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- Wed Oct 22, 2014 10:27 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1559
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Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.52 posted 10/
Thanks to all for the kind words so far! Surprisingly, I think this chapter turned out to be the hardest so far -- having too many ideas can sometimes be a more difficult challenge than not having enough... Anyway, a couple things I wanted to address... I thought this was an error, but no, you're be...
- Tue Oct 21, 2014 7:01 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1559
- Views: 565869
Developments, Chapter 52 (Part 2)
I knew this would happen. I knew talking about this with her would be a mistake, but I had to bring it up. I don't even know what she was going to say, but I wouldn't let her say it, because I had to say everything . I don't even know why this got me so upset, because I'm proud of what I did. No, wa...
- Tue Oct 21, 2014 6:58 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1559
- Views: 565869
Developments, Chapter 52 (Part 1)
"Well, then, I guess I'll see you tomorrow, Hisao!" I say before starting off up the hill. I can't resist adding, "Morning talk, don't forget!" I catch a quick, yet satisfying, glimpse of the confused expression on his face before turning around and taking off. Unfortunately, this puts everything of...
- Mon Oct 20, 2014 10:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
- Replies: 1140
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 10/17)
In a way, there is not one Hisao Nakai, but six , presented in the VN. (One for each girl + "manly picnic".) I'd actually argue that there are thirteen , one for each ending. At the very least, I can tell you with some authority that the Hisao of Lilly's Good Ending is quite different from the Hisa...
- Mon Oct 20, 2014 10:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
- Replies: 1140
- Views: 572103
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 10/17)
In a way, there is not one Hisao Nakai, but six , presented in the VN. (One for each girl + "manly picnic".) I'd actually argue that there are thirteen , one for each ending . At the very least, I can tell you with some authority that the Hisao of Lilly's Good Ending is quite different from the His...
- Mon Oct 20, 2014 2:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1559
- Views: 565869
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.51 posted 10/
You all are probably tired of getting updates like this, but this chapter has gotten...well, a bit out of hand. I'm not sure exactly when an update might be considered "Helbereth-scale", but this one is definitely going to be over 10,000 words (it's actually over 11,000 at the time of this post). I'...
- Sun Oct 19, 2014 6:12 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Favourite artworks - reprise.
- Replies: 4044
- Views: 968164
Re: Favourite artworks - reprise.
No, obviously those belong to her fetus.neio wrote:Rin got pregnant and grew arms?
I think my favorite one might be Kenji. It's just perfect.
- Sun Oct 19, 2014 12:39 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Random KS Discussion
- Replies: 3060
- Views: 642344
Re: Random KS Discussion
FTR, Developments also mentions a night-duty nurse helping Emi after she collapses at the track.Mahorfeus wrote:Besides Miss Yumi, of course.![]()
I was more referring to the medical staff. There is only so much that Nurse can do. Heck, even as Head Nurse, I doubt that he is the only one who has an office.
- Fri Oct 17, 2014 11:53 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
- Replies: 45
- Views: 19713
Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending, Updated Oct 16]
Hmmm...this story is starting to get interesting now.
One thing I want to note, though, is that you shouldn't be capitalizing the word following an ellipsis unless it's meant to be a new sentence.
One thing I want to note, though, is that you shouldn't be capitalizing the word following an ellipsis unless it's meant to be a new sentence.
- Thu Oct 16, 2014 3:44 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
- Replies: 162
- Views: 67960
Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 11 up!
Okay, so I promised myself that I'd try to catch up with this if you ever slowed down your posting speed, and today I've got a bit of a block on the next chapter of my own story so I popped in for a look. The story's decent (I've only gotten up to A2S2), but I'm finding it hard to get into the chara...
- Wed Oct 15, 2014 9:19 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 573169
Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Shades of Distinction)
Because it doesn't exist as such, perhaps. Remember that Hanako has a neighbor who is canonically an underclassman (and who is not-so-canonically named Norikobrythain wrote:3. It gives us a look at the Junior/2nd Year dorm, which is very rare.
- Wed Oct 15, 2014 6:05 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 573169
Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Shades of Distinction)
Pre-full release, no white space between paragraphs, one-sentence paragraphs...ugh. It's like my worst KS-related reading nightmare. So, for the sake of my mental and ocular health, I must pass on this meeting. Sorry, SC.
- Mon Oct 13, 2014 1:35 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: If the girls were rpg characters
- Replies: 92
- Views: 31136
Re: If the girls were rpg characters
I'm currently in charge of an RPG group for the blind and visually impaired. The group still plays using D&D 2E - the group was founded before the release of 3E, and they decided not to switch. We recently started a new campaign, with my friend to whom I read KS as the DM. She's running Emi as an N...
- Mon Oct 13, 2014 1:13 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: If the girls were rpg characters
- Replies: 92
- Views: 31136
Re: If the girls were rpg characters
I'm currently in charge of an RPG group for the blind and visually impaired. The group still plays using D&D 2E - the group was founded before the release of 3E, and they decided not to switch. We recently started a new campaign, with my friend to whom I read KS as the DM. She's running Emi as an N...
- Sat Oct 11, 2014 11:21 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hisao and Akira(?!): Walla Walla Bing Bang 10/31 Finale!
- Replies: 49
- Views: 17875
Re: Hisao and Akira(?!): Walla Walla Bing Bang Updated 10/10
Indeed. I just finished reading through My Girlfriend Is the President, and couldn't help but be reminded of a certain scene in it hereMirage_GSM wrote:Any policy against monologuing is a sound policy.