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by dewelar
Thu Oct 17, 2013 10:08 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The best written route?
Replies: 60
Views: 21443

Re: The best written route?

Sea wrote:
Lianam wrote:
yukineko wrote:Lilly's route was the wettest for me
Xanatos wrote:It was the wettest for her too. 8)
I knew someone was gonna say that...
Yeah, because there was a bathtub.
And tears.
by dewelar
Wed Oct 16, 2013 6:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Osmosis
Replies: 29
Views: 11176

Re: Rin: Osmosis

When I started reading, I wanted to ask you why the heck you would start a story with a dream sequence. Dream sequences can be used to give a bit more insights into a character's subconscious, but at the start of a story you have no idea about that character's current situation, no way to interpret...
by dewelar
Tue Oct 15, 2013 6:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Osmosis
Replies: 29
Views: 11176

Re: Rin: Osmosis

Heh...I happened to be on the board as you were posting this, and hovered here reading each post as it appeared. I enjoyed this trip thoroughly :D .

And yes...some people don't need to talk in order to talk, indeed...*sigh^
by dewelar
Mon Oct 14, 2013 8:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Like Fire and Powder: A Suzu epilogue (Complete)
Replies: 55
Views: 21107

Re: Like Fire and Powder: A Suzu epilogue (Ch. 5, 2013-10-14

Your fears were correct. Suzu went back to Hisao after that. I think that's completely in-character for her to forgive someone at least once, even for something rather heinous, especially if it's someone she deeply loves. I mean, she forgave Kenji (who she barely knew) for kidnapping her. In fact, ...
by dewelar
Mon Oct 14, 2013 11:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565861

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Interlude 2 up 10/14]

True enough. However, in every fan-verse there are things that are portrayed in a certain way nearly universally (e.g., as mentioned in another thread, that Kenji's never-named-in-canon ex-girlfriend is Yuuko), to the point that it gets questioned when portrayed otherwise. I certainly wouldn't be a...
by dewelar
Mon Oct 14, 2013 11:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565861

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Interlude 2 up 10/14]

In my opinion there is no such thing as "established fanon." Those words are mutually exclusive. True enough. However, in every fan-verse there are things that are portrayed in a certain way nearly universally (e.g., as mentioned in another thread, that Kenji's never-named-in-canon ex-girlfriend is...
by dewelar
Mon Oct 14, 2013 1:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565861

Developments, Interlude 2: The New Class Rep (Notes at end)

It's still a couple hours until I'm supposed to meet Hanako for lunch when I head down to the main building. I have something I want to ask, so I'm hoping to catch her in the library, or at least in the tea room. I'm carrying an armload of books, which I'd been procrastinating at returning, so I hea...
by dewelar
Sun Oct 13, 2013 10:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239256

Re: KS Fanfiction archive - Submit your works!

Comrade wrote:"Yamaku library-a fan fiction archive"
This works for me.
by dewelar
Sun Oct 13, 2013 6:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239256

Re: KS Fanfiction archive - Submit your works!

Comrade wrote:Does anyone have any better names for the archive? It has to have "archive" in the name
Does it? Why not just call it The Yamaku Library?
by dewelar
Sat Oct 12, 2013 12:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Like Fire and Powder: A Suzu epilogue (Complete)
Replies: 55
Views: 21107

Re: A Suzu good-end epilogue (Ch. 3, 2013-10-11)

Although I predict a near-death experience somehow linking to an undeserved Suzu forgiveness resulting in a better relationship, I hope for a "Hisao dies, and Suzu gets with Miki" Yeah, that would be what I was thinking when I said "Kind of dreading where this is going now" (well, except for the la...
by dewelar
Sat Oct 12, 2013 11:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565861

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 19 up 10/8

A quick update: The next chapter has been proceeding somewhat slowly, but is proceeding. I'm trying something a little more ambitious with it, so hopefully it turns out well. However, I refuse this time to predict when it might be ready. A few general comments: First of all, thanks again to everyone...
by dewelar
Fri Oct 11, 2013 9:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Like Fire and Powder: A Suzu epilogue (Complete)
Replies: 55
Views: 21107

Re: A Suzu good-end epilogue (Ch. 3, 2013-10-11)

I will note that Hisao can act rashly when impassioned, even when sober. Just look at Lilly's good end. And, even more to the point (and with less rashness, given that he wasn't literally trying to run through a heart attack), look at Rin's route, where he snaps in anger at her. And he's very frust...
by dewelar
Fri Oct 11, 2013 8:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Like Fire and Powder: A Suzu epilogue (Complete)
Replies: 55
Views: 21107

Re: A Suzu good-end epilogue (Ch. 3, 2013-10-11)

Let's just say drink can do some funny things. *nods* I have some experience with the matter, having grown up with an alcoholic mother. Based on that, and what I've read, alcohol cannot make you act outside yourself. By that, I mean that in order for someone to haul off and hit another person, it h...
by dewelar
Fri Oct 11, 2013 8:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Like Fire and Powder: A Suzu epilogue (Complete)
Replies: 55
Views: 21107

Re: A Suzu good-end epilogue (Ch. 3, 2013-10-11)

Interesting choice of quote. (Logical, from the events of this chapter.) What's funny is that I'd forgotten you were looking for an appropriate quote for the title until after I'd posted this. Don't know what direction this is going yet, so not sure it would fit either way :) . I haven't posted in ...
by dewelar
Fri Oct 11, 2013 7:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Like Fire and Powder: A Suzu epilogue (Complete)
Replies: 55
Views: 21107

Re: A Suzu good-end epilogue (Ch. 3, 2013-10-11)

"These violent delights have violent ends
And in their triumph die, like fire and powder,
Which, as they kiss, consume."

- William Shakespeare, Romeo and Juliet