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by dewelar
Wed Sep 24, 2014 4:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565882

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.50 posted 9/1

Kenji dialogue, as written by dewelar. And hell hasn't even frozen over yet. Hey now! Kenji's had lines in this fic! :wink: Yeah, I can safely say that I won't, as interesting as it might be for him to split up from [girl x] many years later and go running off to whatever atelier Rin is living in a...
by dewelar
Tue Sep 23, 2014 7:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37944

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 9/22

No one will get that reference.... Is there a specific "cement sandals" reference, or is the cement just for the weight, dear? They're for the weight. The reference was to the Ed McMahon quote. Oh, the "You are correct, sir!" thing...I guess I'm no match for Carnac :|. I'll toss my Threepence into ...
by dewelar
Tue Sep 23, 2014 4:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37944

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 9/22

There's a difference between a hockey puck and cooking it through, though... I want my burgers cooked through, but you can do this without hockey pucking them or destroying the flavor. Of course, steak tartare is a dish that exists, so... I like a good medium-well burger, too (well done is definite...
by dewelar
Tue Sep 23, 2014 4:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37944

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 9/22

and you’re gonna make me where cement sandals at the bottom of the ocean.” This took me a few seconds to figure out, but I think you meant "wear" Whoops. You are correct, Sir! No one will get that reference.... Is there a specific "cement sandals" reference, or is the cement just for the weight, de...
by dewelar
Tue Sep 23, 2014 3:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565882

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.50 posted 9/1

Thanks to all new and continuing readers for the additional outpouring of kind words! What's interesting is that Hisao has seemed to fallen into the same trap that Lilly has. Given his reactions in past chapters to strife with Emi and Hanako, I willing to guess part of his indecisiveness -- the wind...
by dewelar
Mon Sep 22, 2014 7:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Library Anniversarie Collection
Replies: 99
Views: 39485

Re: The Library Anniversarie Collection

This was a nice little one-shot. My only real complaint is that the ground it treads feels somewhat well-worn, but it has enough warmth to make it feel more like settling into your familiar, comfortable easy chair by the fire than tossing and turning on a threadbare old futon in a cold basement :) .
by dewelar
Mon Sep 22, 2014 6:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Replies: 323
Views: 556293

Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Mirage_GSM wrote:
I thought a lot of things in this story were made too easy for Hanako.
I'm not quite certain what you mean by that...
To clarify, I was talking about external factors, not her psychosocial issues.
by dewelar
Mon Sep 22, 2014 11:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Replies: 323
Views: 556293

Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Learning to be part of a network of people and feeling comfortable with it would arguably be a rather significant gain in its own right, especially for Hanako, whose limitations were always more social than physical. This is a fair point, and one I probably could have mentioned. I just think perhap...
by dewelar
Mon Sep 22, 2014 5:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Replies: 323
Views: 556293

Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Okay, now that some reactions are starting to trickle in, I will post my thoughts. When I found out this was happening (during our exchanges about my use of Miss Yumi, I asked Guest Poster about the possibility of doing a chapter from her PoV, which led to the revelation that this was in the works),...
by dewelar
Sat Sep 20, 2014 3:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565882

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.50 posted 9/1

So, I came across this story, and honestly with how many chapters it had I was under the impression it was complete, and I found myself so engrossed into it that I just couldn't stop reading!! Thanks! It's always good to hear from new folks finding this story and enjoying it. Actually, I'm a bit su...
by dewelar
Fri Sep 19, 2014 8:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565882

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.50 posted 9/1

As always, thanks for all the kind words, and thanks to all who have taken time out from reading Sisterhood (myself included) to grace this story with their attention :wink:. c. Lilly's ' Who am I? ' immediately reminded me of Jean Valjean, and stuff associated with that. Hmmm...come to think of it,...
by dewelar
Thu Sep 18, 2014 11:00 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 642368

Re: Random KS Discussion

So, how does everyone think the Satous voted in today's referendum on Scottish independence? Akira for, Lilly against. The former likes the idea of independence against the odds; the latter is all for a stable relationship when two parties are geographically united. :) I also expect that Hiroyuki i...
by dewelar
Thu Sep 18, 2014 10:28 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 642368

Re: Random KS Discussion

So, how does everyone think the Satous voted in today's referendum on Scottish independence?
by dewelar
Thu Sep 18, 2014 9:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565882

Developments, Chapter 50

"No, Hisao, I can't do that. I'm not going to let you push her away over a little misunderstanding. I did that to you once, and it hurt us both. I can't let that happen to her, or to you. So," Emi says, closing her eyes, "it's better if we just stop talking about this, okay?" "But that's not..." "Ju...
by dewelar
Thu Sep 18, 2014 1:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Guilty [Two Shorts, Emi] Updated 9-17-2014
Replies: 8
Views: 3295

Re: Guilty [Two Shorts, Emi] Updated 9-17-2014

I like these quite a bit. I agree with AntonSlavik020 that I enjoyed the first one more, but both were good. If I had to point to something, I'd say that the first one was more suited to the third-person narrative style that you're using than the second one is. Anyway, I'll look forward to whatever ...