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by Craftyatom
Tue Dec 25, 2018 1:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Oct 26th, 2019: Someone Part 2)
Replies: 76
Views: 6066

Project Blue Curtain: 5 - Internal

5 - Internal I can’t believe I’ve been sitting here for the past four hours. It’s the day of the festival, and I was told last night that I’d be walking around with Hisao today. That makes sense, since he’s been eating lunch on the roof with me and Rin most days, so we’ve gotten to know each other ...
by Craftyatom
Tue Dec 25, 2018 1:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Oct 26th, 2019: Someone Part 2)
Replies: 76
Views: 6066

Project Blue Curtain: 4 - Follow

4 - Follow Despite my best efforts to get to sleep early last night, I still feel tired this morning. To be fair, I’m not used to waking up this early. It’s unnatural. Besides, I got to sleep in so late yesterday that my body simply wasn’t ready to go to bed early, regardless of my scheduling. But ...
by Craftyatom
Tue Dec 25, 2018 1:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Oct 26th, 2019: Someone Part 2)
Replies: 76
Views: 6066

Project Blue Curtain: 3 - Pleasantries

3 - Pleasantries They weren’t lying about changing the whole gym uniform. There must be ten exact copies of my outfit in the cardboard box I was given, right down to the color and styling. If it were an actual school uniform, that wouldn’t be too strange, but it’s just a light pink shirt and a pair...
by Craftyatom
Tue Dec 25, 2018 1:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Oct 26th, 2019: Someone Part 2)
Replies: 76
Views: 6066

Project Blue Curtain: 2 - Aftermath

2 - Aftermath This wouldn’t be so bad if I didn’t have to sit here and wait. I mean, on the plus side, I have plenty of time to think about what sort of job I should get next. Maybe I was onto something earlier with the lingerie idea. I’m sure someone would pay big bucks for lewd pictures of a doub...
by Craftyatom
Tue Dec 25, 2018 1:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Oct 26th, 2019: Someone Part 2)
Replies: 76
Views: 6066

Project Blue Curtain: 1 - Timeliness

Project Blue Curtain 1 - Timeliness I’m late. That’s why I’m desperately sprinting across campus in my pajamas: because I’m late. To be fair, since it’s warm out, my nightwear consists of shorts and a t-shirt, so it’s not like I’m running around in a onesie. Or lingerie. When I started here, they s...
by Craftyatom
Tue Dec 25, 2018 1:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Oct 26th, 2019: Someone Part 2)
Replies: 76
Views: 6066

S9 Submission: Project Blue Curtain

It’s the 25th of December, and you know what that means! It’s time for my contribution to the S9 - and boy, was it a difficult one this year. My prompt was KS between takes - all the characters are actors; this is a chance to see them when the camera's not rolling , for ProfAllister - not a particul...
by Craftyatom
Fri Dec 07, 2018 11:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
Replies: 52
Views: 7408

Re: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection

Akira's Surprise I've never read your previous fic, but I still realized what was gonna happen pretty quickly. You telegraphed it rather heavily. Not a big deal, just saying that you definitely could've gone for the element of surprise - I mean, this plot seems like a surprising one, so I was kind ...
by Craftyatom
Tue Dec 04, 2018 1:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 576
Views: 208843

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 12/3/18)

My oh my. I was waiting for the letter to come up, but that got cleared up pretty quickly. I figured we were out of the woods, what with that out of the way. But here we are. I'm not entirely sure what I'm rooting for. I know roughly what I want to happen, but how is a bit more fluid. I see many pos...
by Craftyatom
Wed Nov 07, 2018 1:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191202 The Pusher)
Replies: 1812
Views: 251622

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20181105 Afternoon Astral Projection)

We will now look at what I consider the most kosherbacon of all the kosherbacon stories. I definitely can't argue with this assessment. That was insane and ridiculous and hilarious the whole way through. It's an enjoyable read, because it's just so unpredictable, yet well-done; you never know what'...
by Craftyatom
Sun Oct 28, 2018 1:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191202 The Pusher)
Replies: 1812
Views: 251622

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180924 Sherlock Hisao)

Interesting read. Definitely set everything up well, and evoked the right emotions. The writing was simple, yet effective. My biggest complaint would be that it stopped where it did - it's fine to imagine what happened next, but I would've enjoyed actually having that part of the story to read. That...
by Craftyatom
Wed Oct 24, 2018 1:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/18/18)
Replies: 90
Views: 19327

Re: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 10/23/18)

A nice little piece. I would've liked a bit more detail on Hisao - it reads as though he froze in place once Shizune and Misha walked in, whereas I would expect no end to the stuttering and blushing and general discomfort from him. Still, "Hisao Boobs" and "I'm not about that life" got a chuckle out...
by Craftyatom
Wed Oct 24, 2018 1:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 29th, 2019)
Replies: 204
Views: 52750

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Oct 15th, 2018)

Mirage_GSM wrote:
Tue Oct 16, 2018 7:38 am
since you already know about Miki and I
about Miki and me.

Thanks for the new chapter! Pleasure as always :-)
Fixed! Thanks for the catch, and I'm glad you enjoyed!
by Craftyatom
Thu Oct 18, 2018 12:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191202 The Pusher)
Replies: 1812
Views: 251622

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180924 Sherlock Hisao)

Goodness, I've just gotten the strangest sense of deja vu... Weird. (Note: deja vu is common before and after epileptic seizures. I know from firsthand experience.) Anyways: Hikari, inukashi I can see the really good parts of this story. The main character is portrayed really well, and her (I assume...
by Craftyatom
Tue Oct 16, 2018 12:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 29th, 2019)
Replies: 204
Views: 52750

Uplink, Downlink (3/3)

It’s a huge relief to be done with class for the day. I mean, it’s usually a relief anyways, but especially today. The test this morning went better than expected, but it took a lot out of me, and the rest of the day was pretty much spent on autopilot. At lunch I found that Suzu felt the same - she ...
by Craftyatom
Tue Oct 16, 2018 12:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 29th, 2019)
Replies: 204
Views: 52750

Uplink, Downlink (2/3)

When I woke up this morning, the first thing on my mind was the test. I went over to check that Suzu was up - not only was she awake, she looked like she was ready to fight the apocalypse bare-handed. She might’ve been worried during our study sessions, but now, as we walk to class, she seems ready ...