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Chapter 10, Part 4: Flexibility I’m on the roof! The roof is very, very high up and all it would take is one little shove in the wrong spot and then I’d be falling and splat! There’d be dead ol’ Katsuo, guts and brains splattered all over the sidewalk. Emi takes a few steps with Rin and turns back ...

Chapter 10, Part 3: Flexibility [/b] The Nurse’s visit with me was pretty quick. He just asked if I had any back pain after my fall. I lied and told him that it was nothing more than usual, mostly to try to save a shred of dignity in front of Emi. Then he gave me my pills and told me I was free to ...

Chapter 10, Part 2: Flexibility [/b] “Come on! Come on! We’ve got to start running already or I won’t be able to shower after the run.” … Damn you, Nurse. Damn you. Emi lets go of my arm and lines up with me on the track. I tug on my shirt collar and look around. The last time I wore these clothes ...

--- Chapter 10, Part 1: Flexibility Seven in the morning comes a lot slower than I thought it would. I spent the remainder of the previous day in a haze, due to the combined forces of a low throb of pain in my back, the lack of comfortable sleep and the knowledge that I would get to see Emi again t...

Mirage_GSM wrote: Japan uses Celsius scale, not Fahrenheit.
Very sensible people, the Japanese...

In other news: Yay, backstory!

Gah! You've told me that before.

One of these days, I'm going to remember that Celsius thing.

Chapter 9, Part 4: Reminiscing [/b] "Thank you for coming so quickly, but could you have made more noise running down the hall? I'm not sure if everyone in the main building heard you or not." I shift in the bed, muttering about how someone could keep it down. My back pain has decided to ...

--- Chapter 9, Part 3: Reminiscing [/b] The man across the desk from me twirls the empty pill bottle between his fingers. I try to keep looking at the clutter on his desk rather than at him. That pill bottle shouldn't be empty so soon. He knows it shouldn't. I know it shouldn't. But it is. And I ne...

--- Chapter 9, Part 2: Reminiscing [/b] I nearly drop the container of vegetables I’m trying to wrestle from Emi’s grip as I wheel around. There’s Hisao standing in my kitchen doorway. I could kiss him. He’s come to save me from cooking dinner with a cute girl who is starting to drag up old memorie...

--- Chapter 9, Part 1: Reminiscing [/b] I push open the front door and I’m greeted with the lovely sound of absolutely nothing. I give a glance over my shoulder to Emi and swing the door open all the way. The lack of bedspring squeaks is a good sign for our return. I guess Hisao and Rin have to sto...

--- Chapter 8, Part 4: Showdown at Shogun's Castle I slide my hand over Emi’s on the joystick. She shrinks under my touch. It isn’t from shyness or anything like that. She just doesn’t really want to touch me. I get it. I’m an asshole. Blah blah blah. “Relax. I’m not trying anything.” I mutter. “Th...

--- Chapter 8, Part 3: Showdown at Shogun's Castle “Hayate.” I let the name slither out my mouth like garbage. Because that’s what he is. Garbage. The sort of guy who thinks just because he can play a video game that he’s better than everyone who even touches it. He’s the kind of guy who makes excu...

--- Chapter 8, Part 2: Showdown at Shogun's Castle Emi rolls her eyes and steps up to the second player side of the cabinet. She slides her cursor over to Chun-Li’s portrait on the character select screen. “Chun-li?” “She’s the only girl.” Emi whines. “What about Cammy?” “Who?” “Nevermind.” I pick ...

I have discovered that there is nothing more mind numbing for me than writing about two people playing a fighter on an arcade cabinet. --- Chapter 8, Part 1: Showdown at Shogun's Castle The puck bounces off the right wall and I swing my mallet across the table to meet it. The plastic disc ricochets...

So most of the continuity and character mistakes have been fixed at this point.

Part four of Hey Bulldog will be back, as a new chapter, in possibly a few days as a short conclusion to Act 1, once I've finished editing it.

Thanks for reading and thanks for all the input and comments, everyone.

Okay, I'll just comment as I go along... Ho-boy. Okay. First of all it doesn't seem like Shizune to let this Takamichi guy get away with sending someone else to take his punishment for him. I think her sense of justice would not admit that. ... Especially after she has it pointed out to her. Good p...