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by dewelar
Tue Aug 19, 2014 11:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After The Dream—MAIN INDEX (and secret Hisao arc)
Replies: 165
Views: 148451

Re: Interlude (20140820)

Suddenly I realise that the only real person in the room right now is Misha. The rest are… what? Collections of images. Multiple perspectives. I focus on Shizune, and see her young and old, single and attached, a mother, a daughter, a spouse… and many versions of those many aspects, and more. It's ...
by dewelar
Tue Aug 19, 2014 9:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565896

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.49 posted 8/1

As always, thanks to all for the kind words thus far. Going back to the interlude... In the immortal words of George Takei: Ohhhh myyy. I know I've mentioned it before, but you do know that Takei's is the voice I have in my head for Nurse, right? However, I think you're self-conscious enough as an a...
by dewelar
Tue Aug 19, 2014 7:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332247

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2014-2-23}

Yep, that definitely qualifies for mammoth-ness. Makes my new high of 8,300 look paltry. Keep in mind this is a large update , not a large chapter . There's, I think, five new scenes in total here (bringing the total number of published scenes up to seventeen, since Testing the Waters is inappropri...
by dewelar
Tue Aug 19, 2014 6:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332247

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2014-2-23}

Well, I'm getting a kinda serious surgery done on Monday, so I'm really hoping I can at least get the stories to my betas before that happens. Otherwise, it'll be about two weeks at the earliest before I can publish the story, which would suck, because I'm almost done (I just have to write the last...
by dewelar
Tue Aug 19, 2014 1:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565896

Developments, Chapter 48

It's Tuesday morning, and I barely keep my eyes open through eating breakfast, because I didn't get much sleep again last night. I thought everything had settled down yesterday, but apparently not. Actually, maybe it did, because this time it wasn't the same roulette wheel of nightmares that kept me...
by dewelar
Mon Aug 18, 2014 1:59 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 642381

Re: Random KS Discussion

Because he does not leave a mark on Hanako and Lilly ? sorry but you're just not objective and refuse to analyze seriously the characters that you don't like. Actually, I tend to think Lilly is the girl on whom Hisao had the least effect, and vice versa. As for Hanako, we don't even really see what...
by dewelar
Mon Aug 18, 2014 1:33 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 642381

Re: Random KS Discussion

Zykes wrote:
Broomhead wrote: Spoilers inbound:
What in the world?!
Yeah, it's not really a spoiler if half of it is wrong. To begin with, that's not even where the two endings diverge.
by dewelar
Mon Aug 18, 2014 1:03 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 642381

Re: Random KS Discussion

It kind of bums me out how weak Emi and Rin's friendship is in the end. I didn't realize that until I did Rin's route. They like to eat together and they help each other with their disability; no more, no less. Friendships based on circumstance. Rin and Emi were put together outside of their own co...
by dewelar
Mon Aug 18, 2014 11:10 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 642381

Re: Random KS Discussion

SpunkySix wrote:Can we move past the jimmy rustling to something a little... not that?
Since I missed this whole thing, allow me to state for the record: True Rin Kin are unaffected by jimmy rustling.
by dewelar
Mon Aug 18, 2014 10:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 149678

Re: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)

This was one of the first stories that got me hooked here, and one of the ones that inspired me to start writing as well. I may have disagreed with its direction at times, but I just used that as a jumping-off point to give Developments ' Hanako her own direction, so credit to you where it's due :) ...
by dewelar
Sun Aug 17, 2014 9:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573186

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Constant Companion)

And how well does he do Misha? Pretty well, I'd say, especially by Act 1 standards. I think this is right, but it also reminds me of why I don't like reading, let alone judging, pre-full-release stories. I discovered KS well over a year after its full release, so I don't have a place in my mind for...
by dewelar
Sat Aug 16, 2014 5:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573186

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Constant Companion)

That was...dense. I had a very difficult time reading that, given the lack of spacing and the fact that it was almost entirely Misha monologuing. I couldn't finish it in one go, which is unusual for such a short(ish) piece. It was basically sensory overload, which meant that I couldn't get into it, ...
by dewelar
Fri Aug 15, 2014 5:11 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favourite artworks - reprise.
Replies: 4044
Views: 968190

Re: Favourite artworks - reprise.

...although frankly, I don't know why people found the wheatfield scene to be so special either. There are scenes from Hanako's, Emi's, Rin's, and even Shizune's that envoke a lot more emotion--but then again, that's just me Rin. Dandelions. That is all. Rin. Rain. That is all. Heh...since there ar...
by dewelar
Fri Aug 15, 2014 4:09 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favourite artworks - reprise.
Replies: 4044
Views: 968190

Re: Favourite artworks - reprise.

Everyone goes nuts for the Lilly wheatfield scene...Because of course they do . But I always liked this one better. I can't remember if this was Lilly or Hanako's route... http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130627153040/katawashoujo/images/c/c1/Hanako_and_Yuuko_watching_fireworks.png That was Han...
by dewelar
Fri Aug 15, 2014 2:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573186

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Constant Companion)

I'm still waiting for my suggestion from a couple months ago (Starbursts) to come up for discussion. You told me it would be next, Sea! :x Argh! 'Constant Companion' should come after that then. Which starts a short queue, at least. Nah, that's not necessary. I already read this one anyway. I'll wa...