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by dewelar
Sat Jun 07, 2014 1:36 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4980
Views: 1482582

Re: Ask!

Okay, I've been looking for an answer to this for a while, but haven't found it, so my apologies if this is a repeat question. What are the works of art that are hanging on the wall in Rin's dorm room? Were they existing works, or did someone create them for the game? If the latter, then are they me...
by dewelar
Fri Jun 06, 2014 7:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52890

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/5)

In my experience the rapid change in elevation hurts no matter what, but that might just be my ears. Well, I've flown a few times myself, but I never experienced any more pain than I did when driving a car in the mountains - nor have I ever seen another passenger doubled over in pain. That's why ai...
by dewelar
Fri Jun 06, 2014 2:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Emi's Arc/Akiko's Story (Complete)
Replies: 77
Views: 56294

Re: Interlude (20140509)

This one's for SpunkySix. Keep the faith, man. :) Okay... I told myself that I'd wait to read this stuff after I finished all of the canon routes, and that I'd read Developments first, (which I still plan to do after reading said routes) but I just sort of wandered in here and ended up reading it a...
by dewelar
Thu Jun 05, 2014 11:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52890

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/5)

“Hisao Nakai, Hanako’s wife and Kenji’s partner. Wife? Okay, so I didn't get a needle shoved in my arm today (car trouble.) Tomorrow, I promise. Also fixed. Thanks for that :). Heh...and here I thought that was intentional. It would have been funny if it was. Enjoying this so far, and quite interes...
by dewelar
Wed Jun 04, 2014 3:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565915

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 42 up 6/

As always, thanks to all for the kind words! Man, but Yoshimura is a jerk. Understandably, perhaps, but geez. Cut a scarred orphan some slack. Heh...of course, Noriko likely doesn't even know that she's an orphan, much less why, but even so... :) (It's a good thing you update this on a schedule, del...
by dewelar
Tue Jun 03, 2014 8:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565915

Developments, Chapter 42 (Notes at end)

I watch Hisao leave for his meeting with Lilly, and finally feel like I can breathe again. As I put away the chess set, I find that I can't keep myself from smiling in a way that I haven't in as long as I can remember. Despite my misgivings about that meeting, and about what's happened over these pa...
by dewelar
Tue Jun 03, 2014 6:15 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which ending do you consider to be the most canon?
Replies: 152
Views: 43065

Re: Which ending do you consider to be the most canon?

Velitation wrote:Eh, I still think the manly picnic is the canon ending, as there is no possibility for a sequel.
That's similar to why I voted for it - it's the only ending that's actually an ending :D.
by dewelar
Sun Jun 01, 2014 11:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573196

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Greater than the Sum)

It's funny that we read this story just when I've just picked back up on reading Deardrops to my friend. There was a lot about this story I enjoyed -- I thought the pacing was good, and for the most part the OCs were well characterized. I think I actually liked them better than the characters from t...
by dewelar
Sun Jun 01, 2014 8:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 100075

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

Hey, good to see you back! Literally this morning, I was commenting to someone that I was sad that this seemed to have "gone dormant". Very nice chapter once again :) . Liking your take on the Nakai parents very much here, and the whole bit with the light in the car was well done although it's got m...
by dewelar
Sun Jun 01, 2014 4:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565915

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 41 up 5/

It is 3:13 am. I have no Idea when I started reading, but I haven't moved from this spot since, not stopping since I began the first chapter. The only other thing I have read which has had the same effect was the VN itself. Excellent job. *bows deeply* Thank you very much. I continue to be amazed a...
by dewelar
Sun Jun 01, 2014 3:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Rika/Mutou/Akira (Updated 20201109)
Replies: 107
Views: 90124

Re: After the Dream—Others (Rika/Mutou/Akira Complete)

Well, some of it comes out in the last part of Misha's arc … "Crab in her liver?" Nasty way to die. Huh...I read right past that without even thinking about whether the Japanese word for cancer had the same etymology. Of course, it could just be Misha showing off her skill with English idioms :) .
by dewelar
Fri May 30, 2014 10:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565915

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 41 up 5/

To be completely honest, I'm still kind of skeptical about Hisao having fallen out of love with her like that, even after everything that has happened. I understand that he's gone through the coping process and everything. I mean, I'm not a certified Love Expert, but that kind of feeling doesn't ju...
by dewelar
Thu May 29, 2014 1:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565915

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 41 up 5/

And the way you end Hisao's relationship with Lilly is interesting too, though I'm not sure I could see 18y olds end a relationship that way. Still reads really well. Yeah, this was a concern I had, but as you say, the way it came out wound up reading nicely, so I left it that way. My thinking was ...
by dewelar
Thu May 29, 2014 1:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Shizune/Hideaki's Arcs (Complete)
Replies: 87
Views: 69476

Re: After the Dream—Shizune's Arc/Hideaki3 (upd 20140529)

'Sides, Akira was born the year ABBA disbanded, if I've calculated right. Yes, most likely she was born in '82, although late '81 is also possible, since we have no canon birth date. Akira loved it too! (Oops, the tinkling sound of smashed illusions fills the KS fanfic forum…) Heh...I can picture t...
by dewelar
Thu May 29, 2014 12:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Shizune/Hideaki's Arcs (Complete)
Replies: 87
Views: 69476

Re: After the Dream—Shizune's Arc/Hideaki3 (upd 20140529)

Well written, as always, but... Gawd, Mamma Mia ? Seriously? Ugh...I mean, I get it, but...ugh... "Akira needed something light-hearted. With open captioning for S-Shizune. So… I went d-downtown with Hideaki to find something for her and, well, I'm sorry we couldn't f-find anything better." *looks ...