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I liked it. It wasn't my favorite, but it was well done. I can see a conversation between these two going like that, so you and Silver did a good job there. I think my favorite line was the one about Emi at 7 AM, though there were a lot of good ones.

So far seems interesting enough. Hard to get a real feel yet on your OC since it's not from her perspective, but so far she seems fun. Looking forward to more.

Not really my thing, and I have a hard time seeing Hanako act that forward, but it was well-written.

You can take a quick swig of a smoothie? Maybe if it melted, which is what I guess you meant by it being mostly warmed. Besides that, all I really have to say is Daria is an unusual name for a Japanese girl, unless she's foreign and I missed that somehow.

Agreed. Quality over quantity, as they say.

Apparently, life has no idea where it wants me to go either. That was hilarious. I actually laughed out loud at that. Anyway, that was a very sudden end to that chapter. Almost like there should have been a bit more. Besides that, I enjoyed it as always. I was actually thinking about a half hour ag...

I enjoyed it. Can't really say much without echoing what was already said, but for a first piece, it was solid. The only thing is I always thought Mea was a girl. I can't remember if Hisao's friends are mentioned in the VN or are just accepted fanon(It's been way too long since I've played through A...

“Not trying that again,” That's what you think Ayane. :wink: Anyways, fantastic as always. The whole brother-sister thing was fun. Besides, that very emotional chapter. It'll be interesting how Ayane handles her grandma's request. I'm personally hoping she does it. Each chapter, my excitement over ...

Awesome. While I was hoping for Shizune, I'm certainly not complaining about Hanako being first. Looking forward to more.

TheTealeaf wrote:in the canteen

You did it again

Anyways, I really like her uncle and aunt. And Akane herself is fun as always. That ball throwing scene was funny. Looking forward to more!

I take back what I said, this HAS to keep going. I second everything tealeaf said. It's ultimately up to you what happens of course, but I'm hoping Hisao stays in the classroom. I'm naturally hoping he becomes friends with Shizune and Misha, but I'll take any combination of classmates you choose. (U...

As tealeaf said, very good job with the conversation in the tea room. I feel like the way your ending chapters your making it so the story can end at any of them(except the first), and it would be acceptable. I felt pretty satisfied at the end of the last two chapters, though more so at the end of t...

My favorite team lost by 18 points to a previously winless team in American football(just look at my location if you're curious as to who I'm a fan of), and this helped. Looks like the confrontation will be delayed at least another chapter. And it is interesting how if Hisao had sided with Lilly how...

I liked it. As an epileptic myself, I've always found it interesting when one of the main characters has it too, even if it's FAR more severe than mine is(I have the mildest form possible), so I have experience in waking up after a seizure. You are very confused. As for the story itself so far, It's...

Looks like Hisao is slowly allowing himself to become at least a little closer to the girls. I have to remember that this is the Hisao the closed himself away from everyone. Not sure how long this is going to go, or if he's going to end up dating anyone, though to be honest he probably just needs a ...