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by Reese8
Sat Aug 17, 2013 10:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 850
Views: 214663

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 08/16/13 ~ C.40 - Summer Lull

I'm stuck using my iPod at the moment, but I enjoyed the chapter.
by Reese8
Thu Aug 08, 2013 2:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 581
Views: 224731

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 8/7)

A good chapter! I'm afraid that I don't have too many comments, but what I do have is below: "An ancient game upon which the fate of nations was decided. I couldn't actually find any game that was like that, so I decided on chess instead. It's really old and about deciding the fate of nations, so it...
by Reese8
Mon Jul 29, 2013 6:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 205353

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 7/19/2

This thread got quiet rather suddenly.
by Reese8
Thu Jul 25, 2013 5:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 850
Views: 214663

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 7/22/13 ~ C.39 - The Loneliest Num

Also, how do you follow posts here? Can't seem to find a button for it. :/ There are two ways that I've found to do it (following threads, that is; if you meant literally following posts... well, I'm not sure what you'd mean by that). When posting a reply, there's a series of checkboxes under the c...
by Reese8
Mon Jul 22, 2013 11:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 205353

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 7/19/2

I'm curious to hear what people think. Better? Worse? Better, but doesn't do a good job of rectifying the problems present in the original ending? Hm… Well, it won't send me storming out of the thread or anything, but I think that, despite having good details added at several points (Iwanako's apol...
by Reese8
Mon Jul 22, 2013 2:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 850
Views: 214663

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 7/22/13 ~ C.39 - The Loneliest Num

Another good chapter. I'm afraid, though, that, despite my attempt otherwise, I have no more specific commentary than that.
by Reese8
Sun Jul 21, 2013 7:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 850
Views: 214663

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 6/02/13 ~ C.38 - Departure

Caught up and awaiting the next chapter! I'm afraid that I've no specific commentary on the past thirty-eight chapters, though; there's rather a lot in there to cover.
by Reese8
Sat Jul 20, 2013 11:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 205353

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 7/19/2

Terrorist Threat Conditions Ah, thank you. Yeah, it's worse. What's better than a cliffhanger? And you'll put up with the units because it's not in the story. --- If I had managed to be the first one to respond after this chapter was posted, I would have said something like: "That's all folks. Iwan...
by Reese8
Fri Jul 19, 2013 12:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 205353

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 7/19/2

Oh, wonderful, an update! As (I think) I said, here's an attempt at a more detailed commentary "short of Misha brightly greeting me when I walked in, I haven’t actually said a word to anybody since I sat down." I'd suggest rewriting this slightly; currently, the first part only mentions Misha speaki...
by Reese8
Thu Jul 11, 2013 5:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 205353

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2

Negative, I think it's pretty cool. It's kind of like fanart for this story. Oh, thanks! Yeah, I like that a lot better actually. It would probably be less of a pain in the ass for the wheelchair crowd. Aye, that's what I was thinking. In fact, now I'm not even sure if a building with only four flo...
by Reese8
Thu Jul 11, 2013 2:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 205353

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2

Have you considered that not every part of the dorms has to have the same layout as the corridor Hisao and Kenji live in? In fact very few buildings are that symmetrical. …You know, it actually never occurred to me. Personally, I try not to be terribly specific about the interior or exterior design...
by Reese8
Thu Jul 11, 2013 5:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 205353

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2

Based on that, I've been trying to work out how the Yamaku female dormitory building (and presumably also its male counterpart), at least in this story, is designed. Is the below at all close to the rough layout, and, if not, might I trouble you to enlighten me? http://i37.servimg.com/u/f37/17/51/2...
by Reese8
Wed Jul 10, 2013 7:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 205353

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2

I've had to put a lot of effort into making her something more than just "Hisao with boobs." I'd say that you did that as soon as you had her doing different things in the hospital, though that may be just me. As far as Iwanako's love life is concerned, all I'll say on that is that due to some comp...
by Reese8
Tue Jul 09, 2013 8:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 205353

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2

...I'm not actually certain if you're serious here or not. I can't think of any reason why the administration would allow that, but, then again, this is a: not an ordinary school and b: part of the Japanese educational system, my main experience with which is KS. The Shizune/Emi femslash fic From S...
by Reese8
Tue Jul 09, 2013 7:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 205353

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2

Based on that, I've been trying to work out how the Yamaku female dormitory building (and presumably also its male counterpart), at least in this story, is designed. Is the below at all close to the rough layout, and, if not, might I trouble you to enlighten me? http://i37.servimg.com/u/f37/17/51/2...