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by dewelar
Thu Sep 04, 2014 4:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565890

Developments, Chapter 49

After tossing and turning for what feels like hours, I push the time button on my alarm clock. It tells me that it's a bit after seven in the morning, an ungodly hour at which I should only be awake when classes are in session. At least my body's rhythms have finally adjusted to the time difference....
by dewelar
Wed Sep 03, 2014 11:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573181

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Classroom Game)

Cute story. My first instinct was to agree with Mahorfeus about The Question, but then I thought about it and decided that there are conditions under which it might actually make sense, because this is totally the kind of thing I could see a group of high school friends discussing when they're bored...
by dewelar
Wed Sep 03, 2014 8:35 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2006
Views: 456131

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

What if this was a game they used to play whilst running, he would pretend to be Wile E. Coyote and she would pretend to be the Roadrunner? I can imagine that, Young!Emi's running around shouting "meep meep!" and blowing her tongue at him. Emi's Dad is chasing her, keeping himself slow enough to ma...
by dewelar
Wed Sep 03, 2014 6:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 112869

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (updated 9/3)

bhtooefr wrote:but seriously, let's knock it off with the Hollywood narcolepsy.
Thirded. It's become the Error That Would Not Die, to the point that I can no longer take any story that uses it seriously.
by dewelar
Wed Sep 03, 2014 11:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565890

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.48 posted 8/1

Also, as I've mentioned before, remember that since this happens post-LNE, Emi never went through any of the growth she did in her own route, so you might say she started this race with a handicap. :wink:
by dewelar
Wed Sep 03, 2014 10:31 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2006
Views: 456131

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

What if this was a game they used to play whilst running, he would pretend to be Wile E. Coyote and she would pretend to be the Roadrunner? I can imagine that, Young!Emi's running around shouting "meep meep!" and blowing her tongue at him. Emi's Dad is chasing her, keeping himself slow enough to ma...
by dewelar
Tue Sep 02, 2014 10:46 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2006
Views: 456131

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

Shouldn't the positive assertion be proven? We have no evidence that it was hell apart from various people thinking it would've been hell for them in shizune's place. :) But which is the positive assertion :wink: ? If both, then both have been proven equally. Thus, everyone's headcanon is equally c...
by dewelar
Tue Sep 02, 2014 10:15 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2006
Views: 456131

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

Shouldn't the positive assertion be proven? We have no evidence that it was hell apart from various people thinking it would've been hell for them in shizune's place. :) But which is the positive assertion :wink: ? If both, then both have been proven equally. Thus, everyone's headcanon is equally c...
by dewelar
Tue Sep 02, 2014 9:49 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2006
Views: 456131

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

In fact, when Hisao suggests to her in her route that her father loves her, she replies [I know.] Who can make your life more hellish than someone doing it out of love? Trust me, for I know whereof I speak. :( *nods* Headcanon for Jigoro aside (I tend to think that this is who he really is, but was...
by dewelar
Tue Sep 02, 2014 7:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332240

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2014-2-23}

Is this payback for the Emi stuff? Because now you're making me feel ashamed of posting two status updates myself over the past couple of weeks... :oops:

But, seriously, it's always good to hear that progress is being made on this story :D.
by dewelar
Mon Sep 01, 2014 10:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565890

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.48 posted 8/1

It has always been the case that Emi wasn't as "poplar" as the other girls - though it's not as bad as in the olden days before the full release... Mmm...yeah, I do understand this. Still, as a writer, it always makes me wonder in the back of my head: "what am I doing wrong?" The fact that Emi had ...
by dewelar
Mon Sep 01, 2014 12:06 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2006
Views: 456131

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

Yeah, I got it from that scene where her classmate calls her that. Akira never addresses her as such in the VN, but since Akira has a very informal way of speaking, something like "Lils" is not out of character for her. Heh...and this is probably where I got it. At the time I started Developments ,...
by dewelar
Mon Sep 01, 2014 3:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565890

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.48 posted 8/1

Well, here I am awake at 3 AM because I finally figured out the last piece to put in place for my first draft. That means I'm only a day or two behind my usual schedule, and if that holds true the next chapter will probably be posted on Wednesday or Thursday. Things I have learned this week: - I can...
by dewelar
Sun Aug 31, 2014 1:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239263

Re: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -03/07/14

Recent conversation over at the YBC has gotten me wondering about something. Should the Library differentiate between works that are abandoned (i.e., the author has disappeared and the work hasn't been updated in, say, a year) and works that are intentionally incomplete due to author's decision (e.g...
by dewelar
Sun Aug 31, 2014 10:53 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2006
Views: 456131

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

It's an interesting thing to consider: if after LNE, Lilly couldn't bring herself to tell Hanako to go for it, and she herself didn't come back, what would've happened then in the equivalent of 'Developments'? Assuming everything else happens as it does, then Hanako leaves with Naomi and Natsume wh...