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by dewelar
Sun Oct 25, 2015 2:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 201068

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}

So what exactly classifies something as 'yuri'? Does it specifically need to focus on a romantic aspect, or something specific? I honestly am not sure; I just associated the word with lesbians. Simply (or perhaps simplistically ) "yuri" is more about the target audience than the content -- it's mat...
by dewelar
Sat Oct 24, 2015 8:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 204
Views: 51242

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.30 Posted 7th October 2015)

Disclaimer: I’ve been informed that this chapter shares some themes with Dewelar’s Developments. I haven’t read Developments yet (I know, i’m sorry), so i’m not sure how much overlap there is, but I didn’t intend to infringe on anybody else’s work. Don't worry, I haven't read this, either :oops:, m...
by dewelar
Sat Oct 24, 2015 3:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 304024

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]

Hot damn that was some top-shelf praise. I'm vicariously glowing. *laughs* No kidding. At this point, I don't think there's any other feedback that I can get that will surprise me. Anyway, I promised a full reply to TheHivemind, so here goes: Something about stressful work weeks always seems to res...
by dewelar
Sat Oct 24, 2015 2:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 304024

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]

So, I just happened to be awake for...reasons, when I saw... :shock: ...I fancy you did Emi's path better than I did... *blink blink* You know, I never expected I'd have the need to employ a fainting couch until just now. Excuse me while I spend a few hours being blissfully incoherent. A proper repl...
by dewelar
Mon Oct 19, 2015 1:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200323 Objects in Space)
Replies: 1827
Views: 262687

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumes — [Shizune])

Regarding the Misha discussion (since I missed it :oops:), For Want of a Nail is a conundrum for me. Whenever I try to read it, I'll be getting into the parts involving Misha and/or Shizune, and then I'll hear a needle scratch in my head whenever I get to a part where other characters come into the...
by dewelar
Wed Oct 14, 2015 6:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200323 Objects in Space)
Replies: 1827
Views: 262687

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumes — [Shizune])

The Shizune-Misha pairing comprises the two characters with which I struggle the most in my writing. Since I consider brythain our Resident ShizuBro in Chief, it is heartening to hear he considers my take to be "great". I can't say I found AtD!Shizune to be soulless so much as simply distant , which...
by dewelar
Tue Oct 06, 2015 5:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 304024

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]

Thanks to those who have left kind words since the last time I was here. Sorry I haven't been on the boards as much lately, but I've been finding myself a bit less connected to KS of late. Not that I've been entirely disconnected, but the field of ideas has been laying more fallow than I'd like :(. ...
by dewelar
Fri Oct 02, 2015 1:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Blank Slate - (Updated 12-26) A Christmas Council
Replies: 131
Views: 25141

Re: The Blank Slate - (Updated 9-30) Acquired Immunity

I am running on three nights with little sleep, so it took me way too long to figure out what was going on here. Love it. Love. It.
by dewelar
Fri Sep 04, 2015 1:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200323 Objects in Space)
Replies: 1827
Views: 262687

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Update: Aug/Sep—Hanako)

Science fiction also doesn't seem to fit her image. Oh, I don't know. She did enjoy Dune , after all... EDIT: Actually, I don't think Hanako really cares much about the genre of what she's reading so much as whether or not she can relate to the characters of the story. However, I don't think she's ...
by dewelar
Wed Sep 02, 2015 7:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alca's One-shots - Out of the Loop (Post-Kenji End) [Update]
Replies: 14
Views: 2828

Re: Passage of Time (Post-Lilly Neutral Ending) [One Shot]

Thought, is 6/7 months necessary? Not to mention that, since Lilly leaves Yamaku in early August, 6-7 months later would set this story in February/March, which is almost graduation time in Japan. It's been quite a while since I've read through Lilly's route so I forgot the exact date when she left...
by dewelar
Wed Sep 02, 2015 6:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alca's One-shots - Out of the Loop (Post-Kenji End) [Update]
Replies: 14
Views: 2828

Re: Passage of Time (Post-Lilly Neutral Ending) [One Shot]

First of all, welcome to the forums! Not a bad little story. Who knew Akira had such lousy penmanship :D? A couple nitpicks: Thought, is 6/7 months necessary? Not to mention that, since Lilly leaves Yamaku in early August, 6-7 months later would set this story in February/March, which is almost grad...
by dewelar
Tue Sep 01, 2015 11:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hand of fate - An OC short
Replies: 12
Views: 2733

Re: Hand of fate - An OC short

Hmm...no, it still doesn't work, at least not without providing a fair amount of additional context. This Hisao feels like a totally different character than the one(s) in the VN... Hisao feeling different is part of the reason I'm afraid of writing the main cast and sort of why I'm writing here, t...
by dewelar
Tue Sep 01, 2015 10:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#65—'Unsaid')
Replies: 308
Views: 85850

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (37—'Course Selections') (2015090

This was fun. At first, I was trying to figure out where Yamaku got the money to hire a robot teacher, but it became pretty obvious quickly :). Also, for some reason, the last section brought this song to mind.
by dewelar
Tue Sep 01, 2015 4:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hand of fate - An OC short
Replies: 12
Views: 2733

Re: Hand of fate - An OC short

http://i.imgur.com/kOTWV0i.png Calling this a fanfiction of Katawa Shoujo is a disservice to both the piece (since it's well-written if a bit heavy on the purple prose) and the KS fanfiction community (since it's connection to the VN is essentially nonexistent other than the names of a couple peopl...
by dewelar
Tue Sep 01, 2015 4:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hand of fate - An OC short
Replies: 12
Views: 2733

Re: Hand of fate - An OC short

http://i.imgur.com/kOTWV0i.png Calling this a fanfiction of Katawa Shoujo is a disservice to both the piece (since it's well-written if a bit heavy on the purple prose) and the KS fanfiction community (since it's connection to the VN is essentially nonexistent other than the names of a couple peopl...