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by dewelar
Thu Apr 17, 2014 9:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573196

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Shower Scenes)

My only suggestion is that we should try and avoid covering similar ground for a while. For instance, we've had Misha, we've had Miki, we've had Rin, we've had Hanako (sort of), so perhaps our next fic should avoid those characters as main characters. I'm also thinking something short to come back t...
by dewelar
Tue Apr 15, 2014 10:08 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Liking Shizune but not enjoying her route?
Replies: 158
Views: 45583

Re: Liking Shizune but not enjoying her route?

Oh believe me, I highly doubt it too. He most likely was with Yuuko and I... can't imagine Emi... dating... him. At all. He warns Hisao that Emi is pretty high up in the feminist ranks, and he thinks that Rin is a dude at first. Not that I believe it either, but I admit there's enough circumstantia...
by dewelar
Tue Apr 15, 2014 11:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 162172

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Anniversary Oneshot Added 2/24]

brythain wrote:We will forget you not.
Well said :wink:. Take care, and hopefully all shall be well soon.
by dewelar
Mon Apr 14, 2014 9:48 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Katawa Shoujo Folding@Home Team
Replies: 1023
Views: 296997

Re: Katawa Shoujo Folding@Home Team

This looks really interesting... for a couple of weeks now, I'm gonna need my laptop a lot for school, but as soon as Summer starts, I'm very seriously considering doing this. Does it cause massive slow down for anybody? I had it on high for a while, which seemed to slow me down somewhat, so I turn...
by dewelar
Mon Apr 14, 2014 6:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573196

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Shower Scenes)

I feel kind of bad that, twice now, a fic of Oddball's has come up and I feel like I don't have anything of value to offer by way of discussion. I will say that I have gotten more laughs from Oddball's overall body of work than any other author on these boards. The guy has a knack for writing comedy...
by dewelar
Mon Apr 14, 2014 11:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED 02/26/2015*
Replies: 124
Views: 64442

Re: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED*

far? ah, 'far more than what I am capable of'...missed a word. Is that grammatically correct though? I'd go with "far more than I would be capable of". Lilly, sighing "despotically"? That would be more Shizune's thing, wouldn't it? I can't find the right word for that one to be honest. Sighs...deje...
by dewelar
Mon Apr 14, 2014 11:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332253

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2/23/2014}

"Many torrents...difficulties surround her..."

May your life be no more disrupted by these changes than it needs to be. When you're ready to write, I'll be ready to read :) .
by dewelar
Sat Apr 12, 2014 11:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565920

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 38 up 4/

And btw, i only created the account here to post in this thread :^) And again, I am honored *bows*. Trust me, there's a reason. As long as it doesn't actually involve people holding the Idiot Ball , I'll be happy. Nope...unless I've screwed up something (in which case, I'd be the one holding it :oo...
by dewelar
Fri Apr 11, 2014 1:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Rika/Mutou/Akira (Updated 20201109)
Replies: 107
Views: 90124

Re: After the Dream—Other Material (Rika upd 20140412)

I must say I find Rika's character-voice very interesting and appealing. I have read even less Rika fic than I have Saki fic (i.e., I have read nothing beyond the original April Fools post and the occasional fic like TD where she has appeared as a side character), so it may be that it's based on som...
by dewelar
Fri Apr 11, 2014 1:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565920

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 38 up 4/

Good lord. You really stepped up your game for this one. I was wondering when Emi's own issues would start to surface, and you did an amazing job here. I love Emi and Meiko, and I really appreciated Emi's internal monologue. This is probably the chapter I've liked the most out of the last few; mayb...
by dewelar
Thu Apr 10, 2014 9:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565920

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 38 up 4/

First of all, thanks to all who left kind words since my last time through. Also, thanks very much to Mirage for summoning the proper counter-jinx and allowing me to keep my posting schedule, at least for this chapter! :D Also, to those who were looking forward to the shopping trip...that's on the d...
by dewelar
Thu Apr 10, 2014 6:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573196

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: A bowl of noodles . . .)

Sea wrote:Shower Scenes by Oddball
I like this story a lot, but I wonder if it might be a bit soon to repeat an author.
by dewelar
Thu Apr 10, 2014 2:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565920

Developments, Chapter 38

Hisao walks into the nurse's office, and damn it, I still can't look at him. Now I'm stuck out here, and all I can do is pace up and down this stupid hallway. Why did I let him go in first, anyway? The fifth time I go past the office door I open my ears, and I can sort of hear them talking in there....
by dewelar
Wed Apr 09, 2014 11:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573196

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: A bowl of noodles . . .)

Okay. That was interesting. I'm always a fan of seeing secondary characters get fleshed out more, and the backstory given for Mutou here was good. The problem was that I didn't feel any Mutou in the character as written. The person in this fic could have been a random guy off the street and it would...
by dewelar
Wed Apr 09, 2014 2:31 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Recommend a VN
Replies: 1746
Views: 485010

Re: Recommend a VN

In this light, if the "fight for who/what you love" line really was just mean-spirited, then... that really sucks. That's not funny mean, it's just mean. Really, really mean. Yeah, I think it was, and you're right. That was the point I was trying to make in my post. Sadly, it's an attitude I see fr...