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Sorry for the continuing delay on this chapter. Allergy season continues to play havoc with my head, and thereby with my sleeping pattern :|. The chapter has also been particularly troublesome to get right as far as structure / flow. It is now finally nearing completion, and I expect to have it up b...

Also sorry to see this abandoned.

Hanako Nakai wrote:Deleted, sorry about bothering anyone with my useless writing.

However, I can't help but wonder if, given your screen name, this sign-off was meant to be significant .

[Okay this really took me forever to type up because I'm terrible with words and am simply incapable of describing some thoughts that I've had about this. So if the above doesn't make sense or sounds like bullshit either way, I wouldn't be surprised. The basic idea is that I feel like your pacing i...

*nods*

Excellent.

I don't really think I can say any more than that, except thanks for continuing to work at this.

Here: He gets up and walks over to the window, leaning his arms on the sill. Huh. Totally missed that. It's funny this got mentioned, because it was the source of some consternation on my part. As I was looking at the game graphics while writing this, I noted that the...object under the window in t...

I arrive at the tea room about half an hour before lunch time. I've been trying to convince myself that having lunch with Hisao today is no different than it's been since we met, but it really hasn't helped much. There have been times when my life seemed something like a high-wire act, but now it's ...

TL:DR - I don't think whether a story was written before or after the full release is all that relevant for the enjoyment of the story. Of course not. I can't speak for Blasphemy, but my original thought was that it would be a flag, basically with the message of "don't be surprised if this story fe...

I would say that's only true if the story is OC-centric. Otherwise, there's a high likelihood of continuity clash. Even if Hisao is the protagonist and the pairing is with one of the canon girls, the story will either be a divergence from canon or just a retelling of the original story. If it's jus...

There are no fics based on the beta, because the beta is basically the finished VN plus a few typos, and also because most of the beta testers don't even write fanfiction here. *nods* If a fic is based on Act 1, that info is already in the section "Begins", e.g. "after Act1 - Hanako end". Yes, but ...

Just had a thought on something that might be useful for categorization. I think it should probably be noted somewhere in a fic's description whether it was written based on the Beta, Act 1, or Full release of KS. This can generally be determined by original posting date (with a few exceptions, like...

I wasn't quite sure if I expected Hanako do outright ask if she'd be allowed to make a move for Hisao but then again, this Hanako has been willing to take steps forward and desperate times ask for "desperate" actions, besides Lilly trying to get it out of her anyways. So while I had to think about ...

Not naive so much as just...dense, maybe? You asked her to do the one thing she's told you repeatedly she can't do properly: express herself with words. Bad Hisao.

Just popping back in to thank everyone for the kind words and support. I admit to still being a bit overwhelmed by the positive response to this story overall. No idea yet when Chapter 17 will be out (I've only just gotten a start on it), but for now I'm going to leave Chapter 15 as-is. I've decided...

My friend to whom I read KS just commented to me that she could hear this song fitting into the soundtrack of the game. Not sure myself, but thought it was worth sharing anyway .

I'm a bit unclear about the time here... Its robotic-sounding voice tells me it's eleven-thirty. In the morning or in the evening? Most people wouldn't set an alarm for 11:30 in the morning, but... Given how late it is at Yamaku, I don't have time to ponder this thought further. If it's 11:30 in th...