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by forgetmenot
Sat Jun 29, 2013 7:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 204682

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2

Dunno if this could be of any interest to you or anyone else frequenting this wretched hive of scum and villainy , but I hardly ever comment on works in progress beyond mentioning very basic or very big issues, since I feel I can't give good critique unless I'm looking at a finished product. You kn...
by forgetmenot
Mon Jun 24, 2013 9:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 99181

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 6/18]

Okay, I really liked this chapter. Your OC is so different from all the others. Glad you like it! Er, her. Honestly that's just sort of how she comes across in my head... it's weird how if you imagine enough backstory and behavioral idiosyncrasies for a character beforehand, they almost write thems...
by forgetmenot
Thu Jun 20, 2013 9:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 99181

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 6/18]

Wow, thanks everyone for the positive feedback! I'm really happy that y'all like it, considering the relatively high caliber of fanfiction that's associated with KS. Stay tuned! Your musical theme is possibly my favorite part of this. It's great, and reminded me that I really should start writing mo...
by forgetmenot
Thu Jun 20, 2013 9:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 51157

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 6/19

...so, how would one make the tires move while still being in place? Emergency brake? The car needs to be in gear and your foot needs to be off of the brake in order for the tires to move. Generally speaking, if the tires aren't very grippy, you can spin them by shifting into low gear and mashing t...
by forgetmenot
Tue Jun 18, 2013 11:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 99181

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao) [Updated 6/18]

Hey all! I can't believe it's been two months since the last update... I'm so sorry. Good news is this: I've been doing work on the story on and off, but between starting a new job and helping my SO get ready to move cross-country, it's all been a little haphazard. Thankfully, now, I'm able to star...
by forgetmenot
Tue Jun 18, 2013 4:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 379356

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/20]

Triscuitable wrote:Don't you mean sister?
I assumed she meant Shizune.
by forgetmenot
Wed Jun 12, 2013 8:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Of Arms, Legs, and Hooves
Replies: 15
Views: 4719

Re: Of Arms, Legs, and Hooves

griffon8 wrote:But I won't be reading it anyway. There are limits to what I can take in a crossover, and this goes waaaaaaay beyond that point.
Agreed. My disbelief is far to heavy to be suspended. At this rate, it'd collapse the brooklyn bridge if hung from the bottom.
by forgetmenot
Sun Jun 09, 2013 10:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 99181

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao) [Updated 4/26]

Wow, I am absolutely flattered! Sorry updates are coming so slow. I promise it's not deadfic! I'm getting a lot of legwork done so hopefully I can start on a weekly update schedule. Stay tuned!
by forgetmenot
Thu Jun 06, 2013 7:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 28465

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier

Holy moly! That's a lot of story for one post. Not that I'm criticizing; I'm guilty of the same thing once upon a time. Lucky for you it's very good. Honestly there's not much criticism I can offer up. Your writing is solid, your characterizations are well done, even if your Miki does seem like an a...
by forgetmenot
Wed Jun 05, 2013 10:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
Replies: 217
Views: 37078

Re: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku fics (Updated 6/3/13)

And nope, no porn from me. It'd probably end up sounding silly. Good. I seriously doubt porn would end up working in a story like this anyhow (as I've said in previous PMs). ...Honestly it doesn't really work anywhere, at least for me. There's something inherently un-sexy about reading a descriptio...
by forgetmenot
Wed Jun 05, 2013 1:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 26663

Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 5/26)

SemisoftCheese wrote:If you look at the info screen you can see its an extra.
I retcon everything I said and will slink back to my corner now. :oops:
by forgetmenot
Wed Jun 05, 2013 11:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 26663

Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 5/26)

Note: The below is just friendly advice. Feel free to disregard with extreme prejudice. I really, really, really think you should get an editor. Really, really. Here's why: Your writing, on its own, is very strong. You're a good writer, really. Your imagery is fantastic, and you write good dialog. Y...
by forgetmenot
Thu May 30, 2013 11:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 165499

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

pandaphil wrote:
Negativedarke wrote:
Nah. We all know Hanako's kink will be the worst of all. Consensual sex in the missionary posiston. That little Perv!

With the lights off. After lots of hugging and kissing. Trollop.
I bet she'd even have the gall to cuddle afterwards. Quite the brazen one, Hanako is.
by forgetmenot
Sun May 05, 2013 4:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 99181

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao) [Updated 4/26]

Hey y'all. While work is being done on the next few chapters, I must admit that I've been revising how I want some parts of the story to play out. Some of the revisions conflict with information I'd included in past chapters, so I thought I'd say that Scene 7 has been updated, nothing too major, but...
by forgetmenot
Sun May 05, 2013 3:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 26663

Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 5/5)

Two things: A bored expression on her face, she turns and surveys the classroom. She locks eyes with me, and gives a slight tilt of her head towards Mutou, a bemused smirk on her face. I give her an apologetic smile, and she winks at me, a bemused smile on her face as she faces front again. I walk t...