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by AntonSlavik020
Wed Oct 15, 2014 12:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#71—'Returns')
Replies: 322
Views: 178240

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (04—Curiosity) (20141015)

I liked it. I like scenes from different perspectives, and this take on the shop keeper was interesting.
by AntonSlavik020
Tue Oct 14, 2014 7:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Brownie of Yamaku, -snippets-
Replies: 15
Views: 6172

Re: The Brownie of Yamaku pt2

Awesome to see this continued, and for some reason I feel like Ayane would win an argument with Akane. This also reminds me of one of the few scenes in KS that annoyed me, and that was this path to the bad ending. I wanted to tell Misha and Shizune what happened, with maybe some annoyance, but not y...
by AntonSlavik020
Mon Oct 13, 2014 10:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 19713

Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending, Updated Oct 13]

That was much more interesting than the first part, largely because it involved some of the interaction that I was looking forward to. I could see Mutuo talking with Hisao like that. Looking forward to more.
by AntonSlavik020
Mon Oct 13, 2014 7:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 19713

Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending]

It was decent. Didn't really stand out either direction for me. Any tips on how I might improve it in some way to make it any more appealing? I'm actually considering expanding upon this concept slightly, and would definitely be grateful for any constructive criticism on how I might improve the end...
by AntonSlavik020
Mon Oct 13, 2014 7:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Brownie of Yamaku, -snippets-
Replies: 15
Views: 6172

Re: The Brownie of Yamaku (One Shot)

That was fun. Little one-shots like this are always nice.
by AntonSlavik020
Mon Oct 13, 2014 10:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 19713

Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending]

It was decent. Didn't really stand out either direction for me.
by AntonSlavik020
Mon Oct 13, 2014 10:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 67961

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 11 up!

That is one hell of a gift for Fujiko and Misha. And judging from the fact that You never see Shizune's room(at school anyways), and she only comes into your room once, I think Shizune actually could have been serious when she said no to Ayane's accusation. Can't wait for the next update!
by AntonSlavik020
Sun Oct 12, 2014 10:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 67961

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 10 up!

And even though I know I'm going to hate her, I'm oddly looking forward to the confrontation with the mother. Also, I don't know if I've mentioned this before, but I love Fujoko's taste in movies. I'm a horror buff myself, and I loved the Grudge, though the sequels(as horror sequels tend to be) wer...
by AntonSlavik020
Fri Oct 10, 2014 9:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 10/26/15]
Replies: 157
Views: 60188

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

That was fun. Loved the comet part. As a side note, it may not be the best idea for Seiki to come up with nicknames for people, at least until she has their real names down.
by AntonSlavik020
Fri Oct 10, 2014 8:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 67961

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 10 up!

Hmm... I read up the plot summary when I edited this chapter... It's basically A murders B in a House. Ghost of B kills A. C comes into the house and is murdered by one of the ghosts. Phones D beforehand D comes into the house looking for C and is murdered by one of the ghosts. Phones E beforehand....
by AntonSlavik020
Fri Oct 10, 2014 3:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 67961

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 10 up!

I hope Fukiko is able to help Misha get over Shizune's rejection of her. Additionally, I hope Misha won't simply use Fujiko as a rebound. Either way, Fujiko has her work cut out for her, but we can't control who we have feelings for. Onto a happier note, the scene at the very end was sweet, even if ...
by AntonSlavik020
Fri Oct 10, 2014 9:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku's Cheshire Cat [Short, Miki and Hanako]
Replies: 7
Views: 3508

Re: Yamaku's Cheshire Cat [Short, Miki and Hanako]

That was fun. I like these little side fics, just sweet enough to put a smile on your face.
by AntonSlavik020
Fri Oct 10, 2014 8:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: By Sword and Cane
Replies: 48
Views: 18218

Re: By Sword and Cane

Like Mirage said, not much to say about the characters yet, but I will be following this. I like it when stories are from a girl's perspective, so that helps.
by AntonSlavik020
Wed Oct 08, 2014 9:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Library Anniversarie Collection
Replies: 99
Views: 39485

Re: The Library Anniversarie Collection

That was a lot of fun. I've always wondered how characters would react to fanfiction about them. I liked all the references to various fics, it's definitely the most interesting of the fics.
by AntonSlavik020
Mon Oct 06, 2014 5:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 583
Views: 390644

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (April 1 "Update")

Atario wrote:
Kutagh wrote:ProfAllister

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Whoa. Did not know that.
I generally assume someone is a guy unless they say otherwise, or their avatar is a girl, which is strange since I'm a guy with a female avatar.