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by dewelar
Wed Oct 22, 2014 10:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565869

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.52 posted 10/

Thanks to all for the kind words so far! Surprisingly, I think this chapter turned out to be the hardest so far -- having too many ideas can sometimes be a more difficult challenge than not having enough... Anyway, a couple things I wanted to address... I thought this was an error, but no, you're be...
by dewelar
Tue Oct 21, 2014 7:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565869

Developments, Chapter 52 (Part 2)

I knew this would happen. I knew talking about this with her would be a mistake, but I had to bring it up. I don't even know what she was going to say, but I wouldn't let her say it, because I had to say everything . I don't even know why this got me so upset, because I'm proud of what I did. No, wa...
by dewelar
Tue Oct 21, 2014 6:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565869

Developments, Chapter 52 (Part 1)

"Well, then, I guess I'll see you tomorrow, Hisao!" I say before starting off up the hill. I can't resist adding, "Morning talk, don't forget!" I catch a quick, yet satisfying, glimpse of the confused expression on his face before turning around and taking off. Unfortunately, this puts everything of...
by dewelar
Mon Oct 20, 2014 10:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
Replies: 1140
Views: 572103

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 10/17)

In a way, there is not one Hisao Nakai, but six , presented in the VN. (One for each girl + "manly picnic".) I'd actually argue that there are thirteen , one for each ending. At the very least, I can tell you with some authority that the Hisao of Lilly's Good Ending is quite different from the Hisa...
by dewelar
Mon Oct 20, 2014 10:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
Replies: 1140
Views: 572103

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 10/17)

In a way, there is not one Hisao Nakai, but six , presented in the VN. (One for each girl + "manly picnic".) I'd actually argue that there are thirteen , one for each ending . At the very least, I can tell you with some authority that the Hisao of Lilly's Good Ending is quite different from the His...
by dewelar
Mon Oct 20, 2014 2:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565869

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.51 posted 10/

You all are probably tired of getting updates like this, but this chapter has gotten...well, a bit out of hand. I'm not sure exactly when an update might be considered "Helbereth-scale", but this one is definitely going to be over 10,000 words (it's actually over 11,000 at the time of this post). I'...
by dewelar
Sun Oct 19, 2014 6:12 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favourite artworks - reprise.
Replies: 4044
Views: 968164

Re: Favourite artworks - reprise.

neio wrote:Rin got pregnant and grew arms?
No, obviously those belong to her fetus.

I think my favorite one might be Kenji. It's just perfect.
by dewelar
Sun Oct 19, 2014 12:39 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 642344

Re: Random KS Discussion

Mahorfeus wrote:Besides Miss Yumi, of course. :)

I was more referring to the medical staff. There is only so much that Nurse can do. Heck, even as Head Nurse, I doubt that he is the only one who has an office.
FTR, Developments also mentions a night-duty nurse helping Emi after she collapses at the track.
by dewelar
Fri Oct 17, 2014 11:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 19713

Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending, Updated Oct 16]

Hmmm...this story is starting to get interesting now.

One thing I want to note, though, is that you shouldn't be capitalizing the word following an ellipsis unless it's meant to be a new sentence.
by dewelar
Thu Oct 16, 2014 3:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 67960

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 11 up!

Okay, so I promised myself that I'd try to catch up with this if you ever slowed down your posting speed, and today I've got a bit of a block on the next chapter of my own story so I popped in for a look. The story's decent (I've only gotten up to A2S2), but I'm finding it hard to get into the chara...
by dewelar
Wed Oct 15, 2014 9:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573169

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Shades of Distinction)

brythain wrote:3. It gives us a look at the Junior/2nd Year dorm, which is very rare.
Because it doesn't exist as such, perhaps. Remember that Hanako has a neighbor who is canonically an underclassman (and who is not-so-canonically named Noriko :wink:).
by dewelar
Wed Oct 15, 2014 6:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573169

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Shades of Distinction)

Pre-full release, no white space between paragraphs, one-sentence paragraphs...ugh. It's like my worst KS-related reading nightmare. So, for the sake of my mental and ocular health, I must pass on this meeting. Sorry, SC.
by dewelar
Mon Oct 13, 2014 1:35 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: If the girls were rpg characters
Replies: 92
Views: 31136

Re: If the girls were rpg characters

I'm currently in charge of an RPG group for the blind and visually impaired. The group still plays using D&D 2E - the group was founded before the release of 3E, and they decided not to switch. We recently started a new campaign, with my friend to whom I read KS as the DM. She's running Emi as an N...
by dewelar
Mon Oct 13, 2014 1:13 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: If the girls were rpg characters
Replies: 92
Views: 31136

Re: If the girls were rpg characters

I'm currently in charge of an RPG group for the blind and visually impaired. The group still plays using D&D 2E - the group was founded before the release of 3E, and they decided not to switch. We recently started a new campaign, with my friend to whom I read KS as the DM. She's running Emi as an N...
by dewelar
Sat Oct 11, 2014 11:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Akira(?!): Walla Walla Bing Bang 10/31 Finale!
Replies: 49
Views: 17875

Re: Hisao and Akira(?!): Walla Walla Bing Bang Updated 10/10

Mirage_GSM wrote:Any policy against monologuing is a sound policy.
Indeed. I just finished reading through My Girlfriend Is the President, and couldn't help but be reminded of a certain scene in it here :) .