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- Wed Oct 15, 2014 12:37 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#71—'Returns')
- Replies: 322
- Views: 178240
Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (04—Curiosity) (20141015)
I liked it. I like scenes from different perspectives, and this take on the shop keeper was interesting.
- Tue Oct 14, 2014 7:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Brownie of Yamaku, -snippets-
- Replies: 15
- Views: 6172
Re: The Brownie of Yamaku pt2
Awesome to see this continued, and for some reason I feel like Ayane would win an argument with Akane. This also reminds me of one of the few scenes in KS that annoyed me, and that was this path to the bad ending. I wanted to tell Misha and Shizune what happened, with maybe some annoyance, but not y...
- Mon Oct 13, 2014 10:55 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
- Replies: 45
- Views: 19713
Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending, Updated Oct 13]
That was much more interesting than the first part, largely because it involved some of the interaction that I was looking forward to. I could see Mutuo talking with Hisao like that. Looking forward to more.
- Mon Oct 13, 2014 7:50 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
- Replies: 45
- Views: 19713
Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending]
It was decent. Didn't really stand out either direction for me. Any tips on how I might improve it in some way to make it any more appealing? I'm actually considering expanding upon this concept slightly, and would definitely be grateful for any constructive criticism on how I might improve the end...
- Mon Oct 13, 2014 7:34 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Brownie of Yamaku, -snippets-
- Replies: 15
- Views: 6172
Re: The Brownie of Yamaku (One Shot)
That was fun. Little one-shots like this are always nice.
- Mon Oct 13, 2014 10:47 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
- Replies: 45
- Views: 19713
Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending]
It was decent. Didn't really stand out either direction for me.
- Mon Oct 13, 2014 10:33 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
- Replies: 162
- Views: 67961
Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 11 up!
That is one hell of a gift for Fujiko and Misha. And judging from the fact that You never see Shizune's room(at school anyways), and she only comes into your room once, I think Shizune actually could have been serious when she said no to Ayane's accusation. Can't wait for the next update!
- Sun Oct 12, 2014 10:56 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
- Replies: 162
- Views: 67961
Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 10 up!
And even though I know I'm going to hate her, I'm oddly looking forward to the confrontation with the mother. Also, I don't know if I've mentioned this before, but I love Fujoko's taste in movies. I'm a horror buff myself, and I loved the Grudge, though the sequels(as horror sequels tend to be) wer...
- Fri Oct 10, 2014 9:02 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 10/26/15]
- Replies: 157
- Views: 60188
Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story
That was fun. Loved the comet part. As a side note, it may not be the best idea for Seiki to come up with nicknames for people, at least until she has their real names down.
- Fri Oct 10, 2014 8:02 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
- Replies: 162
- Views: 67961
Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 10 up!
Hmm... I read up the plot summary when I edited this chapter... It's basically A murders B in a House. Ghost of B kills A. C comes into the house and is murdered by one of the ghosts. Phones D beforehand D comes into the house looking for C and is murdered by one of the ghosts. Phones E beforehand....
- Fri Oct 10, 2014 3:18 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
- Replies: 162
- Views: 67961
Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 10 up!
I hope Fukiko is able to help Misha get over Shizune's rejection of her. Additionally, I hope Misha won't simply use Fujiko as a rebound. Either way, Fujiko has her work cut out for her, but we can't control who we have feelings for. Onto a happier note, the scene at the very end was sweet, even if ...
- Fri Oct 10, 2014 9:02 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku's Cheshire Cat [Short, Miki and Hanako]
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3508
Re: Yamaku's Cheshire Cat [Short, Miki and Hanako]
That was fun. I like these little side fics, just sweet enough to put a smile on your face.
- Fri Oct 10, 2014 8:54 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: By Sword and Cane
- Replies: 48
- Views: 18218
Re: By Sword and Cane
Like Mirage said, not much to say about the characters yet, but I will be following this. I like it when stories are from a girl's perspective, so that helps.
- Wed Oct 08, 2014 9:02 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Library Anniversarie Collection
- Replies: 99
- Views: 39485
Re: The Library Anniversarie Collection
That was a lot of fun. I've always wondered how characters would react to fanfiction about them. I liked all the references to various fics, it's definitely the most interesting of the fics.
- Mon Oct 06, 2014 5:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
- Replies: 583
- Views: 390644
Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (April 1 "Update")
I generally assume someone is a guy unless they say otherwise, or their avatar is a girl, which is strange since I'm a guy with a female avatar.Atario wrote:Whoa. Did not know that.Kutagh wrote:ProfAllister
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