Search found 76 matches

by Markus Ramikin
Fri May 31, 2013 5:32 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: WAHAHAHAHAIt's Misha.~
Replies: 19
Views: 8526

Re: WAHAHAHAHAIt's Misha.~

Nice work.
by Markus Ramikin
Fri May 31, 2013 4:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Newton's Laws (Mutou fic)
Replies: 11
Views: 1468

Re: Newton's Laws (Mutou fic)

those that needs should be those that need "Good morning Akio." He greets me should be "Good morning, Akio," he greets me. "Good morning Kizo." I replied should be "Good morning Kizo," I reply. (fixed punctuation AND tense. I am assuming you intend the story to be in present tense.) Hm, actually the...
by Markus Ramikin
Thu May 30, 2013 12:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Replies: 227
Views: 71206

Re: The Hotel Room

Very good story. I took like two attempts to get seriously started on it for some reason - I think mostly because I could see from twenty kilometers away that this Sho fellow was going to end up with Hanako (or at least I thought I could), and I didn't care about him. But then I forced myself to sto...
by Markus Ramikin
Mon May 27, 2013 1:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story (Pseudo-Complete)
Replies: 156
Views: 40419

Re: Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story (Pseudo-Complete)

Well, this is among my favourite KS stories that I've seen so far. Yeah, the resolution wasn't entirely unproblematic, but I still enjoyed the hell out of it. Oh, wow. I decided to read the thread before posting and saw that thing about the ban. Real shame. So, I guess, no point posting specific fee...
by Markus Ramikin
Fri May 24, 2013 4:48 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Katawa Shoujo Figures
Replies: 172
Views: 50948

Re: Katawa Shoujo Figures

...that's a nice figure.

Very nice. But yeah, pricey.

It's kinda sad that in the hypothetical world where the devs' feelings are fully respected, it doesn't exist.
by Markus Ramikin
Fri May 24, 2013 8:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)
Replies: 169
Views: 58653

Re: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)

I've seen this in multiple stories, so I thought I'd point it out: there's a temptation to overuse the phrase "can't help but". Especially during sex scenes, for obvious reasons, but also outside them. I think using two of these in one 2k-words chapter is already pushing it. I've seen two per paragr...
by Markus Ramikin
Wed May 22, 2013 9:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 163141

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Oh, I missed it somehow. Thanks.
by Markus Ramikin
Mon May 20, 2013 1:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 163141

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Excellent story. In-character, well written, interesting to read, and quite satisfying as a happy (but not emptily-so) continuation of the good end. I particularly liked how the sex scenes were sweet but also a real part of the story, in spirit of the original game. The only thing that I think would...
by Markus Ramikin
Sun May 19, 2013 2:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)
Replies: 43
Views: 10331

Re: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)

I like this a good deal.

Though I have to agree with Kayo that it doesn't fit canon well if you pay attention to details. But with only a bit of squinting I'm able to enjoy it as an alternative look.

I certainly hope this hasn't been abandoned.
by Markus Ramikin
Fri May 17, 2013 6:50 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Lilly Satou fanart
Replies: 6
Views: 3647

Re: Lilly Satou fanart

I like this Alot.

Oh wait, it's Lilly. Well I like this Lilly.
by Markus Ramikin
Fri May 17, 2013 3:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 579
Views: 214409

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 4/8)

That doesn't happen with omniscient perspective because the narrator is either an over-the-shoulder entity, or one of the characters looking back, and they know everyone's thoughts. If this were a past-tense or 3rd person story, this kind of confusion wouldn't work, but since we're live inside Hisa...
by Markus Ramikin
Thu May 16, 2013 5:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 579
Views: 214409

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 4/8)

I see. I think doing it that way is being unnecessarily clever for the story's own good, but maybe it's just me. And Shizune doesn't care that it's a little white lie. A lie is a lie. It doesn't come across as a white lie, just sarcasm. Another way of saying "none of your business, Shizune." So her ...
by Markus Ramikin
Wed May 15, 2013 8:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 579
Views: 214409

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 4/8)

Well this is nice. Normally Misha triggers my "kill it with fire" response, but your fic is making me kinda like her. A rather enjoyable read. "You shouldn't be doing naughty things on an empty stomach" made me smile. So did a bunch of other things. Makes me wish I didn't find writing humour nearly ...
by Markus Ramikin
Tue May 14, 2013 7:54 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Is art some kind of mutual fraud? (Rin spoilers I guess)
Replies: 29
Views: 3464

Is art some kind of mutual fraud? (Rin spoilers I guess)

a.k.a. Art: who needs it? I just finished Rin's route, as the last one of the five, and that's the question that's been stuck in my mind for like the latter half of it. It particularly hit me when those exhibition people started asking her questions that must have made her feel like "what the hell a...
by Markus Ramikin
Mon May 13, 2013 6:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hyacinth [18+] (Lilly Neutral End) UPDATE 4/22
Replies: 82
Views: 16220

Re: Hyacinth [18+] (Lilly Neutral End) UPDATE 4/22

Very much looking forward to more of this. I'm curious what you have planned. I imagine Lilly would want to do something about her realization but I suspect I'm going to be disappointed if Hisao falls in with that, or at least too easily. The way you've described what he and Hanako have - it comes a...