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- Mon Oct 06, 2014 12:02 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
- Replies: 162
- Views: 67960
Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 9 up!
I'm on my phone so I'm gonna have too leave my reply short. Suffice to say, another great chapter. Looks like Misha is at least giving Fujiko a chance, which should be interesting.
- Thu Oct 02, 2014 3:44 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
- Replies: 162
- Views: 67960
Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 8 up!
I could totally see Nurse throwing a box of condoms at a student like that. Makes me wonder if he brought it up with Hisao too(knowing him, it's almost a certainty), and whether or not he did the same thing to Hisao, minus the oral contraceptives of course.
- Mon Sep 29, 2014 10:01 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#71—'Returns')
- Replies: 322
- Views: 178238
Re: Alternate Dreams (Lilly's Neutral End) (20140930)
I've already stated my opinion of sad stories before, so I won't again. Unfortunately, that holds true for this one. It's well written and everything, just not to my taste.
- Mon Sep 29, 2014 6:57 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Library Anniversarie Collection
- Replies: 99
- Views: 39485
Re: The Library Anniversarie Collection
It was pretty good, though huge downers(even if I did figure something was coming based on the name), do affect my overall enjoyment. The final part being somewhat happy again wasn't really enough to counter-act the second part. Character death is just something I can't really get past.
- Mon Sep 29, 2014 1:26 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#71—'Returns')
- Replies: 322
- Views: 178238
Re: Alternate Dreams (Three Witches!) (20140929)
Definitely better. I also didn't get the references, and was a little confused on why two of them were friends with Meiko and Yuuko, but overall I liked it. I thought the way they described Lilly, Hanako, Shizune(through Misha) and Hisao was clever. Makes me wonder how they would describe Emi and Rin.
- Sun Sep 28, 2014 4:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
- Replies: 162
- Views: 67960
Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 7 up!
Really enjoyed the talk between Ayane and Emi. Glad to see they've reconciled things. Also, I had a huge smile on my face when Ayane brought up the bet she made with her brother, and his reaction prior to the kiss was hilarious. Shizune's reaction is a little over the top(kissing him back is fine, b...
- Sat Sep 27, 2014 8:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
- Replies: 162
- Views: 67960
Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 6 up!
Wow, Ayane's mother hasn't even made an appearance yet and I already hate her as much as I think is possible. To me, she is the worst sort of human outside of the actual evil ones(like Hitler and the like). Why are OC mothers in fanfics always so terrible? Honestly, that thought process dominated my...
- Sat Sep 27, 2014 4:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#71—'Returns')
- Replies: 322
- Views: 178238
Re: Alternate Dreams (Time-Travel!) (v1.1 20140925)
Yeah, brythain released a story, then after my response decided to pull it so he(?) can make more edits. You can read my initial post to see what I thought of it.Leaty wrote:Whoa. What is up with the subject lines of the last three posts? Did I miss something?
- Sat Sep 27, 2014 12:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#71—'Returns')
- Replies: 322
- Views: 178238
Re: Alternate Dreams (Enter Three Witches) (20140927)
That was rather strange. Also, I'm clearly missing something, but what released her? Shizune and Lilly being friends again? Only thing I can think of. Ultimately, despite the interesting premise, not something I was a big fan of. Until the end, which wasn't all that clear to me, it was mostly a down...
- Sat Sep 27, 2014 8:40 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
- Replies: 162
- Views: 67960
Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 5 up!
You suspected? Was it the bath scene that gave it away? I was trying to be subtle... Ah well! (And it's more like Fuji likes Misha, Misha is still pining over Shizune even in this route, although due to Arashi Misha hasn't been Shizunes only translator so they're not as close as in canon) Don't wor...
- Fri Sep 26, 2014 8:34 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
- Replies: 162
- Views: 67960
Re: Learning the blues (HisaoxOC route) Act 2 Scene 4 up!
“But yes I take mine black. Best way too, don’t want milk or sugar effecting the taste” That's funny, because the taste of coffee is the exact reason I flood it with creamer. :) Anyways, this chapter did not disappoint. I have a feeling the bet between Shizune and Arashi is him taking her out on a ...
- Fri Sep 26, 2014 12:38 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Library Anniversarie Collection
- Replies: 99
- Views: 39485
Re: The Library Anniversarie Collection
Liked the first one better to be honest. Not a fan of H-scenes personally, though I liked the pairing. I'm a big fan of pairings that weren't in the game, and Yuuko is adorable.
- Thu Sep 25, 2014 5:23 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 10/26/15]
- Replies: 157
- Views: 60185
Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story
Another good chapter. Also, I thought Emi was the fastest thing on no legs, not two legs. This chapter also proves how a single line can entirely change the mood. It was pretty positive when Seiki was mentioning how cute Emi was, and then the last line happened.
- Thu Sep 25, 2014 3:58 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Like a Suit and Shoes (Short, Rin and Emi)
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1407
Re: Like a Suit and Shoes (Short, Rin and Emi)
It's very believable that this would actually happen. Overall I liked it, I just don't have much to say about it besides that. Maybe it's just because I'm not big on either of this two.
- Thu Sep 25, 2014 8:43 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#71—'Returns')
- Replies: 322
- Views: 178238
Re: Alternate Dreams (Time-Travel!)
Interesting set-up for how the VN actually began. Not sure if Iwanako really would be so stubborn to stay outside so long the cold would kill her(I know I wouldn't), but it works for the story, so I won't complain.