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*whew* That...was not an easy chapter to write. It was also nearly 10K words (it clocked in at about 9750), so also my longest chapter to date by a good deal. Still not to Helbereth levels, but hey, we can't all do that :wink:. As always, thanks to all for the kind words! Character development (and ...

"Here," I say as I stand up. I take the key to this room and put it on the table next to Lilly's right hand. To me, the memories here are starting to feel haunted, like the ones from Hokkaido. "T-take the key. I've had...enough of this room...for a while." Lilly's eyes start to water as she moves he...

Of course, the pedant in me must mention that if the witch doctor is from Haiti, she's more likely speaking French or the associated creole than Spanish, but would Hisao know that? Depends on how old she is, doesn't it :wink:? True enough :) . I sometimes wonder at Hisao's ability to make just the ...

Verrry interesting...as usual, I intend to enjoy this thoroughly until it gets bogged down in the inevitable battle scenes :wink:. Of course, the pedant in me must mention that if the witch doctor is from Haiti, she's more likely speaking French or the associated creole than Spanish, but would Hisao...

No problem. I-it's not like I get worried when you skip a chapter or anything... *looks around shiftily* Haha, like you can fool a fellow fanfic writer. (I do the same thing.) I guess it's the nature of the business. I still wonder where some of the commenters from the early chapters might be (Etok...

It's also probably why there's no mother figure in that particular picture too. :lol: I wouldn't blame her for bailing. Well, my own headcanon on that (on which Developments elaborates a bit) is that Shizune's mother is a lesbian, and left Jigoro after falling in love with another woman . For me, t...

Very interesting. I'm not sure I can say I'm enjoying these stories per se , but I can appreciate being forced to think :) . As I once told dewelar, I considered Lilly's 'neutral' ending to be the most useful for writing, since it ends in August and Hisao has some time to get his life back together ...

Still enjoying this story...just popping up again for:

Mirage_GSM wrote:Yes, I am aware of the second meaning of "ordinance"...

Well, except that the version related to weaponry is spelled "ordnance" .

As I've said earlier, this is my first attempt at writing smut, and while your criticism is valuable, and true, I think I got the actual smut part of the story fairly well, if you ask me. Well, yeah, I think we might all be able to agree that what's presented in this story does, indeed, qualify as ...

As I've said earlier, this is my first attempt at writing smut, and while your criticism is valuable, and true, I think I got the actual smut part of the story fairly well, if you ask me. Well, yeah, I think we might all be able to agree that what's presented in this story does, indeed, qualify as ...

KeiichiO wrote:

griffon8 wrote:My, what a lovely shade of violet this story has!

I'm not entirely sure what this means, but it sounds pleasant.

Depends on what you think about the color purple.

Is there a variant of Poe's Law that deals with sexual content? Because while I'm, like, 99% sure KeiichiO was going for parody, having read as many bad H-scenes as I have I could totally see someone actually having written something like this straight.

Told myself I'd get around to commenting on this eventually. I've been sick, and busy, and though I always read these updates as soon as I can, I like to wait until I actually have time to say things before commenting. No problem. I-it's not like I get worried when you skip a chapter or anything......

Heh, guess I'm the only one who caught the Last Unicorn reference, then... Thank god. Honestly, it would have been hard for me to miss, because a while back I was part of an RPG group where the GM based one of the adventures on it. Sadly, it was not well-received :(. At least your story has a TV Tr...

Heh, guess I'm the only one who caught the Last Unicorn reference, then...I've sadly not read the other two yet. And, believe it or not, I didn't mention the bird symbolism because it was so obvious (at least to me) that I didn't think I needed to... On a totally unrelated note, I'm a little bummed ...