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by Dr.Worm
Fri Jun 07, 2013 2:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 27705

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier

Hans PK wrote:This looks like it might not be bad. One minor problem that I do have with it, though, is that, in every instance of her name, you've misspelled Ikezawa.
How did I...

How?

HOW?!

Son of a bitch. I'll get to fixing that soon.

I am so mad at myself right now you have no idea.
by Dr.Worm
Thu Jun 06, 2013 6:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 27705

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier

Part 4 Removed.

Will probably be reworked into a in-between for Act 1 and Act 2.
by Dr.Worm
Thu Jun 06, 2013 6:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 27705

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier

Chapter 4: Hey Bulldog - Part 3 I actually shove everyone out of my way as I wade through the crowded grounds. I don’t know how long it’ll take for news of my escapade to reach one of the teachers or whatever. But I need to talk to Hakamichi and Mikado before they find me. I’m trying to seem not de...
by Dr.Worm
Thu Jun 06, 2013 6:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 27705

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier

Chapter 4: Hey Bulldog Part 2 I guess I should check in with Takamichi about getting back into the Music club now that our punishment is over. My scholarship does demand that I be part of a club, after all. If it weren’t for that, I sure as hell wouldn’t be wasting my time in one. And while I’m not...
by Dr.Worm
Thu Jun 06, 2013 6:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 27705

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier

Previous Chapter: Seizure Boy [/i] Chapter 4: Hey Bulldog “What makes you think you’re something special when you smile?” [/i] The festival is splayed out all over the school grounds below me. It’s kind of cool that I can look out over it all and pick out which stalls I’ve built. There’s the big on...
by Dr.Worm
Thu Jun 06, 2013 6:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 27705

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier

Chapter 3: Seizure Boy Part 3 Where am I? I wake up on the floor in a fetal position. My legs and arms are still jerking about every few seconds. My cheek trails through a pile of my own saliva. My lungs start to fill up with air again. I can’t control any of the movements my body is making, but I’...
by Dr.Worm
Thu Jun 06, 2013 6:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 27705

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier

Chapter 3: Seizure Boy - Part 2 I make a quick run back into the dormitory to wash the soda off and change into a cleaner uniform. Molly hasn’t forced me to do my laundry in the last few weeks, so it’s just a matter of which shirt isn’t on the floor or covered in the aftermath of one of Miki’s “pra...
by Dr.Worm
Thu Jun 06, 2013 6:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 27705

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier

Previous Chapter: Keepin' It Real [/i] Chapter 3: Seizure Boy “You have to let it in as much as it’s upsetting to wake up with bruises you don’t remember getting.” [/size] I rotate my shoulder, clutching my other hand against it. Those two student council brutes have been keeping me pretty busy ove...
by Dr.Worm
Thu Jun 06, 2013 6:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 27705

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier

Chapter 2: Keepin' It Real - Part 2 That's not a bad idea. "Sure. Why not?" "Well you did point out that you wanted to take these back to the Student Council today." That's a good point, Satou. However, you should shut up and just let this happen. I mean, you did suggest it after all. "Look, let me...
by Dr.Worm
Thu Jun 06, 2013 6:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 27705

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier

Previous Chapter: Bad Day [/i] Chapter 2: Keepin’ it Real “When my time comes, I won’t be leaving this earth. And what I’ve done for people will determine my worth.” [/i] I stomp up the stairs, taking them two at a time. Alright. Just have to try all the unused classrooms on this floor until I find...
by Dr.Worm
Thu Jun 06, 2013 6:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 27705

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier

Chapter One: Bad Day, Part 2 I push the paper back to her and pull my chair out. Take that, you Tyrant. I take my seat just as the door behind us is thrown open. Both Hakamichi and I turn to the girl who strides into the room. One look at her bubblegum pink hair and silly grin is enough to know tha...
by Dr.Worm
Thu Jun 06, 2013 6:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 27705

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier

Chapter One: Bad Day, Part One “Because every day ought to be a bad day for you.” I am pretty sure that using another human being as a wager is against the law. But Takamichi didn't know that. Or he did and chose to specifically ignore it. And apparently, Takamichi is absolutely terrible at board g...
by Dr.Worm
Thu Jun 06, 2013 6:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 27705

Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]

Hello all, yet again. Yes, it's another OC story. Please hold your collective groans. I know how you all feel about them. Breaking the Sound Barrier follows the fate of Yuuto Miyamoto, an epileptic boy with temper issues, who gets sucked into the Student Council when Hisao doesn't. [Yuuto.] [Assbutt...
by Dr.Worm
Wed Jun 05, 2013 3:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki Psuedo Route [Updated 6/21/13]
Replies: 68
Views: 12896

Re: Miki Psuedo Route [New work, added 6/5/13]

This story shows a lot of promise with just the first act. You've definitely got my subscription.

There are a few minor grammatical errors, but nothing to go completely mental over.

Best of luck with the Miki route. I hear they're cursed.
by Dr.Worm
Fri May 31, 2013 4:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki and Taro: Rat Race
Replies: 101
Views: 16140

Re: Miki and Taro: Rat Race

You've presumed right. It's a plane known as "Fuck it's almost four o'clock normal people should be asleep right now but I'm too excited because my new laptop is coming in tomorrow fuck it I'll finish this chapter up lol idgaf." It's a strange place. I own a summer home on this plane of existence. ...