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by AntonSlavik020
Mon Oct 06, 2014 12:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 67960

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 9 up!

I'm on my phone so I'm gonna have too leave my reply short. Suffice to say, another great chapter. Looks like Misha is at least giving Fujiko a chance, which should be interesting.
by AntonSlavik020
Thu Oct 02, 2014 3:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 67960

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 8 up!

I could totally see Nurse throwing a box of condoms at a student like that. Makes me wonder if he brought it up with Hisao too(knowing him, it's almost a certainty), and whether or not he did the same thing to Hisao, minus the oral contraceptives of course.
by AntonSlavik020
Mon Sep 29, 2014 10:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#71—'Returns')
Replies: 322
Views: 178238

Re: Alternate Dreams (Lilly's Neutral End) (20140930)

I've already stated my opinion of sad stories before, so I won't again. Unfortunately, that holds true for this one. It's well written and everything, just not to my taste.
by AntonSlavik020
Mon Sep 29, 2014 6:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Library Anniversarie Collection
Replies: 99
Views: 39485

Re: The Library Anniversarie Collection

It was pretty good, though huge downers(even if I did figure something was coming based on the name), do affect my overall enjoyment. The final part being somewhat happy again wasn't really enough to counter-act the second part. Character death is just something I can't really get past.
by AntonSlavik020
Mon Sep 29, 2014 1:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#71—'Returns')
Replies: 322
Views: 178238

Re: Alternate Dreams (Three Witches!) (20140929)

Definitely better. I also didn't get the references, and was a little confused on why two of them were friends with Meiko and Yuuko, but overall I liked it. I thought the way they described Lilly, Hanako, Shizune(through Misha) and Hisao was clever. Makes me wonder how they would describe Emi and Rin.
by AntonSlavik020
Sun Sep 28, 2014 4:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 67960

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 7 up!

Really enjoyed the talk between Ayane and Emi. Glad to see they've reconciled things. Also, I had a huge smile on my face when Ayane brought up the bet she made with her brother, and his reaction prior to the kiss was hilarious. Shizune's reaction is a little over the top(kissing him back is fine, b...
by AntonSlavik020
Sat Sep 27, 2014 8:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 67960

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 6 up!

Wow, Ayane's mother hasn't even made an appearance yet and I already hate her as much as I think is possible. To me, she is the worst sort of human outside of the actual evil ones(like Hitler and the like). Why are OC mothers in fanfics always so terrible? Honestly, that thought process dominated my...
by AntonSlavik020
Sat Sep 27, 2014 4:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#71—'Returns')
Replies: 322
Views: 178238

Re: Alternate Dreams (Time-Travel!) (v1.1 20140925)

Leaty wrote:Whoa. What is up with the subject lines of the last three posts? Did I miss something?
Yeah, brythain released a story, then after my response decided to pull it so he(?) can make more edits. You can read my initial post to see what I thought of it.
by AntonSlavik020
Sat Sep 27, 2014 12:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#71—'Returns')
Replies: 322
Views: 178238

Re: Alternate Dreams (Enter Three Witches) (20140927)

That was rather strange. Also, I'm clearly missing something, but what released her? Shizune and Lilly being friends again? Only thing I can think of. Ultimately, despite the interesting premise, not something I was a big fan of. Until the end, which wasn't all that clear to me, it was mostly a down...
by AntonSlavik020
Sat Sep 27, 2014 8:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 67960

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 5 up!

You suspected? Was it the bath scene that gave it away? I was trying to be subtle... Ah well! (And it's more like Fuji likes Misha, Misha is still pining over Shizune even in this route, although due to Arashi Misha hasn't been Shizunes only translator so they're not as close as in canon) Don't wor...
by AntonSlavik020
Fri Sep 26, 2014 8:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 67960

Re: Learning the blues (HisaoxOC route) Act 2 Scene 4 up!

“But yes I take mine black. Best way too, don’t want milk or sugar effecting the taste” That's funny, because the taste of coffee is the exact reason I flood it with creamer. :) Anyways, this chapter did not disappoint. I have a feeling the bet between Shizune and Arashi is him taking her out on a ...
by AntonSlavik020
Fri Sep 26, 2014 12:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Library Anniversarie Collection
Replies: 99
Views: 39485

Re: The Library Anniversarie Collection

Liked the first one better to be honest. Not a fan of H-scenes personally, though I liked the pairing. I'm a big fan of pairings that weren't in the game, and Yuuko is adorable.
by AntonSlavik020
Thu Sep 25, 2014 5:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 10/26/15]
Replies: 157
Views: 60185

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

Another good chapter. Also, I thought Emi was the fastest thing on no legs, not two legs. This chapter also proves how a single line can entirely change the mood. It was pretty positive when Seiki was mentioning how cute Emi was, and then the last line happened.
by AntonSlavik020
Thu Sep 25, 2014 3:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Like a Suit and Shoes (Short, Rin and Emi)
Replies: 1
Views: 1407

Re: Like a Suit and Shoes (Short, Rin and Emi)

It's very believable that this would actually happen. Overall I liked it, I just don't have much to say about it besides that. Maybe it's just because I'm not big on either of this two.
by AntonSlavik020
Thu Sep 25, 2014 8:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#71—'Returns')
Replies: 322
Views: 178238

Re: Alternate Dreams (Time-Travel!)

Interesting set-up for how the VN actually began. Not sure if Iwanako really would be so stubborn to stay outside so long the cold would kill her(I know I wouldn't), but it works for the story, so I won't complain.