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Sometimes I wish could enjoy post-bad/neutral ending stories, as I feel like this was probably a good one(and I too like Shizune/Hanako friendships). Unfortunately, just because of the way my mind works, as soon as I know it follows a bad end I'm unable to enjoy it. It just makes me feel sad. Basica...

The main thing I noticed was that your using script format, which isn't ideal. Also, this isn't so much criticism as something I noticed, but Eikichi seems very similar to Miki(missing a hand, runs, doesn't like math). Not much to say beyond that.

Very good chapter. Loved the interaction between Miki and her dad, especially the fact that she seems to be willing to give him a chance to be a dad to her, despite what his mistake cost both of them. Looking forward to more of that.

HoneyBakedHam wrote:How about Sorry?

Ooooo I loved Sorry as a kid.

Its starting to look like it will be Chiyoko after all, which I'm OK with. She seems fun. And I'm guessing the student council pres was held back for some medical reason, kinda like Emi, otherwise there is no way she's of age. Even Emi's just 19.

What Brythain said. I didn't even read it once I saw the format.

Can't add anything else that someone hasn't already said, but pretty much agree with their points, like Molly feeling like a more defined character. I'll follow this because I tend to like Molly, though I don't have much to comment on the story itself yet.

I agree with what people have said so far. First part didn't really grab me, second part was a little better, and the third part was very fun to read. Can't really say anything someone else hasn't already said(what I get for arriving late I guess), but solid start overall. Looking forward to more.

I just realized I'd been sitting on a preexisting image that would have been perfect for the OP, so I switched it out. In case anybody is wondering, it's not a commission. It just fits alarmingly well. Huh. If it wasn't for this story, what was it for? I'll interject here because why not. Its from ...

I agree about the heart flutter scene. It was kinda confusing what exactly happened. That aside, solid chapter. And I knew Mirage was going to comment about the sweatervest. He mentioned how much he hates that meme recently.

Loved this chapter. Molly's awkwardness is great fun. And yeah, it takes real talent to kill a conversation that isn't even happening. Leave it to Hisao.

You're right, this chapter was great. Miki's interaction with Ayumu was all kinds of d'aww. Look forward to getting to know him better, like what his last name is.

Its nice to see Taro get some love. Literally in this case. Also, I would love it if, as unlikely as it is, if Mutuo ended up being Agent Wormtooth. Probably wouldn't really work in a serious story, though. I uh, I thought I made it pretty obvious who it was? :wink: You probably did, but I don't te...

Its nice to see Taro get some love. Literally in this case. Also, I would love it if, as unlikely as it is, if Mutuo ended up being Agent Wormtooth. Probably wouldn't really work in a serious story, though.

Glad to see Ikuno and Miki make up. Also, looking forward to meeting Miki's dad and getting some answers about what exactly happened.