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by dewelar
Sun Sep 22, 2013 12:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565836

Developments, Chapter 16

"BEEP...BEEP...BEEP..." Ugh...what...time is it? I reach out and press the alarm button on my clock, then the time button. Its robotic-sounding voice tells me it's eleven-thirty. Why did I set it for that time? And...where am I? As my mind slowly comes around, I remember why I wanted to make sure t...
by dewelar
Sat Sep 21, 2013 6:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565836

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 15 up 9/18

A quick update: Good mojo alert! Chapter 16 is nearly finished, and should be up either tonight or tomorrow, allergies or no. However, I am...not altogether happy with how Chapter 15 turned out, and am considering doing at least a partial rewrite. I think I may have been too quick on the draw in pos...
by dewelar
Sat Sep 21, 2013 2:26 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Shizune Arc (misha, jigoro)
Replies: 204
Views: 63448

Re: Shizune Arc (misha, jigoro)

Just try playing Act 1 with the assumption that is the case and you'll see why I thought that. Yes, I'm sure going into a route with weird preconceived assumptions would color the experience a fair bit. :lol: But it's still a stretch. Well, that assumption wasn't disproven and the more I played, mo...
by dewelar
Sat Sep 21, 2013 2:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Hisao's Gift (a short story)
Replies: 29
Views: 16543

Re: Rin: Hisao's Gift (a short story)

Another "above the norm for the demographic" chipping in to say I really enjoyed this story. There are so many stories that involve characters from KS either dying or already dead, and I generally have a distaste for them for various reasons (for instance, the FluffAndCrunch stories tend to leave me...
by dewelar
Wed Sep 18, 2013 1:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565836

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 15 up 9/18

Lillybros assemble Indeed. Without spoiling too much, the next chapter will (finally) be Lilly PoV. Great chapter (as always), looking forward to see how this goes on Thanks. also, do you update this on a schedule or are you just updating it whenever you feel like it? Cuz' im'a be leaving for a sch...
by dewelar
Wed Sep 18, 2013 11:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565836

Developments, Chapter 15 (Notes at end)

"Why don't I just go find a vending machine for some drinks? Be back soon!" With that and a wink, Emi thankfully leaves the room, giving me the opportunity to put my pants back on without further embarrassment. I let out a long breath as I stand up. What's been going on with me today? Maybe I'm just...
by dewelar
Tue Sep 17, 2013 11:51 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Shizune Arc (misha, jigoro)
Replies: 204
Views: 63448

Re: Shizune Arc (misha, jigoro)

ProfAllister wrote:many excellent and insightful words
Demonstrating once again why you are my favorite poster on these boards. Well said.
by dewelar
Sat Sep 14, 2013 5:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 75232

Re: Blossom - Chapter Four: Cityscape [Part One]

This chapter was kind of an accident. When I write, I just kind of let things play out and flow without my input, and I somehow managed to add a city scene without having any notes for it. *nods* Often you'll find you do your best work this way. The chapter feels like it's writing itself. I liked t...
by dewelar
Sat Sep 14, 2013 11:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565836

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 14 up 9/13

On an unrelated note: This whole board has been oddly quiet these past 24 hours or so. Did everyone come down with a severe case of paraskevidekatriaphobia? been busy playing the games i got off the humble indie bundle Oh, yeah, new one came out Wednesday. A worthy endeavor, then :) . I quite like ...
by dewelar
Sat Sep 14, 2013 9:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565836

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 14 up 9/13

Yay new chapter! Possible grammar error here below. After my sprints and a quick visit to the nurse, I make my way up to the girls' dorm. As I open the door to my room, a familiar voice Rins out from across the hall. Totally intentional. :) On an unrelated note: This whole board has been oddly quie...
by dewelar
Fri Sep 13, 2013 1:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565836

Developments, Chapter 14

"Dear, are you sure you don't need help with anything?" "No, Mom, it's fine." "You're making an awful lot for just you, and I know Rin doesn't eat much..." "It's not for Rin. I promised I'd make something for my new running partner." "I see. So, am I going to get to meet this one?" "Mom, it's not li...
by dewelar
Thu Sep 12, 2013 10:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239243

Re: The great fan fiction archive

ProfAllister wrote:(Side note: The Great And Powerful Archivist may want to consider including "Major Characters" as a category).
This has merit as a concept, but might be too subjective to be feasible.
by dewelar
Thu Sep 12, 2013 10:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Inner Peace
Replies: 8
Views: 4495

Re: Inner Peace

Anyway I am thinking of writing maybe another short (longer this time XD) to do with Hanako before she ever came to Yamaku. A story less inside her head than this one, more just how she coped. Anyway It's not a promise or anything, I would just like to know if people would want to see something lik...
by dewelar
Thu Sep 12, 2013 12:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565836

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 13 up 9/8]

A quick update, given that this will soon become the longest I've gone between posting chapters. I expect Chapter 14 to be ready within a day or two. I've been rewriting my outline over the last few days, mainly because this story as a whole has wound up with a different structure than I originally ...
by dewelar
Wed Sep 11, 2013 9:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369502

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 09/11/13 ~ C.41 - Phone Tag

Hoitash wrote:
Helbereth wrote:The one you should probably ask for a better understanding of writing Kenji would likely be Hoitash, though.
Thanks :)

I think.
Be careful, I may just do that ;) .