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by dewelar
Fri Oct 31, 2014 11:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565869

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.52 posted 10/

brythain wrote:Emi... she just flies...
Yes. Yes she does.

Off the cuff...

The soul is oft uplifted
The Emi when she flies
The fury of her countenance
Can take you by surprise
The life within you surges
You watch her make her turn
Forever feel the radiance
The fire within you burn
by dewelar
Fri Oct 31, 2014 11:41 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2006
Views: 456106

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

brythain wrote:Given a choice of male protagonists to empathise with, we'd either have Hisao or Kenji—and Kenji might be the less frustrating of the two to play, if we had a choice!
Hmmm...so, a visual novel where all the visuals are indistinct? Might be intriguing :D.
by dewelar
Fri Oct 31, 2014 8:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565869

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.52 posted 10/

Bit late as usual to the party (like how do I even miss the new chapter of the only fanfic im currently reading :shock: ) but this chapter put a very big smile on my face. So happy for Emi right now and even teared up with the Meiko/Emi scene. Thanks very much. These kinds of comments always bring ...
by dewelar
Fri Oct 31, 2014 8:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#71—'Returns')
Replies: 322
Views: 178237

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (05—Halloween Special) (20141031)

I would have been Quite Interested to see how the mosaic Developed had it taken that path. I know of your fondness for first love über alles , so I expect its shape would have been quite different. I also wonder what path it might have taken had you gone from a particular Bad Ending instead of the N...
by dewelar
Wed Oct 29, 2014 3:05 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Why does shizune hate lily?
Replies: 37
Views: 16038

Re: Why does shizune hate lily?

I don't think Shizune hates Lilly so much as she sees her as a rival, and therefore somebody to compete against. If anything, I think Lilly's opinion of Shizune is worse than the other way around. Their opinions on a lot of things differ widely, leading to a lot of arguments, but I don't think it ri...
by dewelar
Tue Oct 28, 2014 2:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Before Yamaku - the events leading up to KS
Replies: 8
Views: 4723

Re: Before Yamaku - the events leading up to KS

I'm now going to expand it, and maybe rewrite it as all third-person, so I can more easily include all the other people affected by the events (like you suggested). I'm still trying to find my "groove" in terms of narrative mode, I'll try sticking to one this time. Looking forward to seeing what yo...
by dewelar
Tue Oct 28, 2014 1:32 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favourite artworks - reprise.
Replies: 4044
Views: 968164

Re: Favourite artworks - reprise.

This thread suddenly became 'favourite artworks — reprisals'. :D I always think of Emi as Summer and Rin as Autumn. Misha is all four seasons, cyclically. Misha at her old school is winter. Misha after transferring to Yamaku is spring. Misha after meeting Shizune is summer. Misha after confessing t...
by dewelar
Mon Oct 27, 2014 8:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life doesn't loop like a musicbox tune (one shot)
Replies: 9
Views: 3949

Re: Life doesn't loop like a musicbox tune (one shot)

brythain wrote:
81pi81 wrote:
- It's Hisao... He... He's...
in Hanako's bed? :D
... declared his love for Shizune?
...building a shrine outside your door?
by dewelar
Mon Oct 27, 2014 11:29 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Recommend a VN
Replies: 1746
Views: 484956

Re: Recommend a VN

I just finished reading Period , and I have to say I am very surprised at the lack of attention this has gotten, both here and on the 'Net generally. Yes, I realize that a lot of that is due to the typical Littlewitch artwork, which is very much tailored to...certain tastes, but the story itself is ...
by dewelar
Mon Oct 27, 2014 10:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 19713

Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending, Update 8a]

CloudGrain wrote:After just a few minutes, I notice both Lilly and Hanako sometimes casting a somewhat concerned gaze over at me,
Hmmm...something not quite right here... :wink:
by dewelar
Sun Oct 26, 2014 9:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565869

Re: Developments, Chapter 50

Something I just came back to, after listening to stuff in the music thread... When I don't respond right away, Lilly continues, "Hisao, I'd say the fact that you have to think about it at all is important. Wouldn't you?" And maybe one day I'll get to see your smile, in the arms of someone who love...
by dewelar
Thu Oct 23, 2014 4:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 19713

Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending, Updated Oct 22]

I really, really like the explanation you give for the tea room. It makes perfect sense and just fits really nicely. Actually, this confused me. Is Lilly saying that the class reps have meetings separate from the Student Council? Because if Lilly means the Student Council, there's no way it would m...
by dewelar
Thu Oct 23, 2014 4:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 19713

Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending, Updated Oct 22]

I really, really like the explanation you give for the tea room. It makes perfect sense and just fits really nicely. Actually, this confused me. Is Lilly saying that the class reps have meetings separate from the Student Council? Because if Lilly means the Student Council, there's no way it would m...
by dewelar
Thu Oct 23, 2014 1:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Before Yamaku - the events leading up to KS
Replies: 8
Views: 4723

Re: Before Yamaku - the events leading up to KS

I enjoyed it. Can't really say much without echoing what was already said, but for a first piece, it was solid. The only thing is I always thought Mea was a girl. I can't remember if Hisao's friends are mentioned in the VN or are just accepted fanon(It's been way too long since I've played through ...
by dewelar
Thu Oct 23, 2014 12:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565869

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.52 posted 10/

Isn't it nice to be finally able to smile for the characters again? Was nice knowing that something good would be in store for Emi at the end of this chapter after seeing her worry so much. *nods* It felt good to write it, too. Very cathartic :) . Now overall I'm actually not quite sure if I liked ...