that actually meant to be a canon epilogue to this route, or is it meant to be off of Rin's route? Because if it's an epilogue, that's pretty damn sad... :cry: I'm going to guess "neither", and that it's more of an alternate-future thing. I'm pretty positive it's not the latter, because if...

I've been giving this one a few listens, and I like it. I had to kind of refresh my own memory of what was happening with Hisao specifically at the time of the first interlude, and he was just starting to turn himself around but was still pretty depressed. I think what you've done with this fits nic...

One suggestion I'd like to make is that those participating in the club should read the chosen story "clean". In other words, only read the story itself, not any user comments or author's notes within the thread or elsewhere. I realize this could be difficult (i.e., Katawa Kijo itself has occasional...

Well, I haven't read this one yet, so I know what I'll be doing tomorrow... It's escaped me too, even though it's listed right next to 'Kagami pseudo-route' in the archive. Time to rectify that. Well, I didn't read it mainly because I tend to avoid stories that were written before the full release....

Well, I haven't read this one yet, so I know what I'll be doing tomorrow...

On a side note, I briefly mentioned somewhere on these boards that I read Ménage à 3 , and the way Iwanako described Lilly immediately brought to mind Zii's image of Didi. Now there's a connection I never would have made on my own... It probably helps that I re-binged the archive last night because...

Helbereth wrote:Additionally:

"Oh bother," Mutou muttered under his breath before he shook his head.

Now you've gone and made me replace my long-standing assumption that Mutou would sound like Ben Stein with that of Alton Brown.

Oh, bother...

And now I'm hearing him as Sterling Holloway...it's rather fun .

Okay, my thoughts... I didn't find the tea set bit problematic at all. It felt like a reflection of the first time Lilly invited Hisao to have lunch with them, and put Hanako into a corner of accepting. I think bhtooefr has the right idea, that while Hanako may have suggested the idea of bringing re...

Writing a solid-state story like this, which isn't really meant to be read in serial format, is bound to create some odd questions when the next part isn't available to answer your questions. For that, I apologize. Yeah, fair enough. *sigh* Maybe it's time for me to stop driving myself nuts and jus...

I didn't mean it quite that literally. My comment was directed at the stylistic choice you made here, not at...um...what is it you think I was accusing you of, anyway :? ? The fact that the stylistic choice in question was present from the beginning doesn't change my opinion of it. If future events...

Okay, Helbereth...you know I love your writing, and you know I love this story, and this chapter was great fun to read... ...but... ...am I still reading Tomorrow's Doom here? Yes, it is, 100%, been in the outline since week 1, but I can't really say much else without spoilers. Yes, it does feel li...