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by dewelar
Thu Oct 10, 2013 10:52 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Yamaku's Swimming Pool
Replies: 274
Views: 70099

Re: Yamaku's Swimming Pool

More likely, Hanako would wear something like this. Whether that's worse or better is in the eye of the beholder :) .
by dewelar
Wed Oct 09, 2013 12:54 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Yamaku's Swimming Pool
Replies: 274
Views: 70099

Re: Yamaku's Swimming Pool

Jobriq wrote:What if when Hisao decides to exercise, instead of going to the track, he went to Yamaku's swimming pool?
Tomorrow's Doom happens.
by dewelar
Wed Oct 09, 2013 1:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565855

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 19 up 10/8

Didn't she want to invite him to the city that day? *nods* The idea is that she and Hisao got preoccupied with the leg thing, so it got put off until after visiting the nurse. Thus, it will be part of the "call him later" bit :) . Good chapter. A bit longer than usual if I'm not mistaken. Thanks. A...
by dewelar
Tue Oct 08, 2013 9:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565855

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 19 up 10/8

Interesting effect, what you did with the poem, to show that Emi's having trouble. Thanks. I didn't get any comments on the original presentation, so I wasn't sure how it would play. during which I scratch a certain itch that developed after my run I see what you did there. That said, would Emi bea...
by dewelar
Tue Oct 08, 2013 8:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565855

Developments, Chapter 19

What were you thinking, Ibarazaki? As I run up to the nurse's office, I wish these legs were flexible enough to allow me to kick myself. That was your moment! Why the hell didn't you just kiss him, you idiot? I guess I know the answer to that question, though: he's starting to make me nervous. Ever...
by dewelar
Mon Oct 07, 2013 6:53 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Lilly's Route (SPOILERS)
Replies: 135
Views: 38038

Re: Lilly's Route (SPOILERS)

There's also some decent evidence that Akira would prefer that Lilly stay in Japan. If Akira herself couldn't talk her into it, then she probably figured Hisao to be the only one who could. That would make sense. But I'm interested in seeing the evidence you mentioned, can you point me to it? Think...
by dewelar
Mon Oct 07, 2013 4:21 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Lilly's Route (SPOILERS)
Replies: 135
Views: 38038

Re: Lilly's Route (SPOILERS)

*nods* One wonders if she had even told Hanako. I tend to think not, because I doubt she would have been able to keep it to herself for any length of time. Hanako is like the master of keeping things to herself... Yes, but generally that applies to her own issues. When her friends are the ones hurt...
by dewelar
Mon Oct 07, 2013 3:47 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Lilly's Route (SPOILERS)
Replies: 135
Views: 38038

Re: Lilly's Route (SPOILERS)

Hearing it from Akira less than a week before the flight, it would only be natural for Hisao to wonder if she planned on telling him at all. I'm thinking Akira told him specifically because Lilly was letting it go so long — Akira felt bad for the guy. There's also some decent evidence that Akira wo...
by dewelar
Sun Oct 06, 2013 6:39 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Lilly's Route (SPOILERS)
Replies: 135
Views: 38038

Re: Lilly's Route (SPOILERS)

Really, it's all about how you interpret her answer to the question of how long ago she knew she was going. Specifically, she says "Some...time". It's pretty much the height of being vague, because that could literally mean anywhere from a second ago to a month ago. For my own part, I tend to believ...
by dewelar
Fri Oct 04, 2013 11:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji-Concrete Jungle Conclusion Update
Replies: 55
Views: 20371

Re: Hisao and Kenji-Concrete Jungle Updated 10/03

Something tells me this installment made people so uncomfortable that they're afraid to comment... Yeah, I was afraid of that. I was going for a major noire feeling with this fic, and I think I succeeded a bit too well. Admittedly, this is even more outside the realm of stuff I generally enjoy than...
by dewelar
Fri Oct 04, 2013 11:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565855

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 18 up 10/2

You know, something I just thought of... The drabble in which Shizune plots to help Hisao out... Is that referring to forcing him into a Student Council meeting that Lilly also has to attend, to try to push them back together (referring to the events of Farewell)? Or to a future event in this story...
by dewelar
Thu Oct 03, 2013 6:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239250

Re: The great fan fiction archive

No, I won't do a wordcount until a story is completely finished. (and for stories with a lot of chapters it would be nice if the author could send it in...) If this is at all directed toward me, I could easily send in a word count for Developments, but I didn't think they were desired for ongoing s...
by dewelar
Thu Oct 03, 2013 6:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 75234

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update: 03/10/2013]

I have to agree with Fc360. I wasn't sold on the first couple of chapters, but I'm definitely seeing a lot of improvement in the more recent ones. Nice job. I'll save my judgment on whether the ending works or not until I see where it goes :) . Also, I know what you mean about reading your own work....
by dewelar
Thu Oct 03, 2013 11:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565855

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 18 up 10/2

First off, thanks to all for the kind words. A few comments: I thought that the whole scene with Emi was going to lead up to an impulsive kissing/confession scene, especially after what Emi said. I considered this, but decided against it for a number of reasons. Hopefully they'll become clear over t...
by dewelar
Wed Oct 02, 2013 10:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565855

Developments, Chapter 18 (Notes at end)

I walk out of the tea room, still not really knowing what to think. On the walk back to my dorm, I try my best to keep myself from thinking about Lilly again. As with every other such effort, I fail, even though I know doing so has yet to bring me any closer to an answer. My mind reached its saturat...