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by forgetmenot
Fri May 03, 2013 7:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 13595

Re: Once More [Hisao x OC] [Update: 4/30]

Just looked at the art...

Is Katsuo an alternate-reality version of Spike from Cowboy Bebop? The resemblance is uncanny.
Image
by forgetmenot
Fri May 03, 2013 7:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 850
Views: 214086

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 05/01/2013 (Chapter 34 posted)

I have a theory that Helbereth is actually the American version of Satoru, and is letting his inner fashonista out by secretly writing himself into his own story.
by forgetmenot
Wed May 01, 2013 8:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Transience
Replies: 11
Views: 2276

Re: Transience

I'm with Mirage. I always enjoy reading your stuff... I think... but it's just so free-form I doubt any advice or feedback I could give would be helpful. It's certainly unique, though. You definitely have your own voice, which is definitely a plus. I'd just say keep writing. Even if zero people read...
by forgetmenot
Wed May 01, 2013 8:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 13595

Re: Once More [Hisao x OC] [Update: 4/30]

Whatever that may be for Rin and Hisao.
I've got one guess as to what that may be.

Great chapter. Some grammar things here and there, but nothing to be nitpicky about. On the whole, your writing just keeps getting better and better, and Katsuo is only getting stronger as a character. Keep it up.
by forgetmenot
Sat Apr 27, 2013 9:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 99184

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao) [Updated 4/26]

Wookie wrote:
forgetmenot wrote:
"Hisao, look. You can thousands of stars out here."
I'm guessing you was suppose to add 'see' into that sentence.


Anyway, awesome chapter.
Fix'd. No matter how many times I proofread, there's always one or two things that slip through. :roll:
by forgetmenot
Fri Apr 26, 2013 3:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 99184

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao) [Updated 4/26]

Aaaaaaand, after two weeks, I'm back! Sorry about the lack of consistent updates. I'm taking more time with the chapters as we gear up for Act 3, which is coming up rather quickly! I want to make sure I don't mess anything up story-wise. Enjoy! Also, in case anyone's curious, this chapter officiall...
by forgetmenot
Thu Apr 25, 2013 10:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 13595

Re: Once More [Hisao x OC] [Update: 4/25]

"Isn't that right Katsuo? Right you are, Other-Katsuo."
Danger Zooooonnneeee
Now, I have to go back to frantically tearing through your story and shoving my feels into the bottom of my stomach.
You're too kind. :) Thanks for reading!
by forgetmenot
Thu Apr 25, 2013 6:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 13595

Re: Once More [Hisao x OC] [Update: 4/25]

Oh, shit. This just got interesting. Definitely one of the most unique OC fics I've ever read. I can't wait to see where you take it from here. He slaps his cards down in front of him and returns my steely gaze with a annoyed one of his own. Should be an . It takes me a little bit longer than most p...
by forgetmenot
Tue Apr 23, 2013 4:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 379360

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/23]

Breaker deGodot wrote:
Thanatos02 wrote:I asdfghkjlaksdhghf in an attempt to raise conversation.

...Dafuq is that?
That, my friend, is author's frustration embodied in its purest form.
by forgetmenot
Mon Apr 15, 2013 3:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sad Hanako in Snow
Replies: 11
Views: 4222

Re: Sad Hanako in Snow

I always enjoy cute little bite-sized oneshots that make me smile. Nice work. The snowman was a nice touch.
by forgetmenot
Mon Apr 15, 2013 1:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 10118

Re: A Painful Past (OC) Re-writing. (TEAoYaK #2 up)

I hate to be so blunt... but this really isn't a story. It's mostly just a collection of loosely related thoughts occurring over the course of what, 20 minutes? Nothing really happens. So what Shizune and Misha arrive at a vacation house? Is that supposed to shock, surprise, or seduce in some manner...
by forgetmenot
Mon Apr 15, 2013 1:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 99184

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao) [Updated 4/12]

CptSalsa wrote:Foot in mouth award for Hisao Nakai.
Per the usual. :wink:
by forgetmenot
Fri Apr 12, 2013 6:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 99184

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao) [Updated 4/12]

Now for a few homophones: "Stationary" means "not moving," while "stationery" is the noun referring to paper, envelopes and the like. "Coarse" is the adjective similar in meaning to "rough," and "course" is the action blood takes while inside your veins. Whoops. "Stationary" would be autocorrect sc...
by forgetmenot
Fri Apr 12, 2013 3:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 99184

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao) [Updated 4/12]

Sorry for the lack of updates this past week and a half. Took a week off for vacation. Anyhow, I'm back now. Enjoy! Scene 15: Near-Life Experience I slog through the rest of the afternoon, drained of what little energy I had earlier. Misha gives me a few concerned looks during English class; I gues...
by forgetmenot
Mon Apr 01, 2013 6:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 379360

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/1]