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by Numb
Fri Aug 15, 2014 5:02 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favourite artworks - reprise.
Replies: 4037
Views: 420871

Re: Favourite artworks - reprise.

dewelar wrote:
...although frankly, I don't know why people found the wheatfield scene to be so special either. There are scenes from Hanako's, Emi's, Rin's, and even Shizune's that envoke a lot more emotion--but then again, that's just me
Rin. Dandelions. That is all.
Rin. Rain. That is all.
by Numb
Fri Aug 01, 2014 5:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191111 Two Old & Colourful Pieces)
Replies: 1806
Views: 250624

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Panda's Stuff)

So I was just looking through this when I saw that Rooftops was one of the topics of discussion about two weeks ago. I'm not sure what the policy is on bringing an older topic back for one post, but I was otherwise occupied with family matters at the time, and would like to comment on it, now that i...
by Numb
Fri Aug 01, 2014 4:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 150158

Re: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -03/07/14

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[b][url=http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=9764]Not Like Him[/url][/b] –  by [b]Numb[/b] (Completed, 838 Words)
[b]PoV:[/b] Rin; [b]Pairings: [/b]None [b]Begins: [/b] Rin Act Four- The Scene
[b]Remarks:[/b]  Experimental
by Numb
Thu Jul 24, 2014 9:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Birthday Wish (Saki/Rika) [Complete]
Replies: 35
Views: 9503

Re: A Birthday Wish (Saki/Rika) [Complete]

That ending was like something out of a cheesy sitcom. I love it. One small criticism though, when Saki is worried about Rika's heart, she calls her Rika-chan. Personally, I don't think honorifics work in English prose, with exceptions such as Misha's nickname quirk. The hikikomori thing too, it jus...
by Numb
Thu Jul 10, 2014 4:51 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Have Your Parents ever Confronted You about Katawa Shoujo?
Replies: 95
Views: 19899

Re: Have Your Parents ever Confronted You about Katawa Shouj

My family know. They actually helped a bit with my ideas for Blossom, back in the planning stage. They don't care that it's anime based, nor do I, they care that it has a message that somehow managed to get me writing more seriously. Everything before that point was a sub-3,000 word shitfest. Now I'...
by Numb
Wed Jul 02, 2014 7:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 29th, 2019)
Replies: 204
Views: 52607

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Jul 2nd)

Ah, you're back! Wonderful, now I can see how another person interprets Miki. Looks like a good chapter, nothing glaringly obvious that's wrong with it, which is good considering you just got back into writing after a period in a depressive state. As much as you've probably been told this by family,...
by Numb
Wed Jul 02, 2014 6:53 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 250116

Re: Random KS Discussion

Stuff about eyes It's things like this that I sometimes get annoyed at. Whenever you don't have to wear the eyepatch, nobody knows or cares that you're disabled, or close to it, because it isn't visible. As people may have noticed from my sig, I suffer from congenital analgesia, one of the "invisib...
by Numb
Sun Jun 29, 2014 5:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Not Like Him - Rin Oneshot
Replies: 5
Views: 2842

Re: Not Like Him - Rin Oneshot

For some negative criticism, you've fallen into the same trap I do: It's unclear who is speaking in the dialogue. It works well in the first half, but when it's just Rin and Hisao it becomes confusing. If I may suggest, a light sprinkling of 'he' and 'I' would do well given it's just the two of the...
by Numb
Sat Jun 28, 2014 6:32 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Katawa Poetry
Replies: 48
Views: 17291

Re: Katawa Poetry

The closest thing to KS poetry I have is the full version of the poem in Blossom, the one Suzu wrote. I guess that's better than nothing though, so here it is . Keeping it in a pastebin because I've submitted it as part of an exam portfolio, which may still be in the marking process, so I want to av...
by Numb
Thu Jun 26, 2014 5:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Not Like Him - Rin Oneshot
Replies: 5
Views: 2842

Not Like Him - Rin Oneshot

So a conversation in the Random KS Discussion thread gave me this idea. The idea to try writing something from Rin's perspective. Gotta say, not as difficult as one might first thing, but JEEZ it takes a while to think of the next thing to say. Anyway, this is the scene in the VN in which Rin collap...
by Numb
Mon Jun 23, 2014 4:19 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Daddy? Why Doesn't Mommy Have Arms?
Replies: 126
Views: 17197

Re: Daddy? Why Doesn't Mommy Have Arms?

All of those people are wrong. And really, "What's the point of something if nobody sees it?!" Fucking really ? This. I have at least six unpublished works that I keep to myself because they aren't something for others to see. Are they pointless? No, because I developed my ability by writing them. ...
by Numb
Sat Jun 14, 2014 6:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Roasted Cinnamon
Replies: 11
Views: 2159

Re: Roasted Cinnamon

I remember I did something like this before I started posting here. You and I seem to have similar ideas of how Hanako's mind works, I'd like to see where this goes. Also, I'm not sure if it was intentional, but you made me chuckle a bit by using fire-related words as often as you did. Like the othe...
by Numb
Sat Jun 14, 2014 10:03 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Living Normal Life, When Suddenly Katawa Shoujo thread
Replies: 58
Views: 14861

Re: The Living Normal Life, When Suddenly Katawa Shoujo thre

Casually doing nothing with my days
Watch Youtube
See Millbee's series
Download
100% in three days
Need more
Start writing fan fic
Start learning Japanese
Start doing something with my life
Get perfect grades in English class
Join VN team
So much shit to do now
by Numb
Sat Jun 07, 2014 1:43 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favourite artworks - reprise.
Replies: 4037
Views: 420871

Re: Favourite artworks - reprise.

Is... Is that based on the cafeteria scene in Blossom? :shock:
by Numb
Wed Jun 04, 2014 6:01 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Notable non-KS disabled characters
Replies: 143
Views: 29240

Re: Notable non-KS disabled characters

"Ehh ah know, want dat one" -Andy, from Little Britain.
For those who don't know.