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Specifically, it's meant to emphasize the separation of active thoughts from passive observations and their attendant reactions. And yes, it's meant to feel disjointed, at least to a degree. You've written chapters from many characters' perspectives so far and usually you emphasize that separation ...

I swear, I'm listening to a recording of the same conversation we had three months ago. Umm, wouldn't something like "I'm watching a replay of the same, etc." be a better word choice, considering? It would, wouldn't it? :) Fixed, and thanks! Loved the line about there not being "a decent game in th...

I can completely understand why she'd do it, even after of her... confrontation... with Hisao (even BECAUSE of that confrontation, because it put her more on edge), but... Hanako just had Shizune break into Lilly's room for her , because she was worried about Lilly. I'd say "break into" is a bit st...

Okay, coherent response ahoy, I hope :) -- still more brief than it deserves, though :| . Loving. This Chapter. So Much . :D Okay, so, where to start: I loved Shizune's POV. I'm very glad about that, and all the other positive feedback I've gotten. I mentioned to brythain a couple months ago that Sh...

Leaty wrote:Leighton Meester likes this and stuff

You know, it's a few hours early where I am, but this is the anniversary present this fic never thought it would get. I don't think I can compose a coherent reply just yet, but...thanks. Just...thanks.

Nah, it just seemed more natural to me that they'd hate each other as brothers. My brother and I have a pretty screwed-up relationship too, so I guess I just felt that was normal, but I can also see reasons they'd not like each other besides biological relations. I'm not so sure, to be perfectly ho...

Thanks for the kind words...jumping in early to respond to a couple of things... I didn't expect Lilly to be there. It...makes sense, though. And I like what you did with Shizune's mother, even though to the last I will defy that she is Satou. (I know the 1.2 update supposedly fixed that line, but i...

[[Tell Hanako we're sorry we couldn't help.] Hicchan is asking if there's anything we'd like him to do for us.] [No, let him be. He's better off keeping Hanako calm if she's that concerned.] Of course, we're ahead of things thanks to Hisao's recent help. I should thank him for giving me the chance t...

Blah, terminology for sexuality is complex. Thanks for the clarification. Agreed! I try to stay out of these discussions for that very reason, so posts like Leaty's are very helpful to me. I'm very conscious of how I express myself, and misusing words mortifies me -- especially in print/electronic ...

Instead of experiencing the events and emotions alongside Hisao, you're just reading them. There's no connection there. This I disagree with entirely. What you're saying implies that when I read a "true" novel (or, for that matter, watch a movie or play a linear video game), I can't experience the ...

thefail12 wrote:...long intermission...

You're new to this fanfiction thing, aren't you? My chapters are generally posted about two weeks apart -- and I'm one of the fast ones.

KeiichiO wrote:

CoffeeDrive wrote:The amount of Hanabros in the current active userbase is suffocating.

Wheres my Fellow Rin's Kin?

*Raises hand timidly*

Disqualified for not raising your foot.

Chapter 26: It took spending most of the past two days doing nothing but laying in bed, eating, and listening to my mom, but it paid off. Now Emi is the chicken! :P Also fixed, along with one you didn't catch in Chapter 14 :wink:. And if you haven't finished the re-read yet, you've still got at lea...

About...18 hours, maybe? I finished Emi's good end sometime after midnight, and started Rin's that evening. Emi's route just gave me such a positive feeling with the good ending that I wanted to get back into it quickly. There was a much longer gap between finishing Rin's ending and moving on to sta...

1. Emi - Good End 2. Rin - Good End 3. Shizune - Good End 4. Hanako - Good End 5. Lilly - Good End 6. Manly Picnic 7. Lilly - Neutral End 8. Emi - Bad End 9. Hanako - Neutral End 10. Shizune - Bad End 11. Rin - Bad End (after the fight) 12. Hanako - Bad End 13. Rin - Bad End (parting in the rain) Fo...