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Off to a good start. I like the framing device of older-and-wiser Hanako telling this as a story. A couple things I want to point out: I remember him telling me that his first thought on seeing me was, “How beautiful, but what if she thinks I’m staring at her as if she’s ugly?” His second thought wa...

Blank Mage wrote:My only thought is that 'forgo' might be spelled wrong, but I'm not sure. Seems like an ordinary statement to me otherwise.

Yeah, possibly. I actually originally had it "forego" and my spell checker yelled at me.

Appreciate the feedback. Back around the end of high school last year I was struggling pretty bad to come to terms with the fact that everyone has to move on from friends (not all, but some) when they progress on and what not. So this was really fun for me to write simply because I just applied som...

Enjoyed this story quite a bit. Given my own struggles to place Kenji, I like seeing any attempt to put his antics into a context. Also couldn't help but chuckle at this: I know there's someone out there in the future. It could be 20 years down the line, or it could be in two weeks. Yes. Yes it coul...

sanduba wrote:Also,

"It's all right, Hanako. Perhaps I should forgo the tea anyway and just get some rest."

What about it?

As always, thanks to all for the kind words! Enjoying the speculation, too! Another good chapter, as always. I still can't say I'm a fan of Yoshimura's involvement -- there's an aching in my bones that says it'll cause some horrid misunderstandings that, frankly, I'd expect better of. Otherwise, goo...

"We are now on final approach to Sendai Airport..." After spending the majority of the past two days in transit, I cannot imagine hearing more wonderful words. It will be good to be able to relax again, but more importantly I will finally be able to remove myself from the cycle of second-guessing t...

Dokuta-Fu Every time I see one of these terms, I want to stab someone in the face with a salad fork. FFS just say 'Doctor Who', instead of either completely confusing your audience, or forcing them to Google something utterly inane and irrelevant. Is that what that means? I thought perhaps it was s...

One other thing that does begin to bother me is that it looks like Hisao is going to get his Harem Ending in the afterlife. Boo. No… they're all different Hisaos. :) In their final moments, Shizune thinks of his hand, Emi thinks of their runs together, Lilly thinks of his voice, and so on. I've int...

Since I really don't have much to add to the overall positive response to this story, I'll chime in on this discussion instead. Personal pet peeve. I hate ellipses in fiction. Generally, ellipses are a vague substitute for the emotion or action the author actually intends. It's used instead of detai...

Ah! Evil! Evil, evil, evil, evil! ... And just a little bit beautiful, too... No other comment, for now. Well, okay, one more. Part 6 actually got to me a lot more than this one, because I knew what was coming. Now, I need to finish up my own next chapter before I read whatever's coming next. Yeah,...

Ah! Evil! Evil, evil, evil, evil! ... And just a little bit beautiful, too... No other comment, for now. Well, okay, one more. Part 6 actually got to me a lot more than this one, because I knew what was coming. Now, I need to finish up my own next chapter before I read whatever's coming next. Yeah,...

Ah! Evil! Evil, evil, evil, evil! ... And just a little bit beautiful, too... No other comment, for now. Well, okay, one more. Part 6 actually got to me a lot more than this one, because I knew what was coming. Now, I need to finish up my own next chapter before I read whatever's coming next. Yeah, ...

KeiichiO wrote:

Redoxide wrote:What is troll about disliking blindness? I would hate to be blind and I would really not like dealing with anyone that is blind, just an opinion.

And that's one reason why you're unlikable.

Indeed.

*makes note that I won't have to worry about dealing with Redoxide*

I shall focus on nitpicking with some of the key details later (would that be kernel nitpickering, I wonder). Oh, but wouldn't it be loverly if it were? I've just realised, though, that it's not so much about who's carrying a torch for Hisao: it's more like a torchlight procession. Indeed, especial...