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by dewelar
Fri Mar 28, 2014 1:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565915

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 37 up 3/

Thanks to all for the kind words! I wasn't sure what the reaction would be to Noriko here, but I'm glad the feedback has been generally positive. Granted, some of her biggest detractors haven't chimed in yet, so I might still take a hit or two, for which I was, and still am, totally prepared :). Goi...
by dewelar
Thu Mar 27, 2014 11:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573196

Re: Yamaku Book Club

Also, since the club is looking at different material all the time, perhaps that material should be mentioned in the title - kinda like how many of the longer stories get their new chapters and update date added to the title. I second this idea. Title should be something like "Yamaku Book Club (Now...
by dewelar
Thu Mar 27, 2014 7:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565915

Developments, Chapter 37

"O-okay," Hanako says quietly. I'm not sure what's going on with her right now, and part of me wishes I could stay. However, it's probably best that I take Lilly's hint after all and leave. "Okay, then. Give me a call when you've decided. I know you and Hanako can handle things from here, so I'll ta...
by dewelar
Tue Mar 25, 2014 12:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573196

Re: Yamaku Book Club

Since I finished the first draft of my next chapter a couple hours ago, I went ahead and started reading this. I'm surprised nobody's posted about it yet, but here are my observations based on a quick read: Yeah, the premise has been done to death, but I thought it was presented well. The writing wa...
by dewelar
Mon Mar 24, 2014 2:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 100075

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

A lot of small things, but most of all this line: ["Hello, Mom and Dad,"] I greet them with a smile, while signing for Shizune. They briefly glance at each other in surprise at the sight of me using sign language, but look on in stoic silence. ["I'd like to introduce my girlfriend, Shizune Hakamich...
by dewelar
Sun Mar 23, 2014 4:25 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: How to write the characters
Replies: 17
Views: 7008

Re: How to write the characters

the prankster thing... it's implied that she's quite a bit more experienced at pool than she claims, really. I think this can be chalked up to either self-deprecation, lack of confidence or simple humility. I could definitely see Hanako as being internally snarky, though, given her dim view of most...
by dewelar
Sat Mar 22, 2014 9:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Complete)
Replies: 74
Views: 56407

Re: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Part 6 up 20140322)

I think the main point wouldn't be to do with our perceptions of the two, but with Hanako's self-perception vs her perception of the other as they come together at Hisao's grave… :) Yeah, my comment wasn't directed at anything in the context of the story. Poetic license, unreliable narrator, seeing...
by dewelar
Sat Mar 22, 2014 8:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Complete)
Replies: 74
Views: 56407

Re: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Part 6 up 20140322)

Not canon, but there is this: http://www.katawa-shoujo.com/secret/santa12/src/02.It_was_all_a_dream.Mike_Inel.Fink.jpg Not canon indeed, but I confess that the fact that it was drawn by Mike Inel has given me a certain... bias in its favor. :oops: Well, sure, insofar as all the girls seem to have s...
by dewelar
Sat Mar 22, 2014 7:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Complete)
Replies: 74
Views: 56407

Re: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Part 6 up 20140322)

Continuing to enjoy this (this might be my favorite arc thus far -- really enjoying Storyteller Hanako!), and wanted to chime in on this discussion: Am I the only one, though, who's noticed the resemblance between (Hanako and Iwanako)? Nope. Leaty had to actually get Iwanako to change her appearance...
by dewelar
Fri Mar 21, 2014 11:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573196

Re: Yamaku Book Club

I think that falling back on the idea that Lilly would only fall in love with her because of her blindness is in itself antithetical, because as we see in the VN itself, Lilly can see faces, and whatever she happens to get her hands on. Hanako might not see it that way, but if the relationship ever...
by dewelar
Fri Mar 21, 2014 11:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573196

Re: Yamaku Book Club

I completely missed this whole cycle, but fortunately the piece was short enough to read quickly. I've already mentioned that I don't care much to read pre-full release stories, and here we have a pre-Act One story. However, since it's written by one of the devs, that makes everything about it fair ...
by dewelar
Wed Mar 19, 2014 10:56 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Can someone remember what scene Rin talks about the blind
Replies: 3
Views: 1734

Re: Can someone remember what scene Rin talks about the blin

She talks about him twice, IIRC, both in Act 1. The first time is in "Things You Can Do", the second in "An Aesthetics".

And yes, welcome to the boards!
by dewelar
Tue Mar 18, 2014 6:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573196

Re: Yamaku Book Club

I remember that one. It wasn't really bad, but there were a few things that put me off: One was the cliché "The offspring are younger copies of their parents" trope, sharing even the same disabilities in some cases. Get a bit overused in this story. The other thing was probably intentional, but the...
by dewelar
Tue Mar 18, 2014 2:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565915

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 36 up 3/

I wouldn't dare use (or even ask to use) a character in someone else's ongoing fic anyway, but she'd be up near the top of my list if I could. I don't know about Leaty, but in my case at least, a number of people have asked to use Kagami in various works of their own *nods* I can see why. Kagami is...
by dewelar
Tue Mar 18, 2014 11:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565915

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 36 up 3/

*If Developments was in parallel continuity with Mean Time to Breakdown , it would probably be Momomi, but that's neither here nor there... From what I've seen of Momomi, I'm not sure they'd get along that well. She's somewhat too abrasive for Lilly's tastes, at least outwardly. If they could get p...