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I wake up to a faint, yet distinctly noticeable, buzzing. My eyes still closed as I slowly drag myself into consciousness, I suddenly realize what this sensation probably is. Waking up long before dawn to a faint yet ever-present sensation? It’s almost like a bad rerun. I brace myself for the pain, ...

Act 3: Protectors >Layover< As I walk out of the girls’ dorms, I can feel the pleasant afternoon air flow over me. It’s still quite bright out, but late enough in the day that the shadows cast on the path in front of me are noticeably stretched. I watch them as I walk past, tiny spots of light peek...

Well, it's been about a month, and here we are again. My writing has actually gotten a lot faster as of late - since I spend so much time on a college campus not doing very much, I end up with something like 10 hours a week to dedicate to writing, which has greatly increased my pace on this project,...

Well, given the list of missing books it certainly isn't Kenji this time around :-) I honestly wouldn't count him out. When you don't know quite how someone thinks, they can end up thinking anything... But then, I'm not a very good sleuth, so I've got no idea. Good chapter! I tend to find chapters ...

Hey, it's been almost exactly a month since I last updated! In that time, I've gone through, like I said I would, and fixed/changed a bunch of stuff in Acts 1 and 2. I want Act 3 to be free of any baggage I accidentally created within the past four years, and I want new readers to have the best expe...

Okay, just a quick note to start with: naming your acts/scenes things like "Countdown" and "Ignition" (and, dare I say, "Liftoff"?) is an easy way into my heart. I'm a huge spaceflight nerd, and love those little references - I was so sad when the Aoi route got shuttered, because all of their scene/...

I'm ashamed of how long it took me to realize what the title meant. Oh well. Excellent writing, you do Rin very well, even as first-person, "stream of consciousness" style, which can be hit-or-miss. I think you struck a good balance. As people have mentioned, acting seems a strange fit. I always ima...

Well, it's been over 2 years since I last posted on this story (just after ch1), but I wanted to re-read this given all the updates it's had, and here we are. This fic started out kind of poor in my books because of its spelling errors - first two scenes are riddled with 'em. Not that they necessari...

Finally got around to reading through this one, and I found it to be quite nice. Your writing is good, without a doubt - I really enjoyed the way you wrote your dialogue/monologue. And, to your credit, I couldn't find any lingering spelling/grammar errors. Personally, I'm not a huge fan of the perso...

On the way down, Hisao and I discussed where to eat. He suggested the Shanghai, and guessed that it would probably be pretty quiet, since it’s still pretty early for lunch. He turned out to be right - there are only a few other people here. I’ll admit that the Shanghai has a nice atmosphere, especia...

Hisao waves goodbye, heading for the boys’ dorms, and Suzu and I wave back, heading the opposite direction after our short Saturday tutoring session. I almost yell ‘See you tomorrow!’ to him, but catch myself - Suzu still doesn’t know about our date. I kind of want to say something, but... I guess I...

>Rendezvous< I step into class, tired but still feeling pretty good. The events of yesterday afternoon had me feeling good all last night, and then again once I woke up. I’m not really sure what to expect, but I’ll figure it out as I go along. Besides, it can’t be that bad, spending time with- Hisa...

Just as planned, Hisao and I met up after school, and we started walking this new route. It was interesting, especially the small loop around the back of the school, which I didn’t even know existed - then again, I guess I had never really looked. Finally, we ended up behind the admin building, and ...

It’s common knowledge among runners that the worst aches come 2 days after exercise, and today is no exception - I can feel the stiffness in my legs, left over from the track meet on Sunday, even as I finally bring myself to a stop. I’ve decided to finish a little earlier today, but not just because...

>Coelliptic< Hisao is tired. To be fair, the majority of the class looks half-asleep. I’m pretty tired too, but that’s not surprising, given the track meet yesterday and then my phantom pains last night. Despite my fatigue, though, I feel fantastic - some underclassmen recognized me on my way to cl...